A Journey to the Heavens Starting from a Pirate
by I Have No Choice But To Write A Novel
About This Novel
Traveling through One Piece, Zack became the "consumable" with the highest mortality rate in the CP9 training camp. There are no system gifts, only two hidden talents: [Knowledge of All Realms] and [Realm Physique]. He is as forbearing as a wolf, well versed in the ways of the world, and plays the power field of the secret service at the palm of his hand. Everything is for one goal - to get that underestimated door fruit. When the fruit awakens, the "door" is no longer a simple space passage, but has been elevated to the power of concept: the enemy's attack can be decomposed by the infinite door, and his fist can travel through space and hit the vital point directly. And this is just the beginning. The world of pirates was just the first stop for him to accumulate raw capital. When Naruto, martial arts, and even a vaster world appear one after another on the other side of the "door"... Zach's purpose is clear: to plunder the resources of the heavens and use strategy to weave an invisible throne across all realms. This is an epic story of a realist who starts from CP9, works step by step, and finally becomes the ruler of all realms.
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Official(18)Scraped 19d ago
What are you writing in such a mess? Have you seen One Piece? Do you have common sense?
The story is okay because of the author Yun Ma. The protagonist's special abilities seem to have never been explained. The CP officer also looks capable. Isn't it a fact that everyone in the sea knows that fruits are randomly reborn after death? He saw Bruno dead and asked about the fruit. Why is he also a time traveler?
I read fandoms for fun stories, not for sadistic stories. I can't stand it after a few chapters.
The plot of One Piece World has been modified, you can watch it now
This is my first time writing a novel. When I saw everyone's criticism in the comment section, I humbly accepted it. I admit that the first copy of One Piece was not that good. After reading everyone's comments, I accepted them all. The good news is that the author has gone through a lot of mental struggles, physical and will training, and I have updated all the plots of One Piece. I personally think it is much better than what I wrote before. I apologize to everyone again. I know that being a newcomer is not the reason for poor writing, but I also hope that everyone will be a little more tolerant. If any book friends who have left can read these words, I hope that everyone can change their minds and come back to read the plot. At least you have a comparison to see if the newly written One Piece plot is still unpalatable, and it also gives me a chance to learn. The original One Piece plot, chapters 1-8, has been partially modified in Chapter 5, adding some background introduction and settings of the World Government. The rest, starting from Chapter 9 to Chapter 46, have all been rewritten. It should have a more fan-like feel, rather than being entirely original. Finally, I would like to apologize to everyone and bow! Ps: I would be very grateful if any book friends come back! !
Awesome
A clown can be portrayed as a behind-the-scenes ruler who is so ambitious that he wants to rule other dimensions. Sure enough, the so-called novel author doesn't understand the characters in the novel.
unlucky
I just saw where Bruno dropped the door fruit, which made me confused. I went back to the previous part and read it a few times. I am very clear that the author did not write that the protagonist has any special golden fingers that can directly explode the devil fruit. This is obviously contrary to the original setting, and it seems After more than ten chapters, the whole story has the same tone, a sadist. To sum up, after reading the introduction, I felt like a piece of chocolate. After reading the golden three chapters, I felt that the chocolate was a bit bitter. After reading more than ten chapters, I realized that this was like making shit into chocolate to trick me into eating it😐
How do you control the rebirth of a devil fruit without being hooked? Do you just rely on YY? 33
Rubbish, what age are you still writing about abuse?
Wu Geng Ji Hei, Mythology Yi Xiaochuan and Tian Long Ba Bu
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Official(18)Scraped 19d ago
What are you writing in such a mess? Have you seen One Piece? Do you have common sense?
The story is okay because of the author Yun Ma. The protagonist's special abilities seem to have never been explained. The CP officer also looks capable. Isn't it a fact that everyone in the sea knows that fruits are randomly reborn after death? He saw Bruno dead and asked about the fruit. Why is he also a time traveler?
I read fandoms for fun stories, not for sadistic stories. I can't stand it after a few chapters.
The plot of One Piece World has been modified, you can watch it now
This is my first time writing a novel. When I saw everyone's criticism in the comment section, I humbly accepted it. I admit that the first copy of One Piece was not that good. After reading everyone's comments, I accepted them all. The good news is that the author has gone through a lot of mental struggles, physical and will training, and I have updated all the plots of One Piece. I personally think it is much better than what I wrote before. I apologize to everyone again. I know that being a newcomer is not the reason for poor writing, but I also hope that everyone will be a little more tolerant. If any book friends who have left can read these words, I hope that everyone can change their minds and come back to read the plot. At least you have a comparison to see if the newly written One Piece plot is still unpalatable, and it also gives me a chance to learn. The original One Piece plot, chapters 1-8, has been partially modified in Chapter 5, adding some background introduction and settings of the World Government. The rest, starting from Chapter 9 to Chapter 46, have all been rewritten. It should have a more fan-like feel, rather than being entirely original. Finally, I would like to apologize to everyone and bow! Ps: I would be very grateful if any book friends come back! !
Awesome
A clown can be portrayed as a behind-the-scenes ruler who is so ambitious that he wants to rule other dimensions. Sure enough, the so-called novel author doesn't understand the characters in the novel.
unlucky
I just saw where Bruno dropped the door fruit, which made me confused. I went back to the previous part and read it a few times. I am very clear that the author did not write that the protagonist has any special golden fingers that can directly explode the devil fruit. This is obviously contrary to the original setting, and it seems After more than ten chapters, the whole story has the same tone, a sadist. To sum up, after reading the introduction, I felt like a piece of chocolate. After reading the golden three chapters, I felt that the chocolate was a bit bitter. After reading more than ten chapters, I realized that this was like making shit into chocolate to trick me into eating it😐
How do you control the rebirth of a devil fruit without being hooked? Do you just rely on YY? 33
Rubbish, what age are you still writing about abuse?
Wu Geng Ji Hei, Mythology Yi Xiaochuan and Tian Long Ba Bu
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