Let Me Debut, I Can Still Explode!

The writing style is average and a bit dry, but that is compared with those great writers. In fact, the writing by those great writers may not be that good. Either it is as white as a flash bomb, or it is the system interfering with the current reality. What is even more cruel is the group of authors who are trying to pick up Liu Yifei's wool. You have all stripped out Liu Yifei's wool. She must not have gained some fat to keep out the cold. Those authors are mainly responsible for Liu Yifei's transformation into a non-peacock.

To be honest, I didn't understand many parts. Did the author write it too vaguely? Since the protagonist wants to acknowledge all of his ex-wife's debts, shouldn't her previous investment shares also belong to you? Why is it written as if it has nothing to do with the protagonist?

I'm a bit doubtful whether you are the author of female videos, but I read them on male videos. The writing is very messy, and the first three chapters are very messy. If I haven't read your other works, I'm probably confused, because I'm confused now. If I can finish it in one chapter, I've written a lot, but I haven't gotten to the right place yet. You Although you are not the first female author who writes male videos that I have read, you are indeed the first author who cannot understand the logical sequence. You must have also read the comment section. The first thing a new reader does when opening this book is confusion, because they cannot understand it. The meaning is clear, but the words are not only confusing when they are connected together, but also easily annoying. The first three chapters can actually be written in one chapter. If you compress it, it means that the pig's feet are reborn, and then they prepare to debut again. That's it. Just write it down briefly. How did your ex-wife lie to you and say that she is a rich woman who treats your mother's illness?

Among ordinary authors, he is considered very good, but among good writers, he is not very qualified. First of all, the author's writing about the blending of memes and fans' madness is very real and very good, but the plot structure and specific descriptions show that the writing style is very average.

Too many boring online conversations written, too hard to read, gone

There are a lot of women in the back, and half of the plot is about women, which makes me a little tired of aesthetics.

Except there are a few too many women, everything else is perfect

I feel like I've read the previous one. How many times did you change the title of the book?

Can anyone who knows enough about it help me figure out what the situation is between the protagonist and Jian Qing? How did this woman die?

The one star less is because there are too many women. This kind of non-overturning is a bit fake.