Don't Mess with Senior Brother
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Ye Yu traveled to the Tianxuan Continent where hundreds of tribes abounded and power was respected. He accidentally awakened the burial system and could see the countdown to the death of others. As long as he collected and buried people's bodies, he would be rewarded. Armor penetration, blood-sucking, toughness, critical strike, counterattack, combo, dodge, and understanding. When the eight special attributes are stacked to a certain height, he has no enemies in the world and can overlook the rise and fall of the people. However, there was a problem that he needed to solve right now. It is the normal state of the world for people to die eventually, but what if the sun also has its death date? Just when Ye Yu was puzzled, the master accepted a little junior sister for him. ------I am the heart of my master. I don't know why, but I can hear the voice of my senior brother. However, being able to hear other people's voices may not be a good thing, especially when the other person is stronger than you. For example, I have to be careful not to be exposed at all times, lest I be killed and silenced. Heed my advice, don't mess with your senior brother. He looks generous on the surface, but he is actually very cruel. If you dare to mess with him, he will bury you!
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The fleeting year--[Winter Wind]!
┄ The winter wind is like a cleaner! When the wind blew, all the yellow leaves on the trees were blown away. It blows onto the river and becomes a quilt for fish. It blew into the cave and became a cradle for ants. It blows into the grass and becomes a meal for insects! The east wind follows the west wind, and the leaves of the trees are empty. The plum blossoms cannot be blown away, but they still embrace the new red. The winter wind, the cold wind is blowing! The bare trees look like bald old men! Unable to withstand the northwest wind, swaying in the cold wind Winter wind, let me thank you! Because of you, I put on soft cotton clothes The winter wind blows open the plum blossoms, and the snow is shining like diamonds in the sun. How relaxing? There are plum blossoms to break in the snow on the other side of the bridge. Every time it passes by, it wakes up the sleeping snow ┄ The cold wind moves the earth's air and the green light blows horizontally. The sadness first comes out of the fortress. The winter wind is like an indifferent sister! She waved her sleeves and the earth immediately turned white. All the people walking on the street said nothing, only wrapped their clothes tightly and shivered! The winter wind is more ruthless than snow! Because it's everywhere The northwest wind roars fiercely like a lion! Mixed with dead branches and dust, it brings the icy and snowy winter. This is the winter wind. The winter wind blew far and near, blowing through the outer clothes and penetrating into the inner clothes, making the body gradually feel cold and making the body shiver! Even the bones feel pain Walking in the streets and alleys, I let the howling wind blow over my face or rest on my face. Although the wind is biting, I love this winter wind. Everywhere you go, stop and look before you go again ┄ The road to rest is not a dead end, and it is not possible to get lost without relief. On the independent river, the north wind blows. The winter wind quietly scatters snowflakes on the ground, roofs, trees, and mountaintops. They quietly put on white sweaters, and the animals quietly sleep. The wind pushes the snowflakes and have fun with the children! They made snowmen and played together, listening to the howling of the winter wind. The winter wind is biting and cold. The plum blossoms are blooming in the wind! The wind makes it stronger. The wind blew snowflakes all over the sky and fell to the ground, as if the earth was covered with a white quilt! People wearing all kinds of thick clothes were jumping and playing on the quilt The wind blows, although there is only a slight breeze, but this wind seems to gather all the coldness of winter together. Sprinkle it in the face of everyone it meets! On the neck! On my hands... My hair, which had been scared to the ground for a long time, was trembling in the wind! It seems like it feels cold too ┈ The fortress is bitter and cold, and the wind is bad. When you return, your face will be wrinkled and you will have spots on your eyebrows. Winter wind, winter sun, winter snow, and winter ice are the most perfect combination! They complete the whole winter The winter wind makes the weather extremely cold! The north wind blew heavy snow all over the sky. Dad said: Without the north wind in winter, there would be no cold current, there would be no cold, and there would be no way to freeze pests to death. Therefore, the cold wind is the soul of winter, and everything in the world has its reason for existence. The winter wind, like a brush, whitens