Star Wholesaler

After reading the first few chapters, I don't know who the protagonist is, so. . . But I still give it five stars. Although I didn't understand the first few chapters, I didn't have the intention to read further.

I feel that when you write a book, you are a bit too popular. Sometimes you write several analytical parts of a conversation, which is too cumbersome.

In the first chapter, it was written that Mr. Hui was worth millions, and later it was written that the house was worth tens of millions. Although it is not a bug, it looks quite awkward. It is best to modify it.

Can anyone tell me if this book is good? Has anyone tried reading it?

Well written, keep up the good work.

Don't be discouraged, you have written too few words now. , So not many people watch it. Many people want to enrich themselves with books and then read them.

One thing is that the way you write this novel makes it awkward to read. It's not that it's incoherent or bad, it just feels like someone is reading to you without any intonation. Feel this for yourself.

You are just like what others say to me. I don't want to hear it. I have to listen to it. It's very uncomfortable. If you keep doing this, just skip some of the analysis. Most people don't want to hear this.

Very nice. . . . More updates

In fact, your writing is very good. Others have not seen it, just because there is no recommendation position. If others see it, they will also like it very much. Come on!