Become Stronger by Swallowing the Starry Sky in Battle
About This Novel
Li Dong, who has played "Swallowing the Starry Sky" for the third time, was so fascinated that he didn't sleep for several days. After watching it, he fell asleep and woke up to the world of "Swallowing the Starry Sky". Li Dong didn't realize this at first, but after he was born and gradually came into contact with information about this world, and learned keywords such as 'monster', warrior, 'Hong', and 'Thunder God', Li Dong realized that he might have traveled to a world that swallowed the stars. But after waiting and waiting, no golden finger came, which made Li Dong feel despair. After all, for ordinary people, 'swallowing' is undoubtedly a nightmare-like world. Fortunately, when he was eight years old, after a fight, Li Dong discovered that things might not be so pessimistic, because he had a little talent that he named "fighting makes you stronger"...
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Official(56)Scraped 5d ago
Talk about your feelings:
Well, where should I start? (Watch the first 20 chapters) 1. The protagonist's training settings: You can improve as long as you fight with others. The degree of improvement is related to the opponent's strength (there seems to be a vague hint that it is also related to winning or losing). 2. This is a fanfic of Swallowing Starry Sky. Since the time traveled is earlier than Luo Feng's growth, the opinions between Luo Feng and Luo Feng in the article are not related to each other like many fanfics. 3. Since the protagonist's training settings are inextricably linked to combat, it doesn't matter that in the first 20 chapters (so far), almost 17 to 18 chapters are devoted to describing how to compete with others like a ring to improve yourself and create breakthrough opportunities for your opponents! ! ! The description of the environment, survival characteristics and rules of the Devouring World is pitiful! Overall: The structure of this fic seems to be seriously out of balance. Although you, the author, set the protagonist's training to require fighting, you can't spend 17 to 18 chapters in 20 chapters describing this kind of combat training, right? This is long-winded (it feels long and smelly). In fact, wouldn't it be nice to just spend a few chapters describing the protagonist's improved characteristics and the improved data during battle in detail to support the protagonist's setting? It's really tiring to read that the article uses so much space to write about this arena-like battle, and after reading it, there is nothing worth remembering (it's really as tasteless as chewing wax) This is just a personal perception. I don't know if readers or the author agree with it. I hope the author will feel it after reading it and see if what he said makes sense. I hope the author writes better and better! Thank you 🙏
My humble opinion
I have finished reading it. For myself, I think this book has good logic and good writing style. It just has no twists and turns, and it doesn't have the ups and downs of a real master's work, but it is still very good. As for some minor flaws about the protagonist's cheats, they can be ignored. I ~ highly recommend!
Speechless
What the author writes is either bad or repetitive. If I spend ten yuan to read your book, you can brag about it for the rest of your life.
Who is the protagonist of this book? It's a bit cruel. Two-thirds of one chapter is about Luo
Who is the protagonist of this book? It's a bit cruel. Two-thirds of one chapter is about Luo
The logic doesn't make sense, the material is good
The protagonist has a golden finger but he didn't take off until he was 17 years old. So what was he doing before he was 17 years old? When I was a child, my opponent was a quasi-martialist and he was still a quasi-martialist. You might as well write that he traveled through time when he was 17 years old.
The protagonist's talent is so rubbish that it took him nine years to become a warrior
The protagonist's talent is so rubbish that it took him nine years to become a warrior.
Why don't you just fly? You went from early warrior to mid warrior in two days.
If you feel that the improvement is too fast, it is not good to improve to the first level in two days. When you take the actual combat assessment, you will break through the God of War, and then go to abuse food.
I feel so bad hearing about this magical boy...😣
It feels a little better if it's a mysterious boy. Magical boy...
Many of them were pulled from the original work and have not been changed.
The three immortal gods respectfully obeyed. This scene made Luo Feng secretly surprised. Just after entering the Blood Demon Palace... Bringing those 21 sinners up, didn't the situation intensify instantly? "Luo Feng, I have great admiration for your teacher, King Zhenyan. It's a pity that King Zhenyan has been in Chaos City for countless years, so I haven't had the opportunity to appreciate Teacher Qi's peerless grace. It's really a pity." The Blood Demon King sighed, "You are a disciple of King Zhenyan, and you can also be considered as my junior. You are here for the first time. Judging those 21 sinners is a trivial matter. We will talk about it later. I have prepared a banquet for you, Luo Feng. Come, follow me!" The Blood Demon King leads the way. Luo Feng could only follow. After a while.
