Totem Spirit System

This book is very good so far! I hope the author will keep up the good work😘😘

One chapter a day is not enough!

How can a primitive girl be beautiful? Have you been brainwashed by TV series or fairy tale novels? In that era of starvation, in a down-and-out tribe, do you tell me there will be any good-looking girls? Not to mention malnutrition, it is impossible to take a bath, because if you take a bath, you will get sick, and you will be exposed to the wind and sun all day long. Even in the Qing Dynasty, commoner women would not be good-looking. Are you telling me that there are girls among primitive people that modern people find good-looking? It's not that I'm deliberately looking for trouble, someone will definitely say: What's your name for the novel? But which of the good novels has bad logic? If the author wants to start from primitive society, he should check more information and understand more. Novels are also a kind of literary style. They should be written reasonably. What does it mean to write blindly based on one's own memory?

The writing was very good at first, and I really enjoyed reading it, but later on it was completely off track. It was originally about a god leading the development of the territory, but in the end the god ran away and went to develop elsewhere. Isn't it funny? This is not a place where a god should lead his territory to conquer his surroundings. Then get to know the place around you. Keep getting stronger and keep evolving. You will travel thousands of miles in one run. Even if you want to lay a foreshadowing, this is going too far. This is just making up words! Are you a hegemony type or a tourism type? Personally, I don't like watching it. The author please think carefully

Why did you switch from farming to writing about another world? I want to ask when you can come back. This totem went out to wander around on its own, and the village didn't care. You wouldn't just write about the reincarnation department and it would become invincible after so many years of development. Just wait for you to go back and issue an order. The process is not boring.

The protagonist is such an idiot, and the system is like the protagonist's father. The protagonist is the tool the system is looking for. I haven't discovered the advantages, so it's okay to be stupid.

The original text "Xiaobai chose the old chief to impart knowledge, of course, not only because he is a chief, but because he has a delicate, pure and lovely granddaughter.". Is the protagonist judging this "delicate, pure and lovely" based on the situation of primitive society or based on the aesthetics of a modern person?

I have been cultivating the Immortal Emperor for 3000 years. I used poison to enter the Tao, and everyone calls me the Poison-eating Immortal Emperor. I originally thought that I was immune to all poisons, but did I ever think that I would open this book and read it when I had nothing to do, and suddenly the poisonous gas broke out, and I wanted to block it, but I never imagined that the poisonous gas was so terrifying that my majestic Immortal Emperor's cultivation could not resist it, and it caused me to be injured so severely that I would need to cultivate for 50,000 years. I kindly tell you ordinary people today that this book cannot be read, and anyone who reads it will die.

I feel like the protagonist's IQ is poisonous... Another question is, were there so many beautiful women in primitive times? Looking at the protagonist, I feel like those brainless pigs who shudder when they see a woman and can't walk... It feels like the beginning of more than a hundred chapters is based on wanting women as a clue to advance the plot. If you feel good, you should love it, and you can love a few more... Sigh~ What a pity for a good book...

I don't know what the author is thinking! After so many years of online literature, many things still cannot be changed. 1) The protagonist always talks about being an otaku, I wonder if there is some misunderstanding! Otaku: Lives alone and doesn't really like life outside! It has an aura of indifference (because I meet too many women) (I don't know if it's unique to me)! Because I have a lot of time, I prefer to summarize my shortcomings every day to reduce mistakes! And because I have time, I like to think. 2) I don't know why there are so many facial expressions! Well, maybe the author thinks it's cute, but brother! What you write is a novel... It's easy to jump into drama! 3) So many complaints about the system again! Also drunk. This kind of novel makes people look very watery and feels like a lot of nonsense. 4)A woman and a beauty! I'm really speechless. This kind of novel should be a little colder... (Especially Chapter 9 or 10: Because you are a beauty! You must have never heard this sentence. Haha) Because I have a lot of free time, I summarize it: It's a very creative novel, but it's a pity that the plot often makes people jump from the plot! I hope the author will grasp the main points and reduce unnecessary things. Don't let people think that the protagonist is not irreplaceable, after all, every man can be selected by the system! There must be something that others don't have. I personally don't want to select him because he is stupid and naive, and he is easier to control.