
In American Comics, Mai Shiranui is My First Choice
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New book, People in Hong Kong Comprehensive, Winner Takes All, Everyone, please support me!
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@ summer north wind
Stealing Stars in September Liu Xing (blood of hell), September, October, Cang Yue, Greedy Wolf, Lilith, Xuan Yue, Lucifer, March, April, Muir V (Mr. K), God of Karen Kaya (law of the universe), Mo Ming No. 4 (Summoning zombies), martial arts, blind spear, flying blade (sword control), Ruan Ning (pointing acupuncture points, knowing how to use medicine), Iron Face, Hitomi, Dragon, Taiya (Mother of the Demon World), Little Demon Girl, Jackie Chan's Adventures Daolong, Demon Dragon, Curse Lan, Bo Gang, Sao Feng, Zhongsu, Basha, Shengdu (Twelve Zodiac Talisman), Dikui, Ximu, Ghost Mask: Tara Mask, Nijia Mask, Lazo Mask, Bart Mask, Samo Mask, Ika Mask, Resu Mask, Mingta Mask, Kabo Mask, Manjia Mask, Fantasy Westward Journey Swordsman, Bone Elf, Xiaoyaosheng, Feiyannu, Yingnuxia, Naruto Sage of Six Paths, Hamura Otsutsuki, Kaguya Otsutsuki, Orochimaru, Moe Academy, Dark Emperor, Dark Brother, Balala Little Fairy, Gunara, Fairy King, Fairy Queen, Pleasure Prince, Dragon Ball Enma, Kaio, Grand Kaio, Angel, God of Destruction, Kaiojin, Great Priest, All King, Frieza, Broly, Son Gohan, Son Goten, Vegeta, Trunks, Piccolo, Kame Sennin , Kaio, All-King, Garin Sage, Karin Sage, Frieza, Dr. Gero, Gotenks, Majin Buu, Kakarot, Broly, Fortune Teller, Cell, Tenjin Rice, Evil Thought Wave, Hit, Combined Zamasu, Beerus, Super 1-star dragon, 2-star dragon, 3-star dragon, 4-star dragon, 5-star dragon, 6-star dragon, 7-star dragon, Metal Gula, Bear Haunted Danzi, Chinese boy, Black Fox King, Pigman, Toxic Phantom Moth, King of Darkness, Five Spirit King, Demon Dragon King (Rose Prince, Two-Headed Dragon), Nightmare King, Barrow (time travel, teleportation, item: Source of Dark Five Spirits),
No way
Unable to bear it anymore, the people he summoned killed each other. What's more, what's written is completely wrong. It's all nonsense.
As the mastermind behind the scenes, I have played too many roles, and the female role is purely to promote the protagonist. The image of Ancient One has been ruined. Many of the puppet characters have copied the fate of characters in other works, borrowed their influence, and yet behaved completely inconsistent with their identity and character.
suggestion
Would you like to write more about the protagonist? It's boring to write about all these supporting characters. Why?
suggestion
(I'm talking about mine, if it's wrong, just think of it as fart) I suggest that the technician in the Eternals movie should not be included in the novel, as it is easy to offend the trolls. After all, the movie is "correct" (everyone understands it) If you want to write, I suggest you make major changes from character modeling to character events, but it will easily collapse.
Actually consuming his own power
To collect emotional points, you have to kill each other. How stupid. You can set your allegiance to yourself, you can know each other's existence, you can fight and hurt, as long as you don't die. It's really not possible to open a Vought company. The decent people and the villains confront each other and make a fuss. What's the use of making small fuss? And the people who can make money are not kept for themselves. For example, Tang Niu invests in him to open a chain of restaurants, and brings the doctor to his company to make money for himself.
big snake
I'm kind of looking forward to Orochi's appearance, the Will of the Earth
At the beginning of Shiranui Maiyang, the killer S. H. I. E. L. D. Is looking for Poison
Where is Charmi?
Will the protagonist not accept Sharmi? Isn't Charmi good? ? ?
my favorite type
Come on, author. I like this book very much.
