There is a Clan of Immortals on Taoyuan Mountain
About This Novel
Taoyuan Mountain is the place where the Fang family was founded. Generations of people from the Fang clan have left here to work hard in the world of immortality. I have published a new book, "The Family Starting from Yutanshan", asking for your attention.
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Official(26)Scraped 22d ago
This is not a reason
What did you write? The world of cultivating immortals is not modern. In modern times, you can have emotions. If you dare to cause trouble in the world of cultivating immortals, people will die directly. Be funny!
fine.
I hope it can continue without a female protagonist. This can reduce a lot of poison points.
Overall, the beginning of the book is chaotic, the writing is immature, and the plot is childish, like a running account. It is recommended that the author refer to other fairy tales.
Seeing that Chapter 30 is a mess, the characters are childish and the plot is okay, so I'll give it 3 stars.
Killing time and dealing with expressions
There is only one word that makes me feel when I read it: Chaos, the plot is chaotic, people are in chaos, and the family is in chaos.
Speechless=_=
It was too chaotic. The family was in chaos at the beginning. This was a failure.
Come on, come on, don't be too mean!
This protagonist has no brain at all. I really doubt how he survives to this day. He is so brainless!
Yin and Yang represent day and night. I really didn't expect that.
heroine
Why didn't the assignment write about the heroine? This book will not have a female protagonist.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(26)Scraped 22d ago
This is not a reason
What did you write? The world of cultivating immortals is not modern. In modern times, you can have emotions. If you dare to cause trouble in the world of cultivating immortals, people will die directly. Be funny!
fine.
I hope it can continue without a female protagonist. This can reduce a lot of poison points.
Overall, the beginning of the book is chaotic, the writing is immature, and the plot is childish, like a running account. It is recommended that the author refer to other fairy tales.
Seeing that Chapter 30 is a mess, the characters are childish and the plot is okay, so I'll give it 3 stars.
Killing time and dealing with expressions
There is only one word that makes me feel when I read it: Chaos, the plot is chaotic, people are in chaos, and the family is in chaos.
Speechless=_=
It was too chaotic. The family was in chaos at the beginning. This was a failure.
Come on, come on, don't be too mean!
This protagonist has no brain at all. I really doubt how he survives to this day. He is so brainless!
Yin and Yang represent day and night. I really didn't expect that.
heroine
Why didn't the assignment write about the heroine? This book will not have a female protagonist.
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