Yunlingxian Road

You have two spiritual roots, what should you do? It is actually in the same realm as the three spiritual roots, so why do you still say that you have double zero roots? You are too slow to directly say that you have three spiritual roots. According to your inference, it takes sixty or seventy years of normal cultivation to achieve perfection with three spiritual roots. Then how did the person you mentioned before achieve perfection in his 40s? He has a single spiritual root! A person with double spiritual roots can only practice the fourth phase of Qi Refining at the age of 20, and if he stays in the fourth phase of Qi Refining, he will stay for four or five years. So I want to ask you about the first to second phases of foundation building. How many years do you want to stay? What about the golden elixir period? As you write this, can you read more what others have written? Your setting is too slow. I just feel anxious. Your cultivation speed is almost the same as other people's pseudo-spiritual roots. If you think it's too fast to write about double spiritual roots, why don't you just write about fifty roots? Too slow

I saw 204, and I feel like I can't stand it anymore. The writing is a little lacking, and there are a lot of bad things. There are four girls, and there is an enemy for no apparent reason. The beads live in the Dantian. It's an old routine. I feel like I can guess the rest. The plot is very blunt and a lot of things are not consistent with common sense. Especially the Jindan tribe is summoned by Qingyun Sect to have a blood feud. It's very blunt. The whole family only knows that the founder is Jindan and there is no Jindan. How did Qingyun Sect know that and was summoned? Really 6? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

The protagonist had his soul tested when he was six years old, and there were twenty-six people in the same year. This is the most, so there are an average of ten people every year, right? You shouldn't be released from the mountain if you're underage, right? That means there are more than 100 people studying there, so how come there are only more than 200 monks in the whole clan?

Overall, it's okay, but your cultivation is improving too slowly. You have two spiritual roots after all. What's the difference between you and someone with three spiritual roots now?

Mortal stream is not so rubbish. The second spirit root feels like it is not as good as the fourth spirit root. It might as well be written as fw.

There is nothing else. It is really uncomfortable to watch in this realm. The only one with double spiritual roots in the whole family really does not show any advantage. Besides, the description of the cultivation of other members of the family in the book is not exaggerated. So why should a three spiritual roots and four spiritual roots have the same cultivation as two spiritual roots? And I see that the protagonist in the back also has a spiritual body. The cultivation speed of dual spiritual roots and spiritual body is the same as that of a three spiritual roots. It would be fine if the protagonist could cross two or three small realms and easily kill enemies. To fight a casual cultivator who is one realm above him, he would have to use all his means.

There is no reason why the rating is so low! The hero's brain is rusty! Waste of qualifications

Two spiritual roots, it seems awkward to build the foundation after almost two hundred chapters. You can write faster after the foundation is established, otherwise it would be better if you just write three or four spiritual roots.

It seems awkward. The biggest awkward point is that the speed at which two spiritual roots can be written into five spiritual roots is the speed of family monks. The casual cultivators who can build the foundation are not only the heavenly spiritual roots and foreign spiritual roots, but also the secondary spiritual roots. It just depends on how round your back is. The more you look at it, the more awkward it becomes.

But it's nothing good. The author's writing style is very childish. At the beginning, he uses "reproduction" and "reproduction" to describe the family population. He doesn't even use the word reproduction. The protagonist's parents are both family cultivators, but when the protagonist discovers that he has spiritual roots and can join the family to cultivate, there is an inexplicable separation and crying scene. . . All in all, I read about ten chapters, and it was draggy and mediocre, with no story or climax to watch.