Armored Guardian Team

I fell silent at the end. I no longer had the playful smile and calm face I had when reading novels in the past. After reading it all at once, I don't know what to say and am speechless. People are indifferent and unfeeling. Relatives treat it as if it is nothing, and until the end (so far) there is not a single apology or a drop of tear. There is only endless disgust, contempt and denial of what he has done. Maybe it's because I was brought into this role that I wanted to cry several times! Tears filled my eyes, but they didn't fall in the end. (I hope the author can continue writing and give this desolate story a euphemistic ending!!)

Author, please keep updating. I want to know what happened next, who got the Zhuzhao Armor after that, whether the male protagonist's arm is healed, whether the male protagonist and his sister will reconcile, and whether the male protagonist will become a girl later.

I have an idea. You can have none of the protagonists join. Now everyone wants to take advantage of him. Why join two organizations? Both organizations wanted to take advantage of him. Isn't it good to be alone? Who hurts the people he wants to protect. And harming the protagonist himself. Just hit anyone. How nice! Of course not including his sister. What do you care about that sister?

I'm back, and I'm back with blackness. Goose goose goose

After reading more than 80 chapters, this novel made me sick from the moment the protagonist was captured by the dragon group. This part of the plot is adapted from the plot of the abusive heroine chasing his wife in the crematorium. It smells like a short story about selecting women. Originally, there are only two directions: 1. The protagonist's relatives take revenge and repent, and then the relationship is repaired, or the protagonist does not accept the confession. 2. The protagonist is resurrected and returns to take revenge. As a result, the protagonist's parents just regretted it and hypocritically yelled at the doctor to save the heroine, and nothing happened. Then the protagonist is resurrected and uses the routine of a reborn female partner. Even if the protagonist is resurrected and has a sex change, even if he is not a black man, he must be extremely disappointed with his relatives. Is it not painful enough to be whipped and electrocuted by the Dragon Group and chop off his hands? Other heroines in rebirth novels must have had their "love brain" long ago. As it turns out, the reason why the protagonist is resurrected and works hard to practice is not for revenge. Resurrection does not increase the brain. It is a series of silly and sweet operations. The most outrageous thing is that in more than eighty chapters, the protagonist's transformation is over, and his body is picked up by his relatives after being drunk. There are too many flaws. The protagonist was tortured because he fainted during the transformation battle and was sent back by the Dragon Team, forcing him to hand over the transformation device. How did the protagonist manage not to lose his memory? How did he manage to train on the set for more than a year, get drunk with five strange tattooed villains without any precautions, and pass out on the road to have his body picked up by his parents instead of looking for a safe place after his transformation? It was really full of flaws. Finally, the author uses armor as the subject matter, uses female-oriented writing, and adds gender change. Please don't use armor as the subject matter. After all, when the protagonist calls for armor to be combined, my mind is full of armored warriors with distinctive personalities. Don't insult the armor. The writing can get better later on if the writing is bad, but it's really sad that it has no logic, no perspective, and a brainless protagonist. Others' brainless protagonists are cool, and it's really cool. However, your many elements, which have no outstanding points, are all shortcomings. It's just disgusting. Do readers feel happy? Black fire is really not fire.

I originally read it for the dark side, but you showed me this. Author, you have masochistic tendencies, right?

The protagonist is a bit brainless and a virgin. The Dragon Team whipped him and cut off his hands, but he has no revenge at all, just because his family members work there? ? Also, please don't use words like "dragon group" that symbolize China. It's simply insulting. Generally speaking, this is like the entertainment industry in previous years, with sissies everywhere. You can write a tragedy, but don't make it so nonsensical. Make the conflicts between the characters more intense and bring out the tragedy of the protagonist. Don't comment if you don't like it, just my personal opinion

What a piece of shit! It's really just a piece of shit. If it hadn't been pushed to me at the beginning of the video, no dog would have read what you wrote!

Go dark, baby! People in the dragon group are not necessarily good people! Summoners will also shoot you! My parents are also heartless and unjust people! Readers can feel it! This is not the case if your parents are really good to you! I didn't even ask for help when I came back! And he also allowed his son to undergo such torture! What is this indifference! I just use that kind of hypocrisy to say how much I owe you and how much I want to do to you! I didn't see them make any moves! My son was at the garbage dump and it rained at night and he didn't even know to pick him up! And it was already known that he was seriously ill! I just got two hands chopped off! The Dragon Group didn't say anything about what to do with your future life. We, the Dragon Group, have paid for it! We are so sorry for the harm we have done to you! How can I make up for it in the future? What kind of treatment will I give you? The country didn't say anything and neither did the dragon group! They think a child is easy to bully! Parents are also indifferent, deceiving themselves and others! So does my sister! When I was a child, I always said that I wanted to do what I wanted! Oh! If you can't train and become stronger, then you'll give up on it! It feels awesome to be an armored warrior! I can't see my family clearly! All the proofs are that they are wrong! (Of course there is also the reason for the young age of the protagonist! But none of this can deny their ruthlessness! They want you to die! If the armor can't revive you, just GG instead of thinking about forgiving them here! As a modern person, if you were tortured and then ruthlessly abandoned after being useless, would you still have a good impression of them? I believe most people don't! ) (There is also the matter of the dragon group summoners shooting at you at the beginning! Are they inviting you to join? They are forcing you to join! If you don't join, they will steal your summoner!) "Anyway, this novel is full of arguments, and everyone's opinion makes sense! It feels like it could be made into a TV series, just like the first Armored Warrior! There are conflicts and intensification! The characters are all brought to life, and it's quite interesting to watch." It's very argumentative!

To be honest, the subject matter is good, and the level of hair cutting is also very good, but I hope that the relationship with Xia Qianxue will be as distant as possible in the future. If possible, I hope that the protagonist's parents will have less contact with the protagonist, otherwise it will feel too weak. Generally speaking, it's pretty good. The writing style needs to be improved. The content of each chapter should be as concise as possible. Descriptions and some irrelevant places can be selectively deleted. Don't make up the number of words just to make up the number of words. Of course, don't make a page with too few words. I just hope that in the future updates, I can post a few chapters together and it will be comfortable to read. Anyway, work harder! I hope this book will get better and better in the future.