Douluo's Journey Through the Heavens

Is it the QQ bouncy kind or the soft and white kind?

Damn, how good is the single heroine Zhu Zhuqing?

The protagonist is 10 years old and still doesn't want to awaken his martial spirit? ? ? A 10-year-old looks seventeen or eighteen? Still strong? ? ? I say goodbye

Hey, what did you write? It feels like it was written randomly.

No one who uses sword spirit has written about cutting people's limbs or cutting them in half. And that's it? You don't even dare to kill, others will kill you, and still like this... Douluo or Xuanhuan just kill people casually... It's so difficult for Douluo to kill anyone. And the sword does more damage than the hammer, so you have to smash the hammer.

Where did the system go? The last 10 pictures have not appeared.

Author, are you kidding me? The most exciting moment of driving is gone. Are you kidding me? I suspect that you are an actor who came to play my role specially. I will send you some pictures.

First, I didn't mention the setting issues one by one. Many things have been changed. For example, Bone Douluo is a defensive system but you changed it to an agility attack system. In the past, the protagonist killed a 3300-year-old soul beast, but someone actually wanted to steal the soul ring. Can it be absorbed? I won't mention them one by one here. Second, the character of the protagonist is the kind of person who is constantly being messed with and can be forgiven immediately. As for the two women in the front, this is a big black mark and can be easily persuaded to quit. Also, the protagonist basically doesn't waste anything he sees that looks good, no matter what, this is also a black point. Third, there is not much to say about awakening the martial spirit at the age of ten. It is understandable that the martial arts has been practiced before. However, the protagonist awakens such a powerful martial spirit at level 10. Otherwise, a incomplete version or a low-fantasy version should be added in front, like the one shown in the TV series. Also, my energy, energy, and body have been perfected in the early days of physical training. Is the performance of physical strength too low? Fourth, this is probably the author's first time writing a book and he doesn't know how to avoid lightning. His writing skills will probably be improved later. This is just some advice. For the rest, book friends can look for them!

Awakening the martial soul at the age of ten, I can still support it if it is a bit poisonous. After all, I am practicing the basic body refining skills provided by the system, but when it comes to the second chapter, is this your combat power? I thought the author knew what spirit was and had practiced it so well that he couldn't even dodge this attack? Then the character design collapsed and Zhu Zhuqing would never kill him from the beginning.