the whole world. Mountains, rivers, rivers and lakes are soft and slippery when you walk on them, and the creaking and squeaking sounds gradually fade away. ┄ Sleeping in the cold furnace, the wine is half gone, the guest's love and dreams of hometown are far away No one sharpens my sword for me, and cuts off every inch of sadness in my heart The cold and ruthless winter wind, watching the monsoon twist the withered yellow leaves, and send autumn away with heavy footsteps. Winter has arrived, ushering in the first ray of bone-crushing winter cold. The harsh wind has blown away the lingering warmth on the street. Walking against the wind, there is nowhere to hide. Winter wind, woo... Woo... Every day and night, sometimes like whispering, sometimes like singing, sometimes like roaring! Showing its ubiquity, drilling into every hole Huh... Huh... The strong wind is howling, and the big and small trees are swaying! The branches are like wildly dancing whips, moving, swaying, and swaying with the wind... It's daunting. ┄ At dusk, the mountains are far away, the weather is cold and the white houses are poor. When Chai Men heard the loud bark, he returned home on a snowy night. The winter wind, like a sculptor, uses snow to shape a world of ice crystals in various shapes! It is like a ruthless painter, using his cold brush to paint a snow-white and silent picture. It is like an indomitable warrior, giving people a cold and tough sense of strength! Scare people The winter wind seems to freeze time and the earth wherever it passes. What you see is always a piece of crystal white. Watching the rime by the Songhua River. 2023.12.31.
After watching it for a while, I would like to make some suggestions. I hope you don't like it and don't criticize it. First of all, how awesome and invincible the male protagonist is can be used to identify stallions, harems, and CPs. I really want to have a heroine who is destined to be the protagonist. It would be nice to have more emotional scenes that are not brainless. There is no need to forcefully add a heroine, especially the kind where other women chase after her. The male protagonist also just accepts it as acquiescence, which is actually the most uncomfortable. You seem to have described how much the female protagonist loves the male protagonist, but in fact, you have not written any emotional lines, so just focus on acquiescence. This kind of emotional line seems to me to be a bit lazy. Of course, it doesn't matter if it's a cool novel or it's spicy when you're fantasizing, I'm just writing a little novel. The second point is that although it is a system flow, it seems that the combat power is indeed a bit broken at present. The system can be used, but the combat power should not be too outrageous. Although it is fun, the world view will be very collapsed and it will become more difficult to write later. Of course, if the author wants to write a short article, it can be treated as if I didn't say anything. Finally, this book is worth reading so far. It is highly recommended. It's just a bit short. If you don't like the short plot, you can put it in your favorites and wait and see. It won't be too late to come back.
The character design of Senior Sister Xia is really bad. I hope the author can strengthen it in the later stage and rely on the past life of Mo Caihuan in the Mortal Cultivation of Immortality. Also, don't start a harem randomly. I feel that the author has this tendency. And writing a romantic drama at the age of 11 really makes me reject it.
Rotten is inevitable
I have been reading this book since he started writing light novels. This book had very good results at the time and was recommended a lot. However, when he started to mess with it and skipped the growth of the junior sister, I posted a book review saying that it was not good to write like this and it deviated from the main line. As a result, I was blocked and banned. At that time, I knew that the collapse was inevitable. Your last book had a heroine that failed, but you were able to forcefully change it, and you were willing to change it, and you were willing to put in the effort. This is why I am optimistic about you, and this is also the reason why your previous book was successful. As for this book, it is true that there are many recommendations. It is understandable that you ask someone to review it, but if you don't even listen to reasonable suggestions and just cover your mouth, if you fail in writing, you will only continue to fail. It was also at that time that I thought that if you don't change, your future writing will definitely not go smoothly. As expected, two books collapsed in a row. Hey, listen to your advice. Readers spend real money to support you. Regardless of whether you accept or not, you must listen to some suggestions.
To be honest, the writing style is really not good enough. There is a lot of nonsense, and good writing also requires refined language. It is too wordy.
