The Substitute Messenger in the Mysterious Recovery

The Substitute Messenger in the Mysterious Recovery

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About This Novel

My name is Li Daniu. When you saw this sentence, not only did I not die, I also got high.

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Mo Yan Jiuhu42mo ago

If there is fire, there will be ghosts

Everything is okay, except that the first person is a huge failure. From the moment you choose the first person, the book is useless. Are you going to see which popular book is in the first person? It's extremely uncomfortable to watch. The subject matter is very attractive. If you insist on writing it in the first person, aren't you just ruining your own job?

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Keli is Very Free46mo ago

Feeling okay

There are many problems. There are too many descriptions of the psychological dynamics of the protagonist, not much other people's words are written at all, and there is no such "" when describing other people's speech.

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