Alien Survival Guide
About This Novel
A foreign land within a short distance, a moment of eternity. Among the endless tasks, the ultimate secret is hidden. Only the final survivor can understand the truth of "God".
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Official(4)Scraped 13d ago
Your second and third chapters are completely incompatible. I thought there were several chapters in between.
Your second and third chapters are completely incompatible. I thought there were several chapters in between.
Frequent use of prepositions
"When..." And "after" are used too many times, which makes the storyline of the article inconsistent and creates a sense of repetitive reading. The content of the article is not focused and the context is not well connected.
The plot of the article is not connected at all. It's confusing and there are a lot of typos.
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Official(4)Scraped 13d ago
Your second and third chapters are completely incompatible. I thought there were several chapters in between.
Your second and third chapters are completely incompatible. I thought there were several chapters in between.
Frequent use of prepositions
"When..." And "after" are used too many times, which makes the storyline of the article inconsistent and creates a sense of repetitive reading. The content of the article is not focused and the context is not well connected.
The plot of the article is not connected at all. It's confusing and there are a lot of typos.
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