Inner Demons

There are many authors who enjoy writing about conspiracies. Moreover, most of the protagonists are pushed by the conspiracy and cannot help themselves. Anyway, he is always unable to do what he wants and is easily interfered by the conspiracies of the outside world. The protagonist is unhappy, and the reader seems unhappy too. Just like some people like to watch tragedies, but I don't. The core of tragedy is to destroy beautiful things for people to see, which arouses strong emotional resonance. I was thinking, since it is beautiful, why are you so perverted in destroying it? Just like some people like to watch TV series, I don't like to watch them either. A modern romance movie like Duo Shu looks disgusting. I wanted to find a pure land in novels, but for some reason, many novels also used some techniques from TV series. Since it's a fairy tale, why not write about a knight? The understanding of Xia is different. But it is also true that online literature is diverse. Different writing methods can be regarded as innovations. Although, different people like different innovations. I still appreciate some of the writing in the book I Come from the Mortal World. At least in my opinion, the protagonist is a knight-errant. However, the conspiracy of the book "Inner Demon" is really big, from the beginning to the present. Everything about the protagonist is known. Apart from what is in his head, there is nothing else that others don't know! In normal life, it would also feel uncomfortable to let others know about it. Who would like to live with a camera watching them all the time. But the author decided to write it this way. Some of these people want to help him, and some may want to harm him. The common point is this, the person knows everything, but the protagonist knows nothing. One advantage is that setting up suspense can make readers continue reading. It's a clever technique. In addition to his spiritual knowledge, the protagonist seems to have peers. If a protagonist can go on and succeed in the end, he must have very special characteristics. But when many people write books, they often. I want to weaken the halo of the protagonist next time. Set up many powerful opponents for him, even people of the same level or higher than it. I don't understand, how did the protagonist succeed in such a situation? Everything about the protagonist in this book makes it known to outsiders that he is as powerless as an ant, and that others are more capable than him. One conspiracy after another, foreshadowing. Threat after threat, powerless. Did the author write this book to torture people? Why make people uncomfortable to watch. Of course, it is still a little different from Shuangwen. At least the writing style of some prose is not so good, and the same ideas give people different feelings. You have different ways of writing the same routine. Just like those thirty years in Hexi, thirty years in Hedong, and the like. If you can, write it in a different way, not as prominent and sharp as it is written. He has a very good future. Obviously, the author of this book exposed the protagonist to all the conspiracies. There may be many versions of him, but he does not know why he succeeded. He is a special one among many people. How to say it? No matter how powerful the protagonist is, there are times when he doesn't know anything. There was so little his mind could control. And most of the things he encountered exceeded this category, and he couldn't even control his own destiny. We always live under the control of outsiders and have to move forward. If you like to watch the kind of sad and sad love movies on TV, the kind of tragic, heart-wrenching stories, the kind of ups and downs, and the final tragedy of fragmentation. I guess I like reading this kind of novel. Perfection is never possible in real life, so why can't we create a pure land in novels? Why not let the protagonist be awesome for once, so that he can control his own destiny, even if it is weak, but he will not be dominated by others casually. At least you need to know why, instead of being kept in the dark all the time. At least at a certain moment, he also wants to know everything, instead of being kept in the dark about more every time he learns something, and then continue to move forward. I really appreciate the novel Goose is Lao Wu. It's the same story, but its protagonist may not be as mentally intelligent as this book. But he can always get rid of all this through his own efforts, or in other words, he also uses conspiracy, but he will not make the protagonist so weak. Even in the presence of others, he still has the strength to fight, instead of being threatened and manipulated casually, but he can't find the reason. I also appreciate this book, I came from the mortal world. He said that the protagonist is like a knight-errant in my mind. He used his own strength to smash all conspiracies, and he used his mind to control all external factors to move himself forward. No one takes advantage of him, and even if someone takes advantage of him, it is because of his superior skills. Others take advantage of him, so he takes advantage of others, but he cannot be threatened. He was always the one threatening others. In general, there is no invisible hand in the world of that book. You know, everything about the protagonist controls him. It's good to have a conspiracy, but if the conspiracy is too big, everything will feel like a joke. From the struggle of ants. Overall, this book is well written, but the plot arrangement is not good. It might be better if the plot could be changed in this way of writing. But many novels nowadays are of the kind that are fast-paced and take the breath away every second. With that kind of writing, it can be considered a breath of fresh air. Overall disappointing. If you are interested, you can read this book by Dao Mensheng. I think the writing styles of both books are so special and have something in common. The early and middle stages of the book were pretty good. I give this book two stars.

I would like to ask: How many heroines are there in this book? Thanks

In Xiaoyun Mountain, when the matchmaker was about to die, Li Yunxin didn't even look at it, and continued to play house with Shu Shengjie. The explanation he gave later was that the love you gave me was not what I wanted, and I was afraid... At that time, I took out a 40-meter-long knife from my trouser pocket. Are you afraid? Are you afraid that you are a scumbag? She devoted her wholeheartedly to you, even risking her life. How can you be so cold and ruthless just by saying "I'm afraid" and even dismiss her before she died? (Had it not been for the fusion of dragon soul, the matchmaker would have really died at that time). How is Little Red Fish better than Liu Laodao? Even if I can't compare, can you give me some warmth when I'm about to die? Can it? How selfish and indifferent 😒 Later, the matchmaker is resurrected and starts scheming against others. Oh my god, if this is not considered a scumbag, I, Di Renjie, will change my name to DJ!

