Immortality

The writing is quite good, but Miss Zhao's part was uncomfortable to read. Promise me not to write similar plots in the future. I just read the book to be happy, but ended up feeling even more unhappy after reading it.

I have read almost a hundred chapters, and the more I read, the more I feel uncomfortable... There are more and more bugs, and there are more and more contradictions. The part where I was entangled with Miss Ni after entering the city was disgusting to watch. I kept saying that I didn't like Balabala, and I didn't see you really seriously rejecting others. If you don't want to, what can someone else and a woman really do to you? Not to mention the rich family behind you, do you have a small background in Longhu Mountain? The rambling writing is really disgusting... I said before that I actually know about the relationship between men and women, and then I said that I have no interest in it for the time being, and then I blushed and pretended to be innocent. Do you want to see how contradictory you are? I'm afraid you feel so happy when you say no, right? ... And the part about helping third brother go into the city to save people and kill people, I was so angry when I saw it, there is nothing wrong with claiming it and making it true. If you cooperate with others to enmity so big, you either help or you don't help. What are you doing in "The Holy Mother"? Everyone was killed by the third brother. I didn't kill any of them. All the bad things were done by him. He can't be blamed on me. I'm a good person, right? Have you forgotten that you have already killed people before you practiced martial arts?

The last book I read so comfortably was Jiang Ye, four or five years ago. This is the book I can still read after going through all kinds of cool and systematic texts (I didn't have enough).

It is obviously a martial arts novel, and everything about black and white and impermanence comes out, blood transforms, people turn into white tigers, animals turn into refined humans, spiritual energy opens the door to the void, spells come out, soaring into the clouds and mists, and people from a thousand years later traveled through time and came to the Tang Dynasty. It's all messy. The protagonist is alive to repay his kindness. In a country that is about to die, even if he can't save his life, he still works hard and can't get any favors. He is pedantic and wants to die. When should he live for himself and where is his goal? He is hypocritical and pretends to be selfless. If he doesn't think about himself, he has to think about his brothers, wives and children around him.

The author's biggest advantage is that his writing is fluent and his characters are vivid. His disadvantage is that he likes to preach and is serious. The whole book is 2.4 Million words, and the actual content is actually not even half. I was going to do it, but I started preaching again, hesitated, and finally ended it hastily, just like eating a bunch of Ollie. The most embarrassing thing is here. The description of force is unclear. The author really doesn't know how to write it. He can only explain it with magic weapons and tacit understanding. As people grow older, how can the Purple Qi masters have so many opportunities to earn money, especially the magic skill, which was dug out from the tomb? You can really think about it. There are so many people in the Tang Dynasty, and there are hundreds of thousands of followers of the Beggar Clan. They just didn't dig out a single one, so his master took them all. Is it reasonable? If there is a secret book waiting for you to dig up in the tomb, the same goes for martial arts. It is inexplicable. The most outrageous thing in the whole book is the description of fighting. I see some people compare him with Jin Yong. It is far from it. The author's description of fighting is no different from that of a three-year-old child. I will also learn from him. Don't be offended. If you have words, be long, and if you are not, be short. I have read all his books. Well, the more I write, the worse it gets. Of course, the money is getting more and more. I don't have any savings in terms of fighting. The description is vague and the latitude of the jump is large. There is a yin energy in the left hand and a yang energy in the right hand. Otherwise, it is a spiritual energy barrier. The description of the call of the blue dragon against the scales made me vomit. A mortal can touch it. I won't go into more details. Those who know better will know it and go to rest.

I didn't finish reading it, so I gave up halfway through, so I wrote it in the front. Without the portrayal before entering the officialdom, it really has a martial arts flavor, even though the character of a cowherd boy, an orphan, and a newcomer to the world is illogical. Despite its flaws, it is still a high-quality online article. Entering the imperial court and serving as an official seems disgusting and out of place, and I really don't know what the metaphor is for introducing a time traveler. Writing living Taoism into Confucianism, all officials are wise, I, Longhushan, am the most patriotic. The final point is about unethical love. I really don't understand the need to write about such a disgusting person. I really don't understand why readers like this kind of vulgar plot. Do I want to express my unruly feelings, or do I want to criticize the worldly perspective?

