I Support the Entire Salvation Organization by Myself

The first one was a female believer, the second one was an underground boxer, and she was a woman, and the third one was a doctor, and she was still a woman. It would be better to just change it to one person to support the entire harem. Moreover, the triggered events always revolve around the protagonist, with the protagonist's canteen as the center. In this way, the people from the Investigation Bureau can have fun before the problem is discovered.

The design of the protagonist is a failure. He is obviously a behind-the-scenes character with 0. The author always deliberately places the events near the protagonist. The neighborhood next door is shattered and he can still play games at home. All dangers are coincidentally crossed. The author is lame and tries to push the protagonist everywhere. I don't understand the use of highlighting a character with zero combat power who has no contribution to the incident.

The author should have some understanding of the audience behind the scenes. Most readers who like to see behind the scenes like the mystery of the protagonist and the thrill of manipulating the world. The most important thing is that the vest cannot be taken off. Lu, otherwise you won't have a good grasp of the audience for your book, because everyone came from behind the scenes before you put it on the shelves. After it was put on the shelves, it went through two major revisions. I think it's okay after it was revised. But the author must think clearly about the style of this book, otherwise people who come from behind the scenes will be a little unbearable, such as me. The author can refer to Tingri's small world, which has endless fun. Although Ren Suo's description in the book is too stupid, there is no mistake in the whole book. What everyone sees behind the scenes is just pretending and having fun. Just like a game, you don't want the characters to go beyond your control (this is the second problem I think, plus After joining the organization, the protagonist did not have enough control over the apostles. Even in today's update meeting, his attitude was a little too casual. Let's not say reverence, just be more serious. I feel that the Holy Lord suddenly lost his authority.) I still hope that the author will consider what the style of the book is and control it well. Come on and write well.

The novel was too frustrating to read, and some of the settings of the protagonist were too retarded. He was obviously the Holy Master behind the scenes, but it was basically exposed at the beginning. The official organization discovered the anomaly, the villain also discovered the anomaly, and even the apostles under his command also discovered the anomaly and came to find it. It would be fine if the protagonist had fighting ability or escape skills, but the protagonist in this article is a waste without fighting ability. The most ridiculous thing is that he can't even manage his own apostles, and he still needs to send other apostles to check and balance him (I'm talking about Dabai and Wu Ji). Moreover, the protagonist's IQ is pitifully low, and I can't imagine that this is the soul of an adult.

Does anyone know who the main character is and that this is real and not just a game like SB! Or does the author not intend for the protagonist to realize it at all?

Abandoned the book, the puppet is made into a woman, I can still read it, but all the people who appear later are women. She's still young and beautiful, I can't help but look at her

Another Mongolian protagonist, the word count is really a must-have skill for writers

Cut it when you need to, think of a better ending, there is no need to keep stuck, it is a bit broken in itself, and I won't write it later. It is better to extend the timeline, fill in the daily pitfalls, and finally fight the finale.

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The plot is too blunt, and it all depends on the author's power to advance the plot. I feel like the outline is a mess. And the world background has too many holes.