
Lingtao Immortal Clan
by Pumpkin Stew With Minced Meat
About This Novel
[Family cultivating immortality, not having a holy mother, farming, no system, group portrait article] Lu Xuan'an traveled to the world of immortal cultivation and turned into a treasure gourd. He was accidentally acquired by a little golden monkey, and finally obtained the immortal method. After generations of ling tamarins fighting bravely, he developed and grew in the era of this group of immortal cranes, and finally developed into the supreme immortal clan belonging to the ling tamarins.
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Official(2)Scraped 6d ago
How can I put it this way? The protagonist's sense of presence is basically very low. In Chapter 59, the protagonist can appear a total of 5 times?
Author, you have made a big mistake. The subject matter is interesting, but the key is that your protagonist is a monkey, and there are too few storylines in the gourd, and the story is not attractive. The story about the monster family in human skin is nondescript and has no sense of inclusion. What a pity! ! This is why you are not popular. You can read Xuanjian's book, learn about the rhythm, the participation of the protagonist, and how the storyline develops. Otherwise, it will not be interesting at all, and there will be no sense of involvement at all!
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Official(2)Scraped 6d ago
How can I put it this way? The protagonist's sense of presence is basically very low. In Chapter 59, the protagonist can appear a total of 5 times?
Author, you have made a big mistake. The subject matter is interesting, but the key is that your protagonist is a monkey, and there are too few storylines in the gourd, and the story is not attractive. The story about the monster family in human skin is nondescript and has no sense of inclusion. What a pity! ! This is why you are not popular. You can read Xuanjian's book, learn about the rhythm, the participation of the protagonist, and how the storyline develops. Otherwise, it will not be interesting at all, and there will be no sense of involvement at all!









