Dou Po: I Came from the Secret

The subject matter is quite good, um..., That's all

Water, water, water, too watery. 95% Of the photos were about me complaining about myself. After reading thirty photos, I didn't even walk out of the Xiao family's front door. It is recommended to start with fifty pictures if you want to see them. If you skip five pictures, you can connect to

The first ten chapters may be a bit wordy, but after ten chapters they get much better. After all, when I first wrote it, I couldn't help but want to add some drama. This situation will get much better after Chapter 20. Basically, it will advance the plot, and there will be less psychological description and the like. There is no way to change it in the future. Writing novels affects the whole body, and it has already been published. So, don't complain about this anymore, I'll just say it first. So from now on, I will delete the first few words that are too wordy. You should stop talking about them after I finish them. There are too many such things, and it is troublesome for me to read the comments. So for the first ten chapters, you can read them quickly and don't need to read them carefully. If you don't feel very interested after reading the first ten chapters, you can read to the back if possible. If you still don't like it after reading Chapter 20, then this novel is definitely not suitable for you, and I can't help it. In addition, it's okay to comment, to complain, and to be toxic. You have to give a reason for this, but please don't post any "those" emoticons. I'm a mysophobic person, and I also want to be in a good mood when reading other comments. Of course, it's okay if you want to scold the author. Most people who read novels are people who have fun, and so do I. It's okay to make jokes or scold the author when you see something you're unhappy with. As long as you don't scold him too harshly, I don't think there's any problem. Above, Miss Doll will not laugh.

Keep talking to yourself, stand-alone game,

I didn't see anything else except the protagonist's self-talk and self-righteousness.

I want to say that it is a bit outrageous to have a female protagonist. Don't you know what the characteristics of the Lord of Mystery are? If your order is high, you will be a monster, and your taste is a bit strong. Generally speaking, you don't write about heroines when writing about mysteries.

There is so much nonsense in this novel of yours.

Where is Shennong? Come to the rescue quickly

The garbage systems of the Mysterious World are compared with each other. The God of the Lord of Mysteries is equivalent to the foundation-building monk in the novel about cultivating immortals.

The introduction is okay, but I'll wait until I finish reading my novel with more than 2,000 chapters.