Farming Records of the Xiuxian Family

I have been a bookworm for more than 5,000 hours and would like to give some superficial suggestions. First of all, regarding the issue of cultivation, I think the novels about cultivating immortals should go down the lines of Qi training, foundation building, golden elixir, and Yuanying. This way, it is easier for readers to accept it. If the name is suddenly changed, it will feel uncomfortable. Another one is to briefly describe the world in the first chapter to let readers know how big the world is and what powerful sects and families there are. This can be written a little, for example: one saint, two sects, three gangs, four sects, five clans and six sects. Then, talk about the level division you designed. Finally, I think the perspectives of reading novels can be divided into three types: one is the substitution type, which gives readers the feeling that they are the protagonists. Of course, this requires good writing skills; the second is to look at it from the perspective of God; and the third is to look at it as a bystander. What I don't like the most is to look at it as a bystander, because sometimes if you don't look carefully, or you jump to one or two words, you feel confused. What is this about? What did he do? Don't know anything. Generally speaking, in better novels, the readers will see it from God's perspective at the beginning. After more than ten or dozens of chapters, the readers will gradually become immersed in the book. However, I have read more than 50 chapters of this book, and I still don't have a sense of immersion, and even some of it is vague. But there are only seven or eight family novels about immortality. This one is okay, at least it's not at the bottom, it's pretty good. Finally, I wish this book will become more and more popular!

No matter how peaceful the immortal cultivators are, they are not a group that can be discussed in person, right?

In the early stage, being kicked out of the sect was a bit toxic, and the villain was a bit stupid, but the rest was okay.

Is there no senior member of this family?

I hope the author can get the setting right before writing next time. The realm of the island is purple moss? Should the one in the mountainous area be called the Anomatis realm ? It's just that because of the increase in population, the amount of land has also increased. Isn't it because of land reclamation?

It's not bad, but chapters 11 and 12 are confusing. .