The Abyss Invades, I Control the Power of Darkness
by Yu Chenyu
About This Novel
The abyss invades, and strange and ferocious beasts run rampant. Qin Jinnian, who plunged into this extraordinary era at a loss, was a little panicked. Until the blood moon volleyed in the sky, and the good sister with a pig's intestines in her back called the door. A panel appeared... [Power·Dark Pupil: Peep into the pupil of the dark shadow. Your gaze can see through the fog of the shadow world and exempt you from all mental pollution in the dark world. ][Authority·Shadow Control: You can control your own shadow][Authority·Shadow Devour: Dark shadows should feed on the flesh, flesh and spiritual energy of dark creatures. ]... Then, more and more authorities appeared one after another, and gradually became outrageous... [Authority·Shadow Body], [Authority·Shadow Armor], [Authority·Shadow Escape]... [Authority·Death Real Body], [Authority·Walking Alone in the Abyss], [Authority·Cause and Effect Melody]... A few years later, the abyss invaded in a big way. Qin Jinnian looked at the billions of abyssal races in front of him, touching his chin and thinking. "Which authority looks more handsome?"
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Official(59)Scraped 20d ago
So stupid
Even though you are capable, you still act like a fool
You can read it when you are not particular about books, but what should I say? There is a lot of development in the Shadow series. Your current ideas are too narrow and repressive. In addition, the power of authority is not as low-level as you think. In other words, the person who created it has given it a very high position. What you are writing now is a bit like the emperor's golden hoe, which is positioning. It's not correct. If you want to give him high status and low abilities, then you must state it at the beginning, or you will expose part of your outline. What you write now is to suppress the protagonist's intelligence ability and his own authority. Although I don't like people who are invincible in one step, but I don't like people like you who have been suppressed in their growth. Although Xiaobai's article is said to be read without a brain, it cannot break the logic. If you want to write that everyone has a brain, there is one thing. You can do something in your position. It's okay to write down other people's information about the event and make inferences based on the information he already knows. It would be wrong to target him because of the protagonist, or to use the protagonist's halo to strengthen him. The subject matter and plot are not bad, and the writing will be better if it is polished a little.
To be honest, I have no sympathy at all for this world being invaded by the abyss. The protagonist and the people he meets are dumbfounded, startled, startled, and all their skills rely on roaring every day.
It's so confusing to watch, so I can only watch it without thinking.
If you add the attribute of time travel, don't act like a fool. You are afraid of death and try to get ahead. Does that incident have anything to do with you?
Do these things also count as authority? Author, you should understand what authority means. You call this thing authority. I feel that these things should be called skills instead of authority in heaven and earth.
Looking at those five pictures, the protagonist looks like an idiot. At first he knew his abilities and experimental abilities. Then the ghosts let little bugs in, and he was scared to death. Finally, he was about to die, and then he remembered that he had abilities. Then he added a new ability called Shadow Bite. Isn't this just shadow swallowing? After struggling for a long time, it became clear that I could fight, devour and recover at the same time. I made myself look like I was about to die in the end. When fighting with others, the first thing I did was to use weapons. I didn't know that I had been using my abilities for a long time. Then a bunch of mobs came and they tried their best to attack with their abilities, swallowing them while attacking. Isn't that okay? It made me almost faint in the end, so I figured out how to use devour. I still understand that one night, when someone woke me up, I still had a cold look on my face
I can only say that it is a rubbish novel. I investigated a child incident and I have been fooled by you for almost 100 pictures. I don't want to expose my talent, but I also want resources. I don't know what you want to express.
poisonous
How should I put it, otherwise you will be the sixth child like Han Paopao. Otherwise, you will be as decisive as Ye Heizi. The result was nothing. Can't comment. In addition, the plot is illogical. The supporting roles arranged can only be described in words. I know what you want to say, you want to say that the protagonist is a good person. Well, okay, he's a good guy, he's White Lotus, he's great. Awesome.
A lot of babble! The plot is pretty cool, it was written by AI, right?
Why do you keep writing about wives and children? I'm speechless.
Why do you keep writing about wives and children? I'm speechless.
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Official(59)Scraped 20d ago
So stupid
Even though you are capable, you still act like a fool
You can read it when you are not particular about books, but what should I say? There is a lot of development in the Shadow series. Your current ideas are too narrow and repressive. In addition, the power of authority is not as low-level as you think. In other words, the person who created it has given it a very high position. What you are writing now is a bit like the emperor's golden hoe, which is positioning. It's not correct. If you want to give him high status and low abilities, then you must state it at the beginning, or you will expose part of your outline. What you write now is to suppress the protagonist's intelligence ability and his own authority. Although I don't like people who are invincible in one step, but I don't like people like you who have been suppressed in their growth. Although Xiaobai's article is said to be read without a brain, it cannot break the logic. If you want to write that everyone has a brain, there is one thing. You can do something in your position. It's okay to write down other people's information about the event and make inferences based on the information he already knows. It would be wrong to target him because of the protagonist, or to use the protagonist's halo to strengthen him. The subject matter and plot are not bad, and the writing will be better if it is polished a little.
To be honest, I have no sympathy at all for this world being invaded by the abyss. The protagonist and the people he meets are dumbfounded, startled, startled, and all their skills rely on roaring every day.
It's so confusing to watch, so I can only watch it without thinking.
If you add the attribute of time travel, don't act like a fool. You are afraid of death and try to get ahead. Does that incident have anything to do with you?
Do these things also count as authority? Author, you should understand what authority means. You call this thing authority. I feel that these things should be called skills instead of authority in heaven and earth.
Looking at those five pictures, the protagonist looks like an idiot. At first he knew his abilities and experimental abilities. Then the ghosts let little bugs in, and he was scared to death. Finally, he was about to die, and then he remembered that he had abilities. Then he added a new ability called Shadow Bite. Isn't this just shadow swallowing? After struggling for a long time, it became clear that I could fight, devour and recover at the same time. I made myself look like I was about to die in the end. When fighting with others, the first thing I did was to use weapons. I didn't know that I had been using my abilities for a long time. Then a bunch of mobs came and they tried their best to attack with their abilities, swallowing them while attacking. Isn't that okay? It made me almost faint in the end, so I figured out how to use devour. I still understand that one night, when someone woke me up, I still had a cold look on my face
I can only say that it is a rubbish novel. I investigated a child incident and I have been fooled by you for almost 100 pictures. I don't want to expose my talent, but I also want resources. I don't know what you want to express.
poisonous
How should I put it, otherwise you will be the sixth child like Han Paopao. Otherwise, you will be as decisive as Ye Heizi. The result was nothing. Can't comment. In addition, the plot is illogical. The supporting roles arranged can only be described in words. I know what you want to say, you want to say that the protagonist is a good person. Well, okay, he's a good guy, he's White Lotus, he's great. Awesome.
A lot of babble! The plot is pretty cool, it was written by AI, right?
Why do you keep writing about wives and children? I'm speechless.
Why do you keep writing about wives and children? I'm speechless.
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