Being in Tokyo, I Just Want Salted Fish

Having read so many books about Tokyo, this one is impressive both in terms of the use of language and the creation of characters. I could clearly feel the delicate psychological changes of the male and female protagonists. I felt the shyness and ignorance between childhood sweethearts, the reactions of family members to their romance, and learned about various Japanese cultures. I would like to make a small comment: In fact, based on the performance of the male protagonist, I feel that he should have been a high school student in his previous life, and he does not look like a social person. Come on, author, I hope you can continue to write so beautifully. Ps: I haven't finished watching it yet, but I'm continuing to watch it

The novel is generally good, but I don't know what the author thinks. The male protagonist is very scummy and confusing. First, he made a gay friend use his name to create a small account and add girls everywhere, and then gave the gay friend full authority to deal with it. He said that he would help reject other girls' confessions, and then he established an image of a scumbag in the school. This image eventually led to the female protagonist's best friend hating the male protagonist, but the male protagonist did not know why the other girl hated him. Then reading more than sixty chapters made me feel really uncomfortable, which made me feel even more that he was a scumbag. It was obvious that he had confessed to dating before, and the heroine also agreed. Then he said he didn't talk about it in school or even in front of his friends, and he didn't have much interaction with the heroine in school. From the descriptions of the male protagonist's friends, the female protagonist often peeks at the male protagonist and wants to have more contact with him. However, the male protagonist has not disclosed his dating status because he does not want to attract too much attention. It is really convincing. Is he a big star? Will falling in love be reported and attract the attention of the whole school? ? Shouldn't you be more concerned about the person you are dating? Shouldn't it give her more security? With the soft character of the heroine, she may not say anything, but I can guarantee that in reality, girls will definitely hope that their boyfriends can boldly announce their lovers' identities and hope to get more love from their lovers.

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Not to mention the novel's cliché setting, the protagonist's character is extremely unlikable and completely unattractive. Even if you write daily articles, you still have to have a main line. It feels like you are just writing randomly, and you just go where you want to go. The system tasks in the article feel extremely perfunctory, and the rewards obtained do not promote the development of the plot. It can be said that it is not suitable for entry at all, and the writing is not great. Some places are written in a way that makes the reader confused and unable to sort out his thoughts.

It's a very nice book. I like this type of book more, and the author's writing is pretty good. There are a lot of things in it. If the author wasn't a professional archer, I would have spent a long time researching them. It's very good, especially Hanabi. I like it very much. Good luck to the author

The author's writing style is not bad, and he describes the details of daily life and scenery very well. Writing the article can be a waste of time. However, there are some places that everyone thinks are a bit embarrassing. For example, if the protagonist's pronoun is changed to me, can it be changed? Another point is, if you often walk on the shore, can your shoes not get wet? Can you not always... Die at the critical moment! Be bold, okay? !

It's hard to imagine that the protagonist is a so-called social animal who has been reborn as an adult. With that kind of character, he feels like he was a waste in his previous life, so he joins the archery club and whether to quit the club or transfer to the kendo club later. Not only did he not consider the most appropriate thing to do, he kept struggling, and then constantly regretted it.

Personally, I feel that any female character has no merit, which deepens my dislike of love.

Just make it to thirty-one chapters! The back is full of dog food, so cheers to the author! Update me quickly and I will give you a monthly vote if it is updated!

I think the love plot between them is enough, but something is missing. At the beginning, the male protagonist got the Miyamoto Musashi card, which I thought he would use frequently later on, and there would be some fighting scenes, but in the end they didn't happen. I wish I could write out the value of this card rather than display it. The love story in this novel is very sweet. I think I am at least a little dissatisfied with other parts of the novel because the title of the novel is already limiting. If you want to be a salty fish, you have to give up a lot of things. Kendo has been five stages at the beginning and is still five stages now. The development is a bit too slow. What I am looking forward to is the plot of the sword competition. It may be a bit difficult to write but I still hope to see it. Hanabi's father is a policeman (let's put it this way), but Hanabi has never been threatened too much. Even if she is, the hero has nothing to do with it. Others have always dealt with it for him. I hope he can use his own power to save Hanabi once, so that the author can warm up their relationship. For example, when Hanabi is kidnapped, the hero goes to save Hanabi and uses his own power to bring hope to Hanabi. I think it will be better. Maybe other readers like Salted Fish Story, but I don't like it that much. Because watching too much love at night is not interesting, the author also said it in the novel, but I have a suggestion, you might as well put the focus on career. The author has always written that the male protagonist is poor. I hope he can work hard and fight for where he can. I also hope that Huo Huo's father can know the true strength of the male protagonist in a certain chapter. I look forward to the author's plot later. These are just personal comments and opinions. If the author thinks there is something wrong in what he wrote, you can correct me. After all, this is the author's book, and the author has his own purpose for writing it. (My personal knowledge is shallow and I am just a high school student. I feel that I can make use of my right opinions and forget about those that are wrong.)