It's a mess, the first hundred chapters are okay, but in the later chapters I don't understand why the imperial court is there, there are all kinds of carelessness about human life, there are a lot of messy sects, and there are a lot of unreasonable things that I can't go into.

I saw the plot of Changsheng catching corrupt officials at Yushitai, collecting money and then returning it to the people. This logic really doesn't make sense. If you catch corrupt officials and spend money to get away, it is called using money to support the army, but in fact it is more poisonous to the people. Corrupt officials know that they can leave with money, and they will only become more greedy and continue to exploit the people. When they are unlucky and get caught next time, they will have money to continue spending money to eliminate disasters. Such an environment will only force more people to rebel, and more refugees will appear. Second, since the old system and the old court are obviously not suitable to continue to govern, and continuing to govern will only cause greater harm to the people, the novel also writes the protagonist as a conservative who is contrary to revolutionary ideas. Does it contain reactionary ideas?

My feeling after reading Chapter 101 is that it's pure shit. The author's writing style is not bad. It's like using a shit basin with a gold rim to trick people into it**. I would like to share my feelings below. First of all, let's talk about the portrayal of combat power. It's very, very bad. Before, I saw some peerless martial arts and thought it was martial arts, but it turned out that there was some spiritual power. Well, that's not bad. Later, when I described the skills I practiced, the twelve meridians, I thought it made sense. There is evidence, and the result is a cycle. I wrote this to show that the protagonist's understanding is very high. Let me ask you, this random Taoist book is the foundation of the foundation, but I can tolerate it, and it is not a big problem. Then there is the blue and red spiritual power. Sorry, I really didn't remember this nerve. Realm, anyway, is upgraded in a flash. The question is that the protagonist carefully considered before practicing and took the right path. Why are there so many practitioners who have never thought of it for generations? You just thought of upgrading Kuku, and then you just practice martial arts. It's pure shit. It's okay to be bad. What about ghost walking and tracing meridians, forget about the feasibility of the novel, just assume it is possible. The protagonist is a martial arts wizard, and then there are black and white, the intrusion of fairies, and the combat power is pure shit. If you want to innovate but don't pay attention, you might as well have a Qi-training and foundation-building elixir. Second, character creation. I have seen 101 chapters of this. In more than 100 chapters, including the protagonist, I can't find a flesh-and-blood character. Including the characters who appeared a lot in the early stage, they are all stereotypes, including the protagonist. This is not a human being. It is purely a set stereotype. , A master who has been trapped in love all his life, a tomb robber, a person with evil intentions, etc., They are all stereotyped anyway, and the author's stereotyped character creation reminds me of the feudalism within the feudalism of Zhifu Menghualu. The characterization is poor. She is a treacherous person, rich and has a conscience. I have read a lot of male channel novels. I never thought that I could see such a feudal thing. It is just like knowing whether a legitimate daughter is good or a concubine is vicious. This portrayal is equally vicious. Male channel Some novels portray women, and some are indeed a bit outrageous, but this book stereotypes women and related plots. How can I describe this feeling? It is that women are in conflict with each other and are secretly jealous. The protagonist does not refuse or respond. The portrayal is pure and honest, and he is both responsible and assertive. Third, in terms of plot, the crotch-pulling plot is actually quite passable in these aspects. To advance the plot, you have to risk your life. The only way to survive is because you are the protagonist. 4. Containing private goods. Containing private goods is very, very serious. Although the contained private goods are like chicken soup, it is not unbearable, but it is too abstract. Can you imagine the senior practitioners talking about chicken soup in a serious manner, especially when some of them are illiterate. All in all, pure shit

The writing style is vivid and sophisticated, the plot is fascinating, and the characters are lifelike with flesh and blood. It has the legacy of Jin Da Xia, which made me regain the feeling of reading novels many years ago. Praise!