Will he be with his junior sister? Or will it be a single-male story?
The author's imagination is great, the story setting is quite interesting, and I quite approve of the author's shaping of the protagonist and the characters around the protagonist. It gave me a long-lost sense of anticipation for pursuing fantasy novels. If the quality remains the same, I will continue to follow it. I also have a few suggestions, just for reference. I personally think that the biggest attraction of this story is that only the protagonist knows the end of the world, and then goes to reveal the process of this event. It should also be the main line of the story. I hope the author can make each large chapter more closely related to this main line. There can be some grass-gray snake threads buried in these chapters. This will enhance the reader's perception a lot. For example, the battle against Zhentian Dragon Emperor is really cool. It also fully demonstrates the power of the protagonist, but I don't feel that it has anything to do with the main plot. It's a bit like reading for the sake of pleasure. Although it is indeed a refreshing article, in this era of highly involution of online articles, reading for the sake of pleasure is not advisable. Of course, if it is later discovered that the author has a superb technique and has buried threads that I did not see in these large chapters that I feel have nothing to do with the main plot, then I will give you a thumbs up and a thumbs up.
What the hell? There are more than 200 endings. If I still want to purchase a membership, what's the point of signing up for this membership? [Emot=default,41/]
The dog has no shit to eat. It starts charging after 20 chapters. What platform?
Pity! The author had no inspiration and it ended up being a mess.
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The fleeting year--[Winter Wind]!
┄ The winter wind is like a cleaner! When the wind blew, all the yellow leaves on the trees were blown away. It blows onto the river and becomes a quilt for fish. It blew into the cave and became a cradle for ants. It blows into the grass and becomes a meal for insects! The east wind follows the west wind, and the leaves of the trees are empty. The plum blossoms cannot be blown away, but they still embrace the new red. The winter wind, the cold wind is blowing! The bare trees look like bald old men! Unable to withstand the northwest wind, swaying in the cold wind Winter wind, let me thank you! Because of you, I put on soft cotton clothes The winter wind blows open the plum blossoms, and the snow is shining like diamonds in the sun. How relaxing? There are plum blossoms to break in the snow on the other side of the bridge. Every time it passes by, it wakes up the sleeping snow ┄ The cold wind moves the earth's air and the green light blows horizontally. The sadness first comes out of the fortress. The winter wind is like an indifferent sister! She waved her sleeves and the earth immediately turned white. All the people walking on the street said nothing, only wrapped their clothes tightly and shivered! The winter wind is more ruthless than snow! Because it's everywhere The northwest wind roars fiercely like a lion! Mixed with dead branches and dust, it brings the icy and snowy winter. This is the winter wind. The winter wind blew far and near, blowing through the outer clothes and penetrating into the inner clothes, making the body gradually feel cold and making the body shiver! Even the bones feel pain Walking in the streets and alleys, I let the howling wind blow over my face or rest on my face. Although the wind is biting, I love this winter wind. Everywhere you go, stop and look before you go again ┄ The road to rest is not a dead end, and it is not possible to get lost without relief. On the independent river, the north wind blows. The winter wind quietly scatters snowflakes on the ground, roofs, trees, and mountaintops. They quietly put on white sweaters, and the animals quietly sleep. The wind pushes the snowflakes and have fun with the children! They made snowmen and played together, listening to the howling of the winter wind. The winter wind is biting and cold. The plum blossoms are blooming in the wind! The wind makes it stronger. The wind blew snowflakes all over the sky and fell to the ground, as if the earth was covered with a white quilt! People wearing all kinds of thick clothes were jumping and playing on the quilt The wind blows, although there is only a slight breeze, but this wind seems to gather all the coldness of winter together. Sprinkle it in the face of everyone it meets! On the neck! On my hands... My hair, which had been scared to the ground for a long time, was trembling in the wind! It seems like it feels cold too ┈ The fortress is bitter and cold, and the wind is bad. When you return, your face will be wrinkled and you will have spots on your eyebrows. Winter wind, winter sun, winter snow, and winter ice are the most perfect combination! They complete the whole winter The winter wind makes the weather extremely cold! The north wind blew heavy snow all over the