The writing is too fake. I think most people have this golden finger, which is definitely not the way it is in the novel. The author is simply ridiculous.
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Official(56)Scraped 5d ago
Talk about your feelings:
Well, where should I start? (Watch the first 20 chapters) 1. The protagonist's training settings: You can improve as long as you fight with others. The degree of improvement is related to the opponent's strength (there seems to be a vague hint that it is also related to winning or losing). 2. This is a fanfic of Swallowing Starry Sky. Since the time traveled is earlier than Luo Feng's growth, the opinions between Luo Feng and Luo Feng in the article are not related to each other like many fanfics. 3. Since the protagonist's training settings are inextricably linked to combat, it doesn't matter that in the first 20 chapters (so far), almost 17 to 18 chapters are devoted to describing how to compete with others like a ring to improve yourself and create breakthrough opportunities for your opponents! ! ! The description of the environment, survival characteristics and rules of the Devouring World is pitiful! Overall: The structure of this fic seems to be seriously out of balance. Although you, the author, set the protagonist's training to require fighting, you can't spend 17 to 18 chapters in 20 chapters describing this kind of combat training, right? This is long-winded (it feels long and smelly). In fact, wouldn't it be nice to just spend a few chapters describing the protagonist's improved characteristics and the improved data during battle in detail to support the protagonist's setting? It's really tiring to read that the article uses so much space to write about this arena-like battle, and after reading it, there is nothing worth remembering (it's really as tasteless as chewing wax) This is just a personal perception. I don't know if readers or the author agree with it. I hope the author will feel it after reading it and see if what he said makes sense. I hope the author writes better and better! Thank you 🙏
My humble opinion
I have finished reading it. For myself, I think this book has good logic and good writing style. It just has no twists and turns, and it doesn't have the ups and downs of a real master's work, but it is still very good. As for some minor flaws about the protagonist's cheats, they can be ignored. I ~ highly recommend!
Speechless
What the author writes is either bad or repetitive. If I spend ten yuan to read your book, you can brag about it for the rest of your life.
Who is the protagonist of this book? It's a bit cruel. Two-thirds of one chapter is about Luo
Who is the protagonist of this book? It's a bit cruel. Two-thirds of one chapter is about Luo
The logic doesn't make sense, the material is good
The protagonist has a golden finger but he didn't take off until he was 17 years old. So what was he doing before he was 17 years old? When I was a child, my opponent was a quasi-martialist and he was still a quasi-martialist. You might as well write that he traveled through time when he was 17 years old.
The protagonist's talent is so rubbish that it took him nine years to become a warrior
The protagonist's talent is so rubbish that it took him nine years to become a warrior.
Why don't you just fly? You went from early warrior to mid warrior in two days.
If you feel that the improvement is too fast, it is not good to improve to the first level in two days. When you take the actual combat assessment, you will break through the God of War, and then go to abuse food.
I feel so bad hearing about this magical boy...😣
It feels a little better if it's a mysterious boy. Magical boy...
Many of them were pulled from the original work and have not been changed.
The three immortal gods respectfully obeyed. This scene made Luo Feng secretly surprised. Just after entering the Blood Demon Palace... Bringing those 21 sinners up, didn't the situation intensify instantly? "Luo Feng, I have great admiration for your teacher, King Zhenyan. It's a pity that King Zhenyan has been in Chaos City for countless years, so I haven't had the opportunity to appreciate Teacher Qi's peerless grace. It's really a pity." The Blood Demon King sighed, "You are a disciple of King Zhenyan, and you can also be considered as my junior. You are here for the first time. Judging those 21 sinners is a trivial matter. We will talk about it later. I have prepared a banquet for you, Luo Feng. Come, follow me!" The Blood Demon King leads the way. Luo Feng could only follow. After a while.
The writing is too fake. I think most people have this golden finger, which is definitely not the way it is in the novel. The author is simply ridiculous.
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