Can Following the Rules Lead to Rebirth?

It's really a pity that Mr. Lu's book was about the sisterhood between the little princess and Guan Guan Plastic, but in the end there was no Shuda Zhaofeng. I feel that the performance of Bai Yueguang in the two books, how should I put it, is not too eye-catching. Ningbao and Guanguan are really brilliant, and the sweet girl is invincible! ! ! Come on, be fearless!

The writing is good, the characters are well drawn, and the plot is vivid. However, there are some small suggestions. The protagonist has a strong desire to express and share, and has a lot of sermons in long paragraphs. He cannot control his mouth, which makes this character a little introverted, immature, and does not meet the definition of a reborn person. Moreover, today's readers do not like others to preach. The author can reflect and express from the development of the story, which will be more expressive and not appear stiff.

Not bad, looks quite similar, hehehe

I won't talk about the plot and character creation. I have a lot of experience and a scumbag with a high character. I am a role model for our generation. But can writing so many women get the rain and dew equally? In the end, leaks everywhere are cuckolds. Women's sensibilities are fickle and they are women. Women account for too much space and lose the upward outlook of the whole novel. Career should account for at least 70-80% of the plot. This way the whole book will have a better look.

The first chapter is very interesting. The author has popularized a lot of legal knowledge. It is indeed the first time I have seen a legal-related opening. It feels very novel. However, in the later chapters, I feel that the proportion of business is becoming less and less. I cannot know the development status of the protagonist's company. The protagonist moves between various women ( It's not that writing about daily life is not good), but there are too many daily life and it seems a bit watery, and I feel that the characters of the heroines written by the author are not able to accept multiple women. The main reason is that they can live a good life without the protagonist. If the author does not grasp it well and does not pave the way for accepting the plot, it will easily make people have doubts.

Loyal readers of Mr. Lu, it's such a pity. I saw that the author has written a new article. I hope it can be completed smoothly. I like more articles with female protagonists and support the author.

The author's emotional drama is very delicate, but can you simplify the ambiguous characters a little? From the current look, I feel that Zhong Yujun has nothing outstanding. The author used a white moonlight on her throughout the whole process, and there is really no sense of substitution... Also, Teacher Du feels that the author is trying to lust after the female teacher. After watching the whole process, I still feel that Fruit and Princess are the best written. Can you delete the scenes of other female characters in the later stage and write more about the duo who steal the man's best friend?

First of all, my name is also Jianuo, and secondly, I am a boy. A little uncomfortable

I really want to ask how many female protagonists are there? Because so far in chapter 27, four women have appeared. Can you reveal them?

I learned some things, not much but useful. For the heroine, I recommend no more than seven.