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Official(18)Scraped 4d ago
@ summer north wind
Stealing Stars in September Liu Xing (blood of hell), September, October, Cang Yue, Greedy Wolf, Lilith, Xuan Yue, Lucifer, March, April, Muir V (Mr. K), God of Karen Kaya (law of the universe), Mo Ming No. 4 (Summoning zombies), martial arts, blind spear, flying blade (sword control), Ruan Ning (pointing acupuncture points, knowing how to use medicine), Iron Face, Hitomi, Dragon, Taiya (Mother of the Demon World), Little Demon Girl, Jackie Chan's Adventures Daolong, Demon Dragon, Curse Lan, Bo Gang, Sao Feng, Zhongsu, Basha, Shengdu (Twelve Zodiac Talisman), Dikui, Ximu, Ghost Mask: Tara Mask, Nijia Mask, Lazo Mask, Bart Mask, Samo Mask, Ika Mask, Resu Mask, Mingta Mask, Kabo Mask, Manjia Mask, Fantasy Westward Journey Swordsman, Bone Elf, Xiaoyaosheng, Feiyannu, Yingnuxia, Naruto Sage of Six Paths, Hamura Otsutsuki, Kaguya Otsutsuki, Orochimaru, Moe Academy, Dark Emperor, Dark Brother, Balala Little Fairy, Gunara, Fairy King, Fairy Queen, Pleasure Prince, Dragon Ball Enma, Kaio, Grand Kaio, Angel, God of Destruction, Kaiojin, Great Priest, All King, Frieza, Broly, Son Gohan, Son Goten, Vegeta, Trunks, Piccolo, Kame Sennin , Kaio, All-King, Garin Sage, Karin Sage, Frieza, Dr. Gero, Gotenks, Majin Buu, Kakarot, Broly, Fortune Teller, Cell, Tenjin Rice, Evil Thought Wave, Hit, Combined Zamasu, Beerus, Super 1-star dragon, 2-star dragon, 3-star dragon, 4-star dragon, 5-star dragon, 6-star dragon, 7-star dragon, Metal Gula, Bear Haunted Danzi, Chinese boy, Black Fox King, Pigman, Toxic Phantom Moth, King of Darkness, Five Spirit King, Demon Dragon King (Rose Prince, Two-Headed Dragon), Nightmare King, Barrow (time travel, teleportation, item: Source of Dark Five Spirits),
No way
Unable to bear it anymore, the people he summoned killed each other. What's more, what's written is completely wrong. It's all nonsense.
As the mastermind behind the scenes, I have played too many roles, and the female role is purely to promote the protagonist. The image of Ancient One has been ruined. Many of the puppet characters have copied the fate of characters in other works, borrowed their influence, and yet behaved completely inconsistent with their identity and character.
suggestion
Would you like to write more about the protagonist? It's boring to write about all these supporting characters. Why?
suggestion
(I'm talking about mine, if it's wrong, just think of it as fart) I suggest that the technician in the Eternals movie should not be included in the novel, as it is easy to offend the trolls. After all, the movie is "correct" (everyone understands it) If you want to write, I suggest you make major changes from character modeling to character events, but it will easily collapse.
Actually consuming his own power
To collect emotional points, you have to kill each other. How stupid. You can set your allegiance to yourself, you can know each other's existence, you can fight and hurt, as long as you don't die. It's really not possible to open a Vought company. The decent people and the villains confront each other and make a fuss. What's the use of making small fuss? And the people who can make money are not kept for themselves. For example, Tang Niu invests in him to open a chain of restaurants, and brings the doctor to his company to make money for himself.
big snake
I'm kind of looking forward to Orochi's appearance, the Will of the Earth
At the beginning of Shiranui Maiyang, the killer S. H. I. E. L. D. Is looking for Poison
Where is Charmi?
Will the protagonist not accept Sharmi? Isn't Charmi good? ? ?
my favorite type
Come on, author. I like this book very much.













