Carlos' Candlelight Dinner

To be honest, I feel that the writing is really not as good as Netheril. This book gives me the feeling that a brave man leads a group of friends to save the world. The more you read it, the more exciting it will be. It will feel like the routines are the same. The protagonist's halo is simply invincible. Of course, I don't think there's anything wrong with turning on the halo. I'm not saying this book is particularly bad, I'm just saying that I really hope the author writes another Netherese book like that. The world view and power system of Netheril are great. And to be honest, I think the combat system of this book is too ordinary. When I saw the protagonist's power, I was reminded of Accelerator's ability in the Forbidden Magical Catalog. Of course, that doesn't mean you can't imitate the Infinity system, but I feel like this book just tells a bland story about a legendary figure. Maybe everyone has their own preference for radish and green vegetables, but I can't see this type. I don't know if I can wait any longer for the author to write another book like Netheril.

As a result, I made a first release! Still five stars! There was no one in the comment section of your book at that time! Let me liven it up for you! You even deleted it! Okay, cruel enough!

I would also like to read a book in the same genre as The Splendor of Nethalel.

But Shinra Tianzheng can also use gravity to disperse matter and attract it outwards. Regarding using science to explain superpowers, be more rigorous or don't use science to explain it.

You can correct typos and make the paragraph flow more smoothly. Sometimes details matter.

But because your book The Splendor of Netheril was well written, I gave you a five-star review. I hope that after you finish this book, you can write another novel similar to The Splendor of Netheril. Thank you author!

The author's writing is good, but his abilities are not developed enough. Everyone's abilities are invincible, but they are developed in such a bad way. For example, the protagonist's gravity, normally speaking, there are two ways, one is to go through the micro-level, and the other is to go through the macro. The microscopic one is to control atoms and reach the level of creation. The other macroscopic one is to interfere with the gravity between planets and achieve the ability to destroy the world. The source of gravity is mass. There is a massive star under the protagonist's feet, but he doesn't know how to use it. Alas, it really doesn't work. You can use gravity to purify uranium ore and trigger a fission reaction.

It can be seen that Cardinal Sheehan was a good person. It would be a pity if someone who lied just died like this in order to prevent his wife from worrying.

Just because of your cover, I will add it to my bookshelf. What a coincidence? ʘᴗʘ

Why are some of the comments exactly the same?