sky. Dad said: Without the north wind in winter, there would be no cold current, there would be no cold, and there would be no way to freeze pests to death. Therefore, the cold wind is the soul of winter, and everything in the world has its reason for existence. The winter wind, like a brush, whitens the whole world. Mountains, rivers, rivers and lakes are soft and slippery when you walk on them, and the creaking and squeaking sounds gradually fade away. ┄ Sleeping in the cold furnace, the wine is half gone, the guest's love and dreams of hometown are far away No one sharpens my sword for me, and cuts off every inch of sadness in my heart The cold and ruthless winter wind, watching the monsoon twist the withered yellow leaves, and send autumn away with heavy footsteps. Winter has arrived, ushering in the first ray of bone-crushing winter cold. The harsh wind has blown away the lingering warmth on the street. Walking against the wind, there is nowhere to hide. Winter wind, woo... Woo... Every day and night, sometimes like whispering, sometimes like singing, sometimes like roaring! Showing its ubiquity, drilling into every hole Huh... Huh... The strong wind is howling, and the big and small trees are swaying! The branches are like wildly dancing whips, moving, swaying, and swaying with the wind... It's daunting. ┄ At dusk, the mountains are far away, the weather is cold and the white houses are poor. When Chai Men heard the loud bark, he returned home on a snowy night. The winter wind, like a sculptor, uses snow to shape a world of ice crystals in various shapes! It is like a ruthless painter, using his cold brush to paint a snow-white and silent picture. It is like an indomitable warrior, giving people a cold and tough sense of strength! Scare people The winter wind seems to freeze time and the earth wherever it passes. What you see is always a piece of crystal white. Watching the rime by the Songhua River. 2023.12.31.
After watching it for a while, I would like to make some suggestions. I hope you don't like it and don't criticize it. First of all, how awesome and invincible the male protagonist is can be used to identify stallions, harems, and CPs. I really want to have a heroine who is destined to be the protagonist. It would be nice to have more emotional scenes that are not brainless. There is no need to forcefully add a heroine, especially the kind where other women chase after her. The male protagonist also just accepts it as acquiescence, which is actually the most uncomfortable. You seem to have described how much the female protagonist loves the male protagonist, but in fact, you have not written any emotional lines, so just focus on acquiescence. This kind of emotional line seems to me to be a bit lazy. Of course, it doesn't matter if it's a cool novel or it's spicy when you're fantasizing, I'm just writing a little novel. The second point is that although it is a system flow, it seems that the combat power is indeed a bit broken at present. The system can be used, but the combat power should not be too outrageous. Although it is fun, the world view will be very collapsed and it will become more difficult to write later. Of course, if the author wants to write a short article, it can be treated as if I didn't say anything. Finally, this book is worth reading so far. It is highly recommended. It's just a bit short. If you don't like the short plot, you can put it in your favorites and wait and see. It won't be too late to come back.
The character design of Senior Sister Xia is really bad. I hope the author can strengthen it in the later stage and rely on the past life of Mo Caihuan in the Mortal Cultivation of Immortality. Also, don't start a harem randomly. I feel that the author has this tendency. And writing a romantic drama at the age of 11 really makes me reject it.
Rotten is inevitable
I have been reading this book since he started writing light novels. This book had very good results at the time and was recommended a lot. However, when he started to mess with it and skipped the growth of the junior sister, I posted a book review saying that it was not good to write like this and it deviated from the main line. As a result, I was blocked and banned. At that time, I knew that the collapse was inevitable. Your last book had a heroine that failed, but you were able to forcefully change it, and you were willing to change it, and you were willing to put in the effort. This is why I am optimistic about you, and this is also the reason why your previous book was successful. As for this book, it is true that there are many recommendations. It is understandable that you ask someone to review it, but if you don't even listen to reasonable suggestions and just cover your mouth, if you fail in writing, you will only continue to fail. It was also at that time that I thought that if you don't change, your future writing will definitely not go smoothly. As expected, two books collapsed in a row. Hey, listen to your advice. Readers spend real money to support you. Regardless of whether you accept or not, you must listen to some suggestions.
