
The Savior Organization I Made up Came True
About This Novel
The surface of the world is calm, but the inside is turbulent. The barrier of the main world is about to be broken, and the surrounding alien worlds take this opportunity to invade the main world. Qin Ran was born blind. He awakened to fabricate the system and took protecting the human race as his own responsibility. He fabricated an unprecedented ancient salvation organization. Recruiting talents, building a holy place, resisting invasion... As he completed his goals step by step, he suddenly discovered that the salvation organization he made up had come true.
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The young author seeks advice online from fellow book friends
I have been writing for more than a month, and Sanyang is constantly learning and growing. During this period, I also discovered many problems with my book. For example, there are many poisonous points in the front, which makes many book friends unable to persevere. There are also many people who say that the name of the organization is not good, that I am a studio, etc. In fact, Sanyang thinks these are minor problems. I am definitely not a studio (after all, the studio writes better than me, haha). There are also poisonous points that I can learn to avoid in the future. Now, Sanyang feels that the most important problem for him at the moment is that the content of the entire book is bland and there is no decent climax, which makes me very distressed. I was actually laying the groundwork to write it, but I just didn't feel comfortable writing it. It was almost meaningless, and the pretense was either awkward or a bit stiff. I was always looking for problems. I had a lot of ideas in my mind, and there were many interesting characters who didn't appear. I wanted to add them in, but I was afraid that the protagonist's role would be reduced (you can refer to things like Dolma for this). If you start from another line and use the protagonist to accompany you If I join in the same way, the progress of the story will be too slow (you can refer to John for this), so I am struggling with what to do to write this book well and live up to the book friends who have always supported me. Although my grades are not good, I still take you very seriously. I hope you know more and can leave some suggestions for Sanyang. Thank you all! ! !
Sorry, no more updates!
This book is Sanyang's first book, and Sanyang has always had high hopes for it, but due to various reasons, it still can't go on. Most of them are my own emotional problems at work, the economy is in recession, I can't work after the New Year, and I also have some personal emotional problems. Of course, this book is not well written, and not many people read it. I originally thought that I could hold on to 500,000 to 1 million, but as expected, I am still not as good as those who can hold on to a single machine. Although writing books is my hobby, it is sad to have no feedback from anyone. Plus, after the New Year, I have all kinds of worries and I have no motivation. I am really grateful to the few book friends who have always insisted on accompanying me. They can tolerate the poisonous points in the book and leave one or two comments for me from time to time, giving me some motivation to continue coding. I am sorry that I still failed you! I don't know if I will be able to write again in the future. Maybe when I find a job, I can muster up the courage to pick up the keyboard again, haha!
I really like this type of novel! It's a pity that it's no longer updated. Do you have any recommendations?
I personally think it's really good, better than most books on the market. It's a pity that it ends hastily. I hope the author will continue to work hard.
Now I'm still writing about European and American style and wait until I enter the palace.
To be honest, I'm tired of seeing it
I'm tired of watching Stigmata, Divine Shield, Dawn, and Fire. The Aboriginals started this series fiercely and you just copied it. It's just that little thing that you've been speculating about. The plots are so similar that I'm tired of watching them!
Not finished
Unfortunately, I thought it was over, but the representative said that the ending had been written... But it turned out that it was finished...
The bad ending is particularly bad, it makes people's appetites go away.
I hope it doesn't end hastily
Come on author, the book is still good.
tm Another bad book
No talking point, really no talking point, Speechless to the extreme.
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Official(13)Scraped 21d ago
The young author seeks advice online from fellow book friends
I have been writing for more than a month, and Sanyang is constantly learning and growing. During this period, I also discovered many problems with my book. For example, there are many poisonous points in the front, which makes many book friends unable to persevere. There are also many people who say that the name of the organization is not good, that I am a studio, etc. In fact, Sanyang thinks these are minor problems. I am definitely not a studio (after all, the studio writes better than me, haha). There are also poisonous points that I can learn to avoid in the future. Now, Sanyang feels that the most important problem for him at the moment is that the content of the entire book is bland and there is no decent climax, which makes me very distressed. I was actually laying the groundwork to write it, but I just didn't feel comfortable writing it. It was almost meaningless, and the pretense was either awkward or a bit stiff. I was always looking for problems. I had a lot of ideas in my mind, and there were many interesting characters who didn't appear. I wanted to add them in, but I was afraid that the protagonist's role would be reduced (you can refer to things like Dolma for this). If you start from another line and use the protagonist to accompany you If I join in the same way, the progress of the story will be too slow (you can refer to John for this), so I am struggling with what to do to write this book well and live up to the book friends who have always supported me. Although my grades are not good, I still take you very seriously. I hope you know more and can leave some suggestions for Sanyang. Thank you all! ! !
Sorry, no more updates!
This book is Sanyang's first book, and Sanyang has always had high hopes for it, but due to various reasons, it still can't go on. Most of them are my own emotional problems at work, the economy is in recession, I can't work after the New Year, and I also have some personal emotional problems. Of course, this book is not well written, and not many people read it. I originally thought that I could hold on to 500,000 to 1 million, but as expected, I am still not as good as those who can hold on to a single machine. Although writing books is my hobby, it is sad to have no feedback from anyone. Plus, after the New Year, I have all kinds of worries and I have no motivation. I am really grateful to the few book friends who have always insisted on accompanying me. They can tolerate the poisonous points in the book and leave one or two comments for me from time to time, giving me some motivation to continue coding. I am sorry that I still failed you! I don't know if I will be able to write again in the future. Maybe when I find a job, I can muster up the courage to pick up the keyboard again, haha!
I really like this type of novel! It's a pity that it's no longer updated. Do you have any recommendations?
I personally think it's really good, better than most books on the market. It's a pity that it ends hastily. I hope the author will continue to work hard.
Now I'm still writing about European and American style and wait until I enter the palace.
To be honest, I'm tired of seeing it
I'm tired of watching Stigmata, Divine Shield, Dawn, and Fire. The Aboriginals started this series fiercely and you just copied it. It's just that little thing that you've been speculating about. The plots are so similar that I'm tired of watching them!
Not finished
Unfortunately, I thought it was over, but the representative said that the ending had been written... But it turned out that it was finished...
The bad ending is particularly bad, it makes people's appetites go away.
I hope it doesn't end hastily
Come on author, the book is still good.
tm Another bad book
No talking point, really no talking point, Speechless to the extreme.









