Versatile Mage: the Evil Emperor Comes to Heaven

If the brother doesn't want to update, just say so. Why should he be so perfunctory with his sister? It seems that the sister is being sentimental. That's right. The brother is weak and needs more rest. The sister is urging the brother so much. It is the sister's fault. It hurts the brother's body. The sister is also very distressed. But no matter how sad the sister is, the brother must also update. Are you right?! Brother.

The most important issue is the heroine that everyone is particularly concerned about. This book is a harem novel. Because the setting of the protagonist does not allow for a single heroine, I apologize to book friends who want to read a single heroine~

Let me roughly summarize the poisonous points that I know exist in the book. Poison point 1: First of all, the author arranged for the protagonist to awaken independently, and then awakened three departments. It seemed that he awakened at the age of 14, two years faster than the average person, and he remained at the first level before the plot started. It is barely acceptable, as if it is a self-awakening, it is not suitable for practice. After all, the original book clearly mentioned that awakening early has only disadvantages. After all, Mu Ningxue's practice progress will not be fast if she awakens a few years in advance and has the resources. However, the author assumes that the protagonist is very rich and has been holding mortal-level stardust magic weapons for a long time. The protagonist's wealth is at least tens of millions, and then after a long time of practicing, he is still in the elementary level 2 of the system, and the cultivation of other law systems remains unchanged. The author has repeatedly emphasized that the protagonist has awakened three systems, so the progress will not be too fast. However, the original book clearly states that if you first practice the first system to the intermediate level, it will be easier to practice the other basic systems. This point has been criticized by most readers from the beginning. Of course, the author himself thinks there is nothing wrong with it. I always believe that the protagonist is not slow in cultivation. Regarding the addition of poison point 1, the author doesn't know why he set up a knife training method for the protagonist to strengthen his body. I don't know what the author wants to do to foreshadow the cold weapon sword technique. I only know that the original book clearly stated that the mage's physical body is comparable to that of a slave after reaching a high level. I don't know what sword skills the author needs to practice to be able to be comparable to a slave before reaching a high level. And I don't know what the use of cold weapons is. Even if you hold a knife that can break the emperor's defense, how big must the knife be to cause effective damage to the emperor? The size of the emperor can be comparable to a mountain range. Moreover, the author previously described that the protagonist will wield the knife ten thousand times for exercise, which takes two and a half hours per second. This time is really wasted. Regarding poison point 1, the author also arranged a blacksmithing technique for the protagonist, and at that time, the protagonist's strength was only the first level. The author himself said that forging requires spiritual fire and spiritual thunder. So if you forge magic tools at the elementary level, you will not directly practice anything, it is just a waste of materials, and the forged things will be nothing. You have no idea what the purpose of doing this work is. Once you reach the intermediate level, it will start to feel like breaking the rules of heaven. The author even wrote that training magic tools speeds up cultivation. I thought about using the money spent on materials to buy cultivation resources, but the cultivation speed is not faster. There is no way to refute it later in the author's comment area. He said that if you practice too fast, Master Xiayu will be in a situation like Master Xiayu, which lacks actual combat. But I wonder if you didn't let the protagonist do actual combat. Besides, Song Feiyao has fully cultivated all four elements. It's not like he can't be repaired in actual combat. How can he replenish the resources needed for the super level of full cultivation😘 To sum up: It is not recommended to fully self-awaken. It is enough to awaken the legal system normally during the college entrance examination, and then it will be almost as fast as Mo Fan. The whole awakening is early. After a few years, the legal system has been advanced from the first to the second year of junior high school? Purely looking for blame. Poison point 2: I don't know what the purpose of the Sharingan is. It is a small poison and has not a big impact, but the b-block of the Sharingan is really not enough. Naruto, the God of Otsutsuki on the background board, can attract all-powerful debates, and all other abilities are fw. Poisonous point 3: The first few dozen chapters gave off the feeling of a palace fight. Those who didn't know it thought they were written about women's videos. The key point was that Mo Fan was mentioned, and I couldn't catch my breath. The character design of Mo Fan has completely changed.

The pace is too slow and the protagonist has a pitifully