Mysterious Resurrection: Nine Hells and Underworld

8 of the 10 chapters are written about useless supporting characters. I won't talk about the opening one. It can be explained as being suppressed and unable to use the supernatural. He needs that person to help resuscitate. Later, the prison test ability can be solved in a maximum of 300 words. A lot of things are solved. Just go into the ghost land and randomly select a few people to experiment. Just explain your ability to the audience. There are so many scenes for a few supporting characters who must die, and the protagonist does not play more than one chapter from beginning to end. I don't even know who the protagonist is in your book. I can't remember the name of the protagonist after 10 chapters. Learn something better and don't always mess with the word count. You can put these plots in other books for up to three chapters. After I finished writing, I started looking for puzzle pieces. I knew what type to look for even with my eyes closed. I just went for graveyards and similar ones. It seemed that the writing was not bad. Why would such a very low-level mistake like an unbalanced role ratio happen to you? This kind of mistake only happens to pure novices and those who have high vision but low skill and want to imitate other people's group portraits. , You are writing a fic and it is a fic that is mysteriously resurrected. Logically speaking, it should not happen. The most toxic part should be the plot of licking Yang Jian and being a dog to the headquarters. I can't understand it. Author, please think about whether you want to get rid of your habit of adding scenes to insignificant supporting characters. Anyway, I can't stand it. Some people may like it.

Oh my God, you are already a ghost, and you still need others to help you revive you. You have always been awake.

Oh my God, I wrote this after reading the original work many times. Who is the protagonist? Is it a group portrait?

Is there no difference between a ghost with wisdom and a ghost without wisdom? Ghosts without wisdom follow their instincts, but they still behave like this when they are wise. Is there any difference between ghosts without wisdom?

I hope you don't want to lick Yang Jian and follow the protagonist's own path.

The protagonist does not look like a human being, nor does a ghost look like a ghost. If you say he looks like a human being, you can't suppress his instincts, but if you say he's a ghost, he has to rely on others to revive him!

It doesn't make sense whether it's human or not, whether it's a ghost or not.

It can be non-toxic and can be listened to. It's great that my hand can write like this.

Ghosts are not ghosts, humans are not humans. When you write about ghosts, just write ghosts well. If I don't understand you, you might as well set the protagonist as a ghost controller to make it more pleasing to the eye.

There is no heroine, it's so toxic that I really don't dare to do anything. You have created so many plots. You might as well just write more and feel more comfortable. You are doing nothing.