Shadow Piao: Starting from the Siheyuan

After getting married, I reluctantly watched part of it. Liang Sitian really didn't like it. Lou Xiao'an knew that you were a prostitute and gave you a child. It didn't matter if she didn't give her a birthright. Liang, you gave her a birthright? I thought you were a scumbag but you can still read it. It's really disgusting to set up an archway when you are a sign🤢. I thought you were a scumbag for not getting married. I didn't expect you to be a harem stallion. I feel like someone else wrote it. You are as annoying as the bird sister. [Emot=default,02/]

The first hundred chapters are quite good, with different thinking angles, and neatly deal with the pension group, the change of feelings for Lou Xiao'e, and the problems of the He family... But the rest is very painful to read, swinging from left to right, verbose... Arguing but not arguing, idle but not idle, that's it. He wanted to keep a distance from the Lou family, and used the Lou family as a source of confidence. He went back to the Lou family once to get food and eat soft rice. He said that he was afraid of the wind, that he did not have a clear vision and did not want to participate in the struggle, and he kept grinding in the whirlpool between the Lou family and Director Li for dozens of chapters.

You must have the most basic logic! Your neighbors are the kind of people who like to make decisions for you. If your living habits, consumption habits, and level are incompatible with others, then guess whether others will report you?

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Anyone who has read a lot of novels will know that the real absurdity is reality, and only logic is introduced in novels, movies, and TV dramas. . No matter how you write, it is best to have an outline. This way, the author can write in an orderly manner, and book readers will know what the author wants to express. . To be honest, from the beginning of Siheyuan to Zuoer, Ode to Joy, and Twenty Not Confused, the daughter of the Qiao family has watched almost ten worlds. I have never found that line in the author's outline! I read a lot of the content skipping chapters because it was too messy, too scattered, and too casual. . Take the nearest one, the children of the Qiao family, for example. In the first chapter, the protagonist said something that I found particularly speechless: "The 1980s were boring, but finding a girlfriend was fun." Play? ! With this kind of mentality, in that era, could you afford it? Even if you set the protagonist's character to be a scumbag, is this lower limit too low? Although Lu Yan next door is a scumbag, in a period drama where Lu Yan travels through time, the most he can do is kill some livestock! Lu Yan shouldn't play with emotions, okay? . . Almost ten worlds! There is no purpose or theme. The protagonist has always been traveling through the world with the mentality of a gamer! If there is a cannon, attack it; if there is a frame, attack it. Yes! The protagonist is capable and capable. He can make money as he pleases and waste it as he pleases! But! You are writing a novel! What about logic? What about the outline? Could it be that it has always been written like this, scattered and scattered? From the opening score of 8.9 To the current score of 8.0, Does the author really not care? (Just pretend I didn't say it)

That's rubbish, you treat the women in those TV series as sluts and you can't even walk when you see them. In which era did you go out and have a sexy chat? It's rubbish.

The front is okay, but the time skips later, especially Qin Huairu, married and divorced, married Yi Zhonghai, divorced and reunited with He Yuzhu. So perverted

Don't pay attention to these nonsense. With the current portrayal of female characters in film and television dramas, I want to go up and slap her twice. Only original heroines who are pure and flawless can be worthy of our brother Tao. Or just treat these female characters as Huang Mao and disgusting. If you want to play pure love, you have to be an original heroine! I feel sick to my stomach when Zhu Tianliu chooses the heroine of the film and television drama. Only those with heavy tastes can tolerate the female characters in this film and television drama!

Just look at the ratings and you'll know, go ahead and delete it.

In 1965, it was too unconventional to talk dirty to women.