Shadow Empire

It's really bad. It's far worse than Blackstone. However, Blackstone also collapsed in the later period. Originally, it was good to write about Sanctuary. But it has to be about mutation➕alien➕god➕virtual world➕power of faith. They are all poisonous points. This book can't be read in the early stage. I'm still torturing the owner after fifteen chapters? Put it in the Black Stone. Lynch and his brothers have already killed the bakery owner. Looking at the name of this book, you can tell that it is a gangster. What is the abuse of the owner in the early stage if he is not trying to persuade him to quit?

The first 100 or so chapters were fine, but after the 150th chapter, the logic was a bit off, especially when an inexplicable prostitute worked as a waiter for the protagonist without their knowledge. The protagonist actually overestimated his ability to fight with the mayor for such a person, in a place that eats people without spitting out their bones. The protagonist still dares to be a good person. His heart is overflowing, so he will definitely not see the sun tomorrow🌞, and there is no mention of the hardcore Golden Finger in the book. How dare he? One of the five major families inexplicably protects him, which is enough for the protagonist's halo. It's irrelevant that he risked his life for a woman.

I have opened a new book, I like Mr. Lynch

How do you keep reading this novel? The protagonist is timid and stupid, and he keeps emphasizing that he is not afraid, not timid, and knows a lot. What the hell, everyone who can keep reading is the Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles.

When it comes to the law in the most chaotic city, you don't dare to ask for wages and dare to mess with loan sharks,**

It's very interesting. Both the villain and the protagonist are mature and wise. As a person who has been in a high position or has a certain status, he should be a mature adult instead of a brat. The writing here is very good. The writing is smooth and it feels good to read, and the punctuation marks are well paused, which makes it very comfortable for people like me who listen to books😌. The characterization is not rigid but also logical. People will grow up slowly and experience a lot. Some will be polished and others will gradually reveal their sharp edges. The plot is also quite good. It will not simply describe a certain event, but will intersperse a branch line in the middle to provide development directions for other events. It will stop at this point. This way the plot is not bloated, but it also gives me a lot of associations. The protagonist is a social villain but has his own principles, no sudden goodwill to maintain his character, and no ignorant malice. I think such a character should be quite difficult to write, but this kind of subject matter is very attractive to me. All in all, I think it's pretty good, and I hope everyone can take a look. Anyway, I think it's pretty good.

This story has real power, its logic is self-consistent, and the language is powerful. But from the beginning, I didn't think the protagonist should find a simple woman. In my eyes, Pasha was unattractive and less impressive than Lisa, and the woman Lance deserved was predatory, muscular, not romantic. His divinity is higher than humanity, he should not have a lover, and he cannot fall in love. As a gangster, she is the kind of woman that Lance should have, who is capable, gorgeous, and has a bad, pus-filled appearance. For example, the female celebrity or Lisa that the second generation pursues. Because they have never really had anything from the beginning. Their lives are like grass, but they have to live fiercely. Will he die when he is old? I prefer that Lance's woman is a Biaozi, and that he dies heroically, so that he can be pure enough and be a gangster.

Please Laqun, I want to see the Kosma Empire

The author's Blackstone and this one are even said to be the same in several books, with the same routine. I especially like the word "water". Obviously, Blackstone can end in the middle period. It has to be forced to write some messy gods and aliens. Do you think you deserve it? This book has the same problem. It is written in a messy way. In order to make money, I don't say anything about you, but you must also be worthy of the readers.

Nowadays, online articles are either a bit exciting or make people read it. This novel is about Chinese workers in the United States in the early 20th century, but it is adapted into a virtual country, which is not interesting.