
Konoha's Illusion Master
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Official(8)Scraped 20d ago
I think what you wrote doesn't sound like a time traveler, but more like an aboriginal who has not been beaten up by society.
Yakushi Kabuto is dead now. What should we do in the fourth battle? Author
Konoha's illusion master
There are very few Naruto fanfics where the protagonist is proficient in "genjutsu", so it's worth reading.
This is a nanny-type protagonist
I gave up on the first chapter. The protagonist just acts like a licking dog. In life, if you don't criticize others, no one will laugh at anyone, but you have to go the extra mile to cover it up. Why bother?
The first dozen chapters were okay
There are 218 chapters in total. The first 50 chapters are just an illusion, and there is no preparation for the protagonist to practice illusion. After the soul is strengthened, he learns to fly the thunder god. It is really good. If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, just write less. It's so easy to make a fool of yourself, but you still have to add Keiko and create a small conflict. I'm sick. You can't write well. What you write is too vulgar and disgusting.
People who graduate from elementary school write novels, but the writing is not good, the plot is not good, there are many typos, and the sentences are not coherent. Go for the big screw
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Official(8)Scraped 20d ago
I think what you wrote doesn't sound like a time traveler, but more like an aboriginal who has not been beaten up by society.
Yakushi Kabuto is dead now. What should we do in the fourth battle? Author
Konoha's illusion master
There are very few Naruto fanfics where the protagonist is proficient in "genjutsu", so it's worth reading.
This is a nanny-type protagonist
I gave up on the first chapter. The protagonist just acts like a licking dog. In life, if you don't criticize others, no one will laugh at anyone, but you have to go the extra mile to cover it up. Why bother?
The first dozen chapters were okay
There are 218 chapters in total. The first 50 chapters are just an illusion, and there is no preparation for the protagonist to practice illusion. After the soul is strengthened, he learns to fly the thunder god. It is really good. If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, just write less. It's so easy to make a fool of yourself, but you still have to add Keiko and create a small conflict. I'm sick. You can't write well. What you write is too vulgar and disgusting.
People who graduate from elementary school write novels, but the writing is not good, the plot is not good, there are many typos, and the sentences are not coherent. Go for the big screw