Stupidity is a sin, and all fools deserve to die. Human demons who play with people's hearts, inner demons. The fairy tale novels written by the Department of Psychology are indeed good, much more interesting than Lao Shi Zi Long Aotian. Of course, there must be many people who can't understand it. Let me say something here, don't criticize if you don't like it, and then think about the first sentence.

You can write character dialogue like this, but try to speak it as smoothly as possible. I feel that the dialogue is too jumpy and confusing.

I don't give one star because the writing is very good. I don't give five stars because I can't stand it. Yes, I just can't stand it Even if the food is half pretentious and half pretentious, To paraphrase the author's own words, every time I reach a new realm, I will immediately encounter a stronger opponent. No matter how strong I am, I will always "struggle to survive among completely unmatched opponents." What's the point of this? After finally improving to a realm, can't people relax a little and pretend to be more awesome? Every time we fight, we have to wait for the opponent to finish pretending to be mellow before sending him away. This mellowness is really not reversed at all, but I have to be completely crushed by you first, and then I can crush you. What's the point of this? I'm already mad to death anyway. I stopped reading when I saw that Li Chunfeng had finished pretending to be cool. Anyway, there were only a few chapters after that. Fools know that Li Chunfeng and King Jinpeng pretended to be cool for more than ten chapters. In the last few chapters, it was the protagonist's turn, but I wanted to give the author a surprise. Don't you always want to write "the ultimate strategy"? I know your protagonist will slap you in the face, but I don't want to let you get what you want. I just let your protagonist die at this moment. Are you surprised or not? Are you happy? So boring I really can't write a book, but I really think that's not how a book is written. At least it should be relaxed and relaxed. From the simplest emotional point of view, you can't put off everything until the end. Anyway I don't like You can do whatever you want Three stars, I'm tired of reading this book and don't want to read any more.

Book review: Just reading the introduction, I thought it was a very poetic book, so I tapped the screen to read it on the recommendation of others. After reading the first chapter, you will find that this is a very... Unappetizing book. Monsters really eat people. Moreover, it is still roasted and eaten, and it still smells like humans, and there is also unripe blood juice and human oil... Fortunately, the protagonist Li Yunxin is human, he does not eat humans, and he is also an interesting person. So, again and again, he survived from the monster's mouth. After escaping from the Ninth Young Master for the first time, Li Yunxin fell into danger again. The previous fight with two Taoist priests had left him half disabled. This time, he finally had to seek help from others. As a psychiatrist and painter, even if his strength is greatly reduced, he can still maintain a calm attitude. Therefore, he summoned the Ninth Young Master. And the people who caused trouble for him became the dead souls under the claws of the Nine Young Masters. It has to be said that Li Yun is very courageous when he conspires with demons. And "The bold ones are fat and beautiful..." A girl I met later, I thought it was her good luck, but she died unexpectedly. My heart is calm. The two little girls who appeared behind were really cute. However, eating people is not cute at all. The phrase "You smell so good. I like you" turned out to be "You smell so good. I want to eat you." Oh, that's really good. Even though the demon was scary, Li Yunxin did not have the thought of "I want to return to the earth." Because, he is a demon. Geez, he's not a good person either. But it's not bad. At least it seems so now. And he seems to be very caring! Under the delicate writing style, we see a handsome and elegant man. Do you think this is the end? No, our brother Xin'er can't be that cute. So, ahem, you'll find out after reading it. As a psychiatrist, Li Yunxin can be said to be as wise as a demon. It's easy to play with people's hearts and figure out people's hearts. But without green leaves, how to set off red flowers? Enemies who were full of confidence eventually became dead souls. And this is just the beginning. As a result, Brother Xin'er became the inner demon of others. And that cold winter night, I was really looking forward to it. Book Reviewer: Draft

It's a good book, but it's not popular. Although I felt a little dizzy after reading it.

I didn't really know what I meant by a good book before. What exactly is it like, but after reading several different works by different authors (all of which I think are good works), I have a slightly intuitive feeling - good works are related to the writing style and the world view, but the most important thing is how the plot unfolds - I have never been very fond of reading. The so-called "Shuangwen" is because the biggest feature of Shuangwen is that the development of the plot is often not driven by the protagonist, but is the result of the protagonist facing various decent and villainous things (in general, from a certain perspective, it is just like playing an online game, which unfolds according to the main and side tasks). The protagonist is pushed. But in novels like Inner Demon, the world is explored step by step by himself, and what happens may or may not be helpful in the future, just like Li Yunxin conveniently planted some means (eg. Gunpowder). There is no treasure that makes you rich overnight (Yunshan's treasure was actually just a toy to Li Yunxin at that time). It is not domineering and leaking all the way, and every step must be carefully considered. This kind of novel can give us a more complete reading experience, and it is also a good novel that I like.

I don't understand what's being written. There's no plot appeal at all.