Dragon Ball World: I Am Bardock

Dragon Ball World: I Am Bardock

by Grand Sima Of The Imperial Court

Length:
128Kwords
Activity:
Updated 6y agoScraped 1mo ago
4Comments
219Favorites
0QD Score

About This Novel

An aloof and cold-blooded killer was betrayed by his teammates during another mission, resulting in his death and accidental rebirth in the Dragon Ball world. After that, various adventures in the Dragon Ball world slowly unfolded.

Official Sources

What Readers Think

Rating

Good0%Neutral0%Bad0%

Community(0)

Official(4)Scraped 1mo ago

TH
The Beginning of the Night77mo ago

The author has a few suggestions: Don't change too much as the original plot may lose fans. The pace is too fast. The details of the fighting can be polished. Write about the inner activities of the protagonist, the surrounding scenery, etc. It will look like you are reading the synopsis of the story. Don't keep mentioning the protagonist's name, it's a bit long-winded

21
TH
The Beginning of the Night77mo ago

.

Daily check-ins. . . . . .

1
TH
The Sails of the Sea76mo ago

Very pretty

It's just that my writing skills need to be improved. Come on.

FI
Five Elements Are Short of Money70mo ago

Overall, it's pretty good-looking, but why do you still use the word "Sima Liang" since you've traveled through time?

You Might Also Like