
Gods, I Have an Inventory
by Wonton Glutinous Rice Balls
About This Novel
Wei Lin traveled through the heavens and awakened the panel - inventory. Equipment [Zhengyang Jin]: temper the body and increase internal strength Equipment [Baicao Jing]: Obtain the talent of herbal medicine and become a master of medicine Equipment [low-level spiritual stone (wood)]: restores a small amount of spiritual power every second Equipment [Dragon Inner Alchemy]: Obtain the body of a dragon and awaken talents and skills. ----- This is a fanfic of All Heavens Unlimited, a biography of mortals cultivating immortals in the main world. It will be followed by (to be determined) novels and animations such as Under One Person, Lord of Mysteries, Return of Spells, Death, Super Seminary, Fighting to Break the Sphere, and Covering the Sky. Please stay tuned.
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Official(38)Scraped 4d ago
I don't know what I'm writing. After obtaining the immortal cultivation technique, you don't practice, you get the opportunity to travel, and you don't travel. You just waste your time there, and there is a bullshit princess. You are still a five-spirited person. Even if you use thousand-year-old elixirs to refine elixirs, it will take you at least ten years to practice to the 13th level. After that, your foundation building will be even worse. If you don't improve your spiritual roots, you will be even worse than Han Li. All of this I don't think about it, and started to hang out with mortals again. Idiot, I don't go to Golden Light Master to snatch resources, and I don't travel through time to see if I can improve my spiritual roots, or kill more immortal cultivators. Now that I have spiritual roots, I practice spells, and then go to various markets to squat, single-handedly hunt those with weak cultivation, and then synthesize spiritual roots to make my spiritual roots stronger. Playing like a mortal here is mentally ill.
There is no upgrade, but after reading more than 20 chapters, I am still a mortal.
The key is that you are still a mortal after grabbing the bottle. What kind of martial arts can't your martial arts greatly increase after taking a thousand-year elixir? For four years, where are you playing as a mortal?
The writing is okay, but the main line is a bit crooked.
More than 40 chapters are still in the ordinary world. There are too many chapters about the birthday celebration of the Qixuanmen and the escorting princess. If I just read it out alone, I would think it is some kind of martial arts novel. This part loses one star for the author.
The equipment column of the world under one person is equipped with a supercomputer, and the brain calculation speed can be comparable to that of a powerful person. Those who learn to practice elixirs and weapon formations with great skill are the geniuses among geniuses.
One person's world ends hastily. As a time traveler, not getting the maximum benefit is a failure. As a modern person, one person's wisdom is not as important as the accumulation of wisdom of a civilization.
The hook is too high, because the mental strength is too low, and the protagonist is too mentally weak to stand it. To get the secrets, you have to go through Li Feiyu. Not to mention the trouble, the quality and quantity are not good, and you have to become Li Feiyu's nanny. I don't dare to take Han Li's bottle. Why would you approach Han Li if you don't take the bottle? It's difficult to survive but it's difficult to survive. It's flourishing but there are no resources and there is only trouble.
You have a lot of shit, you are so good at numbers
You said that the main world exists among mortals. I only saw you running around in martial arts. If you want to write about martial arts, just write about martial arts. There is so much nonsense.
To be honest, I really hate Xiu Xianwen. It's not that I hate Xiu Xianwen. I just hate it. The ruthless feeling in Xiu Xianwen
Same as history If you want to write martial arts, why do you write about mortals cultivating immortality in the first world?
Advice on world selection
Just follow whatever is popular in novels, movies and TV shows, just don't overindulge in old or bad stuff. For example, the introduction about Douluo Dou Po is meaningless. A book that has been written to death a long time ago has no new ideas. Moreover, the Dou Po system and the effect of the items in it on the protagonist's golden finger are actually no different from the mortal world in the main world. Where are the elixirs? It's useless to fight against fire. Mortals also have various spiritual fires and demonic fires. Even if it's a biological fire that accelerates the growth of plants, doesn't it have the same effect as the Mushroom King in Lord of Mysteries? The main point of the protagonist's golden finger is to bless various things and produce magical effects. The imagination is the most important, so mortals and mysteries are very suitable, and Douluo Dou Po is just average.
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Official(38)Scraped 4d ago
I don't know what I'm writing. After obtaining the immortal cultivation technique, you don't practice, you get the opportunity to travel, and you don't travel. You just waste your time there, and there is a bullshit princess. You are still a five-spirited person. Even if you use thousand-year-old elixirs to refine elixirs, it will take you at least ten years to practice to the 13th level. After that, your foundation building will be even worse. If you don't improve your spiritual roots, you will be even worse than Han Li. All of this I don't think about it, and started to hang out with mortals again. Idiot, I don't go to Golden Light Master to snatch resources, and I don't travel through time to see if I can improve my spiritual roots, or kill more immortal cultivators. Now that I have spiritual roots, I practice spells, and then go to various markets to squat, single-handedly hunt those with weak cultivation, and then synthesize spiritual roots to make my spiritual roots stronger. Playing like a mortal here is mentally ill.
There is no upgrade, but after reading more than 20 chapters, I am still a mortal.
The key is that you are still a mortal after grabbing the bottle. What kind of martial arts can't your martial arts greatly increase after taking a thousand-year elixir? For four years, where are you playing as a mortal?
The writing is okay, but the main line is a bit crooked.
More than 40 chapters are still in the ordinary world. There are too many chapters about the birthday celebration of the Qixuanmen and the escorting princess. If I just read it out alone, I would think it is some kind of martial arts novel. This part loses one star for the author.
The equipment column of the world under one person is equipped with a supercomputer, and the brain calculation speed can be comparable to that of a powerful person. Those who learn to practice elixirs and weapon formations with great skill are the geniuses among geniuses.
One person's world ends hastily. As a time traveler, not getting the maximum benefit is a failure. As a modern person, one person's wisdom is not as important as the accumulation of wisdom of a civilization.
The hook is too high, because the mental strength is too low, and the protagonist is too mentally weak to stand it. To get the secrets, you have to go through Li Feiyu. Not to mention the trouble, the quality and quantity are not good, and you have to become Li Feiyu's nanny. I don't dare to take Han Li's bottle. Why would you approach Han Li if you don't take the bottle? It's difficult to survive but it's difficult to survive. It's flourishing but there are no resources and there is only trouble.
You have a lot of shit, you are so good at numbers
You said that the main world exists among mortals. I only saw you running around in martial arts. If you want to write about martial arts, just write about martial arts. There is so much nonsense.
To be honest, I really hate Xiu Xianwen. It's not that I hate Xiu Xianwen. I just hate it. The ruthless feeling in Xiu Xianwen
Same as history If you want to write martial arts, why do you write about mortals cultivating immortality in the first world?
Advice on world selection
Just follow whatever is popular in novels, movies and TV shows, just don't overindulge in old or bad stuff. For example, the introduction about Douluo Dou Po is meaningless. A book that has been written to death a long time ago has no new ideas. Moreover, the Dou Po system and the effect of the items in it on the protagonist's golden finger are actually no different from the mortal world in the main world. Where are the elixirs? It's useless to fight against fire. Mortals also have various spiritual fires and demonic fires. Even if it's a biological fire that accelerates the growth of plants, doesn't it have the same effect as the Mushroom King in Lord of Mysteries? The main point of the protagonist's golden finger is to bless various things and produce magical effects. The imagination is the most important, so mortals and mysteries are very suitable, and Douluo Dou Po is just average.









