There is a Door in My Mind

New author, new book, there are still many holes in the writing, I accept it humbly. Book reviews will not be deleted Because these book reviews are reminders to myself, I will gradually improve. But please don't use insulting words. Many book reviews are very unpleasant, but this is the truth. I am very grateful to such people for their criticism, so that I can improve my abilities. It will not cause inflammation unless it is excessive. Read the book in a civilized way, if you don't like it please delete it and ignore it. Thanks......

Here comes the new book list. I have always liked reading period articles. It is rare for an article to stand out from the crowd of courtyard houses. It is really good. The author controls the plot very well, the plot is compact and humorous, and at the same time, he advances the plot without forgetting to leave foreshadowing and suspense. Good article It's just that the number of words is a bit short. Please do more work.

I often see readers giving me large recommendation votes. I have to go to work every day and write books, so I'm a bit busy... And now that there are more people, I can't thank everyone individually... But I will remember each of your votes... I can't persevere without your support... Thank you very much...

It's well written and worth reading. Please keep updating the author.

I couldn't hold on any longer, so I gave up. Mature people should make the choices in your book. Sorry, I'm immature and find it difficult to accept. Let's put it that way. The violent temper of modern people. I'll probably look for an opportunity to kill everyone else. Even if you go to jail, it's worth it. See the pretentiousness between him and his mother. I just want to say one thing. If I am born but not nourished, why should I be born? You'll die there sooner or later, so it's better to try it outside. This is obviously a mother who wants to force her child to death. If you tell me, 80% of the time I will make it clear. Cut off the relationship directly.

The writing is okay, but the plot is not very good and too frustrating, and the protagonist's personality is not good. The protagonist is a time traveler, right? He's such a big man, but he's indecisive and not ruthless enough. Who knows if he quietly kills someone? Who would doubt the protagonist? Compared to the protagonist, she is still young, and it is really sad that the protagonist has such a mother! As mentioned earlier, the protagonist is always influenced by the original owner, but have you ever thought about the original owner's resentment? After all, he was beaten to death, and he died without any resentment? And the protagonist never thought about avenging the original owner. Your writing is the same as the palace fighting drama, not so aggrieved. It is better to write about rural life, how to make money, how to use the golden finger to become stronger, and it is better to write it in a light-hearted way. Mainly, your grudges and disputes are too uncomfortable!

I hope friends who pass by can leave their footprints and give a good review... Thank you...

Are they two heroines? If so, I won't waste my time

Dear book friends, I'm sorry that the third-party updates of this book have been suspended for a week. This is out of my control. I guess someone found that many books are like this... It is normal for the starting point to be updated every day. Because I don't know very well when no one here on QQ asks. Terribly sorry......

You have the ability to ask others to decide your life and death and that of your family members. You have space and ideas of your own, but you don't even use your own power. You can also be an underground emperor or something. Everyone will have ambitions and desires, but what you write here is only the Holy Mother.