Faders at Hogwarts

I haven't read the main text, but the introduction is wrong. The faded ones are people (creatures?) Who have lost their blessings, and they have nothing to do with the return, the brave, and so on. Plus, the setting behind it to set off the protagonist... Is quite poisonous.

An excellent work in Harry Potter fan fiction... The Dark Lord arranged a summoning task, which was outsourced by pure bloods. The final task was in the hands of a bad goblin, so he summoned the protagonist who was a faded person in the old man's ring... Therefore, the protagonist had no idea about the plot. Because he was an outlaw in the original world, he suddenly arrived in a peaceful world with a different power system, which naturally conflicts with the original three views... Plus this Compared with the original world, the destructive power of magic in this world is very weak, but it has more tricks... The characteristics of this article are the conflicts caused by different views and the boredom of the protagonist... The final goal is to find out about the Dark Lord and decide to replace him... In the middle, the protagonist was identified as non-human and was regarded as a walking paper by Snape, and Voldemort's notebook was beaten to only a piece of paper through illegal means of fraud and beatings. He also occupied Slytherin's secret room and found the diadem while chasing down a piece of leftover paper. Because he didn't understand the history, he thought this thing was only known to Voldemort, so he took it out in public to see who would react to identify Voldemort. Out of boredom, he transformed the secret room into a labyrinth of the old man's ring, stuffed dump trucks and other monsters to torture Voldemort. As a result, Harry and his team took the blame, and Voldemort, who was left with a piece of paper, used up all his savings. The Puzzled Twins purchased an army that was said to have been transformed by magic in an attempt to make a comeback. However, they were defrauded into buying a lot of transformed kangaroos. The defrauded money was also used by the seller to pay the final payment of the transaction with the protagonist... And so on, invincible, joyful, whimsical... The shortcoming is that it is too out-of-the-box and too powerful, too exaggerated, and they just mess around. The plot of killing people and resurrecting the ruined king is simply a disaster in this kind of story. Not to mention that another old ringed character was forcibly inserted to oppose the protagonist, and the portrayal was not very good... Because of this, I completely let myself go in the end. It's anticlimactic, but at least it's not long-winded and only has 200 chapters.

It's a mess, and it's obviously the author's hot-headed attempt to seize valuables stitched together by the flow of traffic.

After reading the text, I feel that the author does not understand the background setting of the Magic Circle. I can accept some typos based on the in-game research. However, the setting of the Magic Academy is already very complete based on the in-game text alone. Why can there be errors here?

One of the few masterpieces, humorous

The early writing was really good, and the writing was full of laughs and readability, but once the protagonist attacked the Ministry of Magic in the middle, the plot became strange and abrupt. . The novel ends with the conclusion that the main character was affected by epilepsy and his personality changed drastically, which is logical. However, the problem is that from the attack on the Ministry of Magic to the end, the middle section takes up more than half of the page. The author only enforces logic in the final chapter. This creates a problem. As a reader, how can you stick to the finale?

Do you know all these people🤔(„ಡωಡ„) especially the one who doesn't have a comparison picture?

Fader, which circle is this? I don't know much about it, but I can make some guesses. The content is really interesting. I highly recommend the ending and it doesn't feel rushed. The ending is from Harry Potter's perspective. I highly recommend the author's new book to be a must-read.

In view of the comments from many book friends that the performance of the three-week game is too weak, the setting is now changed to a half-week game. Personally, I originally set the three-week game because I don't like to level up when playing in the magic circle, and I always lose hundreds of thousands of runes when defeating monsters. In the first game, I played Valkyrie at level 100. In the second and third game, I was only around level 200. I only did single events but never passed the water bucket. Now, in the five-week game, I am still in the 50s and 60s in three dimensions, and more than 70s in individual events. I think it's quite useful... So, when setting the protagonist, I didn't set it as a bucket number. How many levels do you need to level up the 3rd round water bucket? Do you really know how to play 300 hours of 3rd round in the magic ring? I'm only 180 now... Secondly, the main reason why the protagonist's early performance was not overwhelming is because the setting has entered the body of an ordinary person and requires the collection of magic props again. But now it seems that my explanation in the book is not very clear, or most people don't like this setting. For the rest of my dissatisfaction, I can only say that my ability is limited and I cannot write it out. I can only guarantee that I personally will not feel uncomfortable or aggrieved by the things that happen to the protagonist.

The beginning is pretty good, the writing is okay, the ending is a little sloppy, but overall it has no impact.