Lords and War
About This Novel
As a son of a commoner, will the war between lords and lords become dull, or will it set off a magnificent tide? New work by a newcomer, please collect it!
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Official(23)Scraped 5d ago
Chunfeng is still a student and is approaching the end of the semester, so I am currently updating once a day. Chunfeng is very sorry for this, but once the winter vacation comes, there will naturally be more updates. To be honest, this is the first time Chunfeng has written a book. I didn't expect anyone to read it, but I'm actually very happy. Finally, thank you all readers for your support. I won't ask for votes. I hope you all enjoy reading it😜
Let me give you a piece of advice.
As the same author, I would like to give you a piece of advice. In the first three chapters (I have only read three chapters), the protagonist is too useless. The reason for this is the problem of the protagonist's character. Is this rebirth a rebirth? I think it is because after death, the person did not drink Meng Po soup to remove the memory. This is clearly a new life, conceived in ten months, but he was born with the knowledge that he was a born prodigy. This book wants to be popular, popular, and earn more than 10,000 yuan a month. The age of the protagonist should be changed to about 15 to 20 years old. This is a reasonable starting point. Readers read it in order to take on the role of the protagonist, and your protagonist is a baby from the beginning, which really puts most people off. The second point is that a problem must be solved within three chapters, and this problem must reflect the character of the protagonist, either wisdom or the use of current civilization to change this backward era. Okay, excuse me, I'm not saying your writing is not good, I'm just suggesting it. Writing online is not easy, but you have to practice it and cherish it, come on!
I see potential in this novel. Don't give up. I hope the plot progress will be a little faster. I want to see the development of the territory.
Very potential
The Way of a Writer ~ It's a long road, come on, inspire inspiration in life and details, and achieve greater success!
Can
The writing is pretty good, I'll give you a little star.
very good
The book is great, but the update is very slow.
I've read a few chapters, it's a bit like the medieval chapter of City Sims
Make a suggestion
Since it's a medieval theme, shouldn't the village be dirty? Why doesn't it look dirty at all in the description?
very good
Please update the author 2 times a day It's getting more uncomfortable every day
Hope it becomes popular.
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Community(0)
Official(23)Scraped 5d ago
Chunfeng is still a student and is approaching the end of the semester, so I am currently updating once a day. Chunfeng is very sorry for this, but once the winter vacation comes, there will naturally be more updates. To be honest, this is the first time Chunfeng has written a book. I didn't expect anyone to read it, but I'm actually very happy. Finally, thank you all readers for your support. I won't ask for votes. I hope you all enjoy reading it😜
Let me give you a piece of advice.
As the same author, I would like to give you a piece of advice. In the first three chapters (I have only read three chapters), the protagonist is too useless. The reason for this is the problem of the protagonist's character. Is this rebirth a rebirth? I think it is because after death, the person did not drink Meng Po soup to remove the memory. This is clearly a new life, conceived in ten months, but he was born with the knowledge that he was a born prodigy. This book wants to be popular, popular, and earn more than 10,000 yuan a month. The age of the protagonist should be changed to about 15 to 20 years old. This is a reasonable starting point. Readers read it in order to take on the role of the protagonist, and your protagonist is a baby from the beginning, which really puts most people off. The second point is that a problem must be solved within three chapters, and this problem must reflect the character of the protagonist, either wisdom or the use of current civilization to change this backward era. Okay, excuse me, I'm not saying your writing is not good, I'm just suggesting it. Writing online is not easy, but you have to practice it and cherish it, come on!
I see potential in this novel. Don't give up. I hope the plot progress will be a little faster. I want to see the development of the territory.
Very potential
The Way of a Writer ~ It's a long road, come on, inspire inspiration in life and details, and achieve greater success!
Can
The writing is pretty good, I'll give you a little star.
very good
The book is great, but the update is very slow.
I've read a few chapters, it's a bit like the medieval chapter of City Sims
Make a suggestion
Since it's a medieval theme, shouldn't the village be dirty? Why doesn't it look dirty at all in the description?
very good
Please update the author 2 times a day It's getting more uncomfortable every day
Hope it becomes popular.
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