Dragon Ball World: I Am Bardock
by Grand Sima Of The Imperial Court
About This Novel
An aloof and cold-blooded killer was betrayed by his teammates during another mission, resulting in his death and accidental rebirth in the Dragon Ball world. After that, various adventures in the Dragon Ball world slowly unfolded.
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Official(4)Scraped 6d ago
The author has a few suggestions: Don't change too much as the original plot may lose fans. The pace is too fast. The details of the fighting can be polished. Write about the inner activities of the protagonist, the surrounding scenery, etc. It will look like you are reading the synopsis of the story. Don't keep mentioning the protagonist's name, it's a bit long-winded
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Very pretty
It's just that my writing skills need to be improved. Come on.
Overall, it's pretty good-looking, but why do you still use the word "Sima Liang" since you've traveled through time?
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Community(0)
Official(4)Scraped 6d ago
The author has a few suggestions: Don't change too much as the original plot may lose fans. The pace is too fast. The details of the fighting can be polished. Write about the inner activities of the protagonist, the surrounding scenery, etc. It will look like you are reading the synopsis of the story. Don't keep mentioning the protagonist's name, it's a bit long-winded
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Daily check-ins. . . . . .
Very pretty
It's just that my writing skills need to be improved. Come on.
Overall, it's pretty good-looking, but why do you still use the word "Sima Liang" since you've traveled through time?
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