Destiny Dominates

As for the plot, it's fine that your book is slow and slow. I see that many of your books have some basic character issues, but Shenhuang handles them just fine. It's completely redundant. The various influences of the original soul are very dramatic at first glance. The plot of this book is no problem, but I gave up on it for a while because of the protagonist's character. Now I'm reading it again, and I'm skipping it. If you don't know the character, it's easier. The second chapter is only suitable for light novels. Even if you want to add comedy attributes, it depends on whether it is suitable. It's such a pity that the Evil Emperor was cut in half when the plot was at its most exciting. One point is deducted for the main character. The others are slow and can be waited for, but the main character's various childishness in the drama really don't appear. It's really unbearable and it's not a two-dimensional movie.

I can't stand it anymore after seeing the 2nd picture. I have the strength to persuade me to quit.

I have been reading books for many years. Among the online authors I have encountered, Kai Da's writing style is not the best, his character design is not the best, and his background settings are not the most innovative. He can be said to be a relatively mediocre author. However, such a mediocre author makes me follow him unswervingly. Why? Because the plot arrangement of Kaida's feedback is really good. What does it mean? To put it in simpler terms, it means pretending to be the best at the best time, and it will not make you feel embarrassed. Friends who have been reading books for a long time may have encountered a similar situation, that is, the author really wanted to attract a lot of votes, so he tried hard to arrange a series of conflicts, large and small, so that the protagonist could pretend to be good. However, the handling and arrangement of conflict plots are very troublesome. Too much will make people visually tired and uninspiring to watch. If there is too little, the author's vote will be in danger. And if it is not handled well at one time, it is likely to affect many things, such as subsequent plots, character settings, combat power issues, etc. If the author himself is not good at writing, It is also easy to write very awkwardly. However, the most admirable thing about Kai Da is that the conflict plot can often be complete and lead to the next stage of the plot. It is really the best among the authors I have encountered, and even one of them can be omitted. Of course, it is also possible that I have not read enough books. But I want to say that this book, from the basic background setting, character setting, and combat power setting, nothing makes me feel like it. Even though Kai Da's skills are still there, I always feel that something is wrong while watching it and I can't read it. It may be my problem, or maybe Kai Da has taken a big step forward and I can't keep up. It may also be that the problem of being a dandy prevents Kai Da from reacting in time, which leads to the decline in the quality of this book. Generally speaking, this book didn't give me a good impression. It's readable and quite interesting, but it's one of those types that becomes less interesting the more I read it. There are a lot of gossips and nonsense. Let me finally say, keep it up, hope the epidemic will end soon, and by the way, I will finish writing the story when I have time. It is such a pity about the story. P. S This book is indeed the only big book that I picked up without intending to pick it up. In the past, it was always the other way around. I couldn't help but read it after a few days of reading it. I rated it four stars, one star for the book, three stars for the big book, and no more.

Who reads more than me and gets less likes than me?

I was originally a long-time fan of pioneering books, but I couldn't read this book. It was my own problem. I couldn't keep up with the author's pace of progress. But this kind of background setting that mixed fantasy and Western fantasy, and the language style of "Yilin" accent that was neither Chinese nor foreign, was really difficult to accept. Kaihuang is pursuing innovation and change, which is worthy of praise. I hope this can attract more new readers for him. I also look forward to pioneering the future on the road of innovation, and occasionally creating works similar to King's Landing, Divine Glory, and Sword Movement. That would be good news.

I have read all the books on land reclamation, and they are all very good. The writing style and conception are rare and excellent.

It's rubbish now

I love this cover Such a handsome cover Can the author send it

I am also an old reader of Yuewen for four or five years, and I read all types of books. Kaihuang is the author I rate the most, bar none. The book on land reclamation is logically rigorous, and pits dug must be filled. The values ​​are reasonable and will not blindly cater to readers like some brainless authors. Support the land reclamation master!

The writing is so confusing, what is the main plot?