Hell Games: Starting in Metropolis

The plot is okay, but this timeline is a bit too outrageous, what? Do you really plan to reach the full level in Novice Village? The key to strengthening many things cannot be brought out of the dungeon, and you can extend the time set by the game at will? You are not afraid that the game will no longer want you. It will assume that you have not completed the task and will leave you in the metropolis. Everyone has a time limit. If you exceed the time and do not make money, you have not made money. It is impossible to keep dragging you. What if I send you to a relatively safe dungeon next time? What if you can't leave there?

The pacing is really messed up, and the first act was quite uncomfortable to watch. You can just make a symbolic statement. Or you can simply come in and out at any time, because readers also need a relaxed pace. Change your mood. Reduce the aesthetic fatigue of the scene and story, and enhance the freshness of the follow-up through similar dungeon doors. At present, it seems that the protagonist and the person in the later period should be all-round. I also hope the author has a clue. The protagonist can be a human being in all aspects, but the reader cannot be a human being in all aspects. It is difficult to replace some lines if they are lost.

This copy is a bit too long.

It took me 959 minutes to read more than 200 chapters of this book so far. Overall, it is quite good, but it is a bit frustrating to read from the perspective of the protagonist. I have been reading it for the past three days and cannot stop. At the same time, my sanity level has been plummeting. I feel like I am gradually understanding everything, hehe.

When I first ate it, the meat was juicy and juicy, but I couldn't finish it. The more I ate, the greasier it became. It was a good piece of meat, the oil was just right, and the salt taste was moderate. But my wife was too old to eat it, and she was so tired that she felt like vomiting. Of course, I'm just talking about barbecue.

There is more and more nonsense, always in the same place, the end of one chapter is dragging on and it is another 10 chapters

The most valuable piece of equipment right now is the Supreme Speaker's notebook.

The rhythm feels very problematic. Either you just go through time and don't do any newbie dungeons, or you just control the rhythm. Since it is a dungeon stream, everyone will look forward to the rewards after the dungeon ends from the beginning, and sometimes there will be an end. Do normal people play one copy of the game for a year? Looking at the panic in my heart

Aha! This is 1.6 Million words long, why is it still in the first copy? Is this timeline obsolete? Main world, table world, inner world, what do you plan to do with the time difference between these three?

The further you go, the worse it gets. I vomited a copy and wrote 500 chapters. The thing is that one routine after another keeps triggering tasks just like playing a game. It can't go smoothly once.