I Was Mentally Ill and Was Selected to Participate in the Strange Rules Talk

The first half can be read as a mindless and enjoyable novel, with the mental illness entering the ghost story interspersed with the warmth line, which is an old traffic code. The second half gives up the attribute of mental illness, which is very exciting but not very exciting. It is not deep and deep. You can skip it when the protagonist's talent does not work. Of course, you can let everyone watch the growth of the protagonist, but the prerequisite is that the writing is sufficient. . It doesn't mean that there is enough foreshadowing and enough foreshadowing. . It's okay to want to transform, but at least make an outline in advance. . It's a bit stiff to turn Shuangwen into a long-term flow. Otherwise, why would readers who come here just for Shuangwang spend money to accompany the author's writing to grow. .

Finally found a good book. That's it. Being surrounded by Douluo, I was really convinced.

Author, take a look, 24 hours in a day is 86,400 seconds, and one word per second is 86,400 words. Author, you must have many manuscripts saved, please update soon.

There is a book with a plot that seems to be exactly the same as yours, but with fewer words and fewer chapters.

Why are there so few people on QQ? I hope more people can see such excellent works.

The author is simply a lunatic, and being able to write him so well means that the author has at least watched a lot of documentaries about mental patients and SpongeBob SquarePants.

When you poop once Then I would like to ask: "Is there one more person who poops in this world, or is there one less person who poops?" : "If you drink a glass of water, is there one more person in the world who has finished drinking the water, or is there one less person in the world who has finished drinking the water?" [Please don't watch it, otherwise you will lose your brain]😪😪😪

Note: I can be considered a writer. Although I don't publish books, I write a lot of short articles. The following comments only represent my personal preferences and opinions. Don't mess with me. The theme of the novel is very common nowadays. The rules are weird. The country of Long (China) has been at a disadvantage until the protagonist arrives, and then the protagonist comes on the scene and slaps all foreign countries in the face. The overall story is funny, with familiar anime and film characters, so just laugh and don't be too smart. There isn't much horror, it's just a bit disgusting, so don't watch it if you have low immunity. 😘 The first part was fine, but the further the character goes, the more deliberately the protagonist becomes a psychopath, losing the natural feeling before. If you want to create a mentally ill person, you shouldn't have an emotional line. It's not just torture that can be emotional. You are given a family member who brutally abused you before the family was torn apart. The protagonist must save him, and the process must be bumpy, but he must succeed in the end and win the sympathy of the audience. The rest of the plot is basically repetitive, relying solely on immortality and resisting erosion to pass the level. The barrage is a bit too frequent, and there is too much nonsense. I guess the content is mostly the author's praise and the word count. It is better to have a brief thought at the end of the chapter and talk more about my feelings. There are too many bad jokes in the plot that affect the viewing experience, and there are emojis (this is this ʘ‿ʘ). In fact, the emojis are good and more vivid than pure text, but there are too many, and the text is very messy, which makes me doubt that the author's writing style cannot reproduce the image in his mind, so I chose emojis to omit this part. And the author chose to publish it without considering the audience who like to listen to novels? A bunch of garbled characters are heard every few minutes, which seriously affects the listening experience. The last thing is the creation of the supporting characters, it's like the same soul in different bodies The above is my evaluation. It is my habit to write long paragraphs with periods. Thank you😅 (If you get angry after reading this, then all I can say is, whoever has the hot pepper, take it away from me)

I don't dare to let anyone say it, tsk tsk, it's really great.

The first sixty or seventy chapters were fine, and it was a lot of fun to write, but as it went on, it felt like the main character was deliberately mentally ill, and it didn't have the natural feeling that it had at the beginning. And if you're writing about mental illness for fun, don't be sensational. I feel sick when I see this kind of plot.