To be honest, the writing style is really not good enough. There is a lot of nonsense, and good writing also requires refined language. It is too wordy.
Will he be with his junior sister? Or will it be a single-male story?
The author's imagination is great, the story setting is quite interesting, and I quite approve of the author's shaping of the protagonist and the characters around the protagonist. It gave me a long-lost sense of anticipation for pursuing fantasy novels. If the quality remains the same, I will continue to follow it. I also have a few suggestions, just for reference. I personally think that the biggest attraction of this story is that only the protagonist knows the end of the world, and then goes to reveal the process of this event. It should also be the main line of the story. I hope the author can make each large chapter more closely related to this main line. There can be some grass-gray snake threads buried in these chapters. This will enhance the reader's perception a lot. For example, the battle against Zhentian Dragon Emperor is really cool. It also fully demonstrates the power of the protagonist, but I don't feel that it has anything to do with the main plot. It's a bit like reading for the sake of pleasure. Although it is indeed a refreshing article, in this era of highly involution of online articles, reading for the sake of pleasure is not advisable. Of course, if it is later discovered that the author has a superb technique and has buried threads that I did not see in these large chapters that I feel have nothing to do with the main plot, then I will give you a thumbs up and a thumbs up.
What the hell? There are more than 200 endings. If I still want to purchase a membership, what's the point of signing up for this membership? [Emot=default,41/]
The dog has no shit to eat. It starts charging after 20 chapters. What platform?
Pity! The author had no inspiration and it ended up being a mess.
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[Relatively Invincible·Eunuch] The story of fighting monsters and upgrading in the early stage is omitted. The starting strength is only one level away from the highest level. Goldfinger can see the lifespan of others and finds that everyone's lifespan is no more than 25 years (I forgot about 50 years). A catastrophe is about to strike, and the lifespan of the master's new junior sister is??? The junior sister can eavesdrop on the protagonist's voice. The story unfolds like this.
500,000 words have been updated Recommendation level: 4.1-4.6 Seedlings, so far, is very good-looking. The title sounds like Di Huawen, but it is actually a pseudo-invincible style. It is very exciting and has a good IQ. The protagonist can see other people's death dates and gain strength by collecting corpses. Advantages: It's refreshing, relaxed and interesting, and the characters' IQs are okay. Disadvantages: The characterization is relatively thin, and there are many psychological descriptions, but it is very one-sided. The plot is satisfying, but the plot is heavily clichéd and sometimes awkward. The writing is average.
A very interesting new book, Seedlings, which is very smooth to read. (Update: The author collapsed later) ---- Ye Yu traveled to the Tianxuan Continent where hundreds of tribes abounded and power was respected. He accidentally awakened the burial system and could see the countdown to the death of others. As long as he collected and buried people's bodies, he would be rewarded. Armor penetration, blood-sucking, toughness, critical strike, counterattack, combo, dodge, and understanding. When the eight special attributes are stacked to a certain height, he has no enemies in the world and can overlook the rise and fall of the people. However, there was a problem that he needed to solve right now. It is the normal state of the world for people to die eventually, but what if the sun also has its death date? Just when Ye Yu was puzzled, the master accepted a little junior sister for him. ------I am the heart of my master. I don't know why, but I can hear the voice of my senior brother. However, being able to hear other people's voices may not be a good thing, especially when the other person is stronger than you. For example, I have to be careful not to be exposed at all times, lest I be killed and silenced. Heed my advice, don't mess with your senior brother. He looks generous on the surface, but he is actually very cruel. If you dare to mess with him, he will bury you!
At first, I thought it was just another routine article, but after reading it, I found it to be unexpectedly interesting. It can be regarded as an excellent book.
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