Tomb Robbery: the Last Guanshan Taibao

The plot is good, but why do you have to write so many emotional scenes? It's not coherent at all and feels very blunt. The girl falls in love with the hero for no reason. You can't just save her life and they will be deeply in love. Besides, a strong girl can't be so clear about the relationship between her son and daughter in this situation.

I really can't stand the emotional scene with the red girl. When I was 13 years old, my whole family was completely homeless, and I gained the trust of Chen Yulou in Changsheng Mountain. I am an old man in the world. But I only knew the protagonist for a few days, and after a few words, I was moved to tears🤐 The author probably doesn't know how to write emotional lines, so don't force it. It was quite good originally, but he just persuaded me to quit. I couldn't stand it anymore. Goodbye.

As soon as I entered the Pingshan Mountain, I was driven away by the poisonous insects inside and turned into dogs. The protagonist's halo was of no use. He slipped away.

Don't you know that when writing about time travellers, you don't know the plot, and when writing about mountain guardians, you don't know how to hide your identity? You just know how to pick up girls and show off your wealth, but you don't know?

When did Partridge Whistle go to the Tomb of King Xian? Are you making this up completely?

I can only say that I am a fool for taking fifty years of medicinal materials and promoting them to more than a hundred years in public.

I've read a lot of tomb-robbing novels, and to be honest, there are very few that are new. I hope this one won't be a surprise. Here's a suggestion: don't collect beautiful women as they are easy to cheat on. I hope this is a tomb robbing novel about men and women killing each other, rather than a tomb robbing stallion novel.

The logic of this novel is top-notch, the emotion and logic are rubbish. The woman falls in love with the protagonist inexplicably. It's not spring. All things are coming to life. Females and males exude mating hormones in the air. After reading more than a hundred chapters, three heroines appeared and fell in love with each other as soon as they looked at each other. They fell in love with each other more fiercely than a fur seal. Can you, the protagonist, fill the gap in the Huo family?

The protagonist is like an idiot. If he is not a time traveler, doesn't he understand the plot? Why do you want to enter Wengcheng? I really don't understand.

After reading only a few chapters, I felt that it was not going to work. Even before entering Pingshan Mountain, I encountered a female corpse in Yizhuang. They said that after this female corpse was lifted up, the protagonist and the others could not run away. I don't know what I'm writing about. I haven't entered Pingshan yet. A random small character can defeat the protagonist and the others. What else will we see next? What is the way to survive after entering Pingshan? Even if there is a halo of the protagonist, he will die.