Take Charge of the Five Thunders and Two Worlds

Originally, I wrote quite well in the early stage, but after writing more than 40 chapters, I actually brought a strange old Taoist priest to another world. I don't know if the author drank too much or if he changed people. As long as the travel between two worlds is done in a group, basically the novel will have no good results, because traveling between two worlds is a high-level secret that can only be kept to yourself, just like Goldfinger. Which protagonist do you think is talking about Goldfinger everywhere? If you bring outsiders into another world, you are exposing your golden finger. In this world, only one person knows the secret. As long as the second person knows it, your matter is over. Don't think about any secrets. This novel is destined to be ruined.

I was really looking forward to this novel about two worlds by the author. I had read the author's Seal of Two Worlds before and thought it was very good. I thought this book would be even better, but after reading dozens of chapters, the author suddenly became addicted. Start taking others with you through time travel. The protagonist's golden fingers and abilities were hidden even from his parents and relatives, but he ended up sharing them with an old Taoist priest who had only met him twice, and would later share them with others. What on earth were you thinking about writing this kind of plot? The protagonist's parents gave birth to him and raised him, and in the end he was given a long life. But the old Taoist priest who had only met twice complimented the protagonist a few words, and the protagonist took him to become an immortal, right?

Newcomers can fall into the trap, but seniors should not fall into the trap, it is too poisonous. I'm really convinced. This novel is so poisonous to me.

You can't walk when you see a woman. What everyone wants to see is the reselling of the two worlds, the cultural differences, and the battle of skills to kill ghosts. I was convinced by writing about a bunch of incomprehensible women.

Because I like Taoism and time travel, I had to read it. They are all the author's private goods. It's disgusting. I can't write about slaying demons and slaying demons properly. I open a harem every day.

I abandoned it after seeing Chapter 40. Isn't time travel the biggest secret? Are you sharing this secret with others?

Chapter 8 started to become rz🤗A few normal people would say that, it's like there's a missing string in the brain

I originally read it because of the author's previous book Gu Long. I didn't expect the difference to be so big. I don't recommend it.

Let's continue writing about Jin Yong's world. Gu Long's writing is so good, but what he's writing now is really boring.

It's this kind of bad guy who pretends to be a holy mother and likes to show off in front of others. It's written in a very embarrassing and stupid way.