Warhammer: Raven of Delirium

Advantages: The characters in the stage of recovering the planet are well drawn, and the story is quite smooth and natural. Disadvantages: The characterization of the protagonist is insufficient. After seeing the 100th chapter, the impression of the protagonist is not as good as that of Muto in the early stage. What qualities does the protagonist have that can make the original body give special seeds? Is it because the Primarch is willing to deal with all the bloodshed in the shadows, or is it the omnipotent brain trust of the Primarch. The later stories are also about a hammer in the west and a hammer in the east. One is a conflict with the Night Lord, another is fighting an alien with a fire dragon, and another is returning home to collect the flagship. I feel that every fragment written by the author has a role, but together it is very scattered. If you look at the Emperor's Angel of Death, the main plot in the early stage is for the protagonist to rebuild the battle group and bury various hidden plots. In the mid-term, the protagonist has more strength and begins to reveal the secrets of the hidden plot. Regardless of whether the content is good or bad, the writing method is very comfortable and the main line is clear.

I have an idea, can I pick up Clarks' sister? I'm really looking forward to Clarks' expression when the time comes.

It's so beautiful, I can't wait to update it quickly.

There is a Ravenspeak among the Raven Guard that can identify other Legion spies Astartes.

The subject matter is quite good, but the update speed is a bit slow.

I have to make up ten words, come on, come on, come on, come on

A pretty good novel, just to make up the word count

It looks good. Please update it soon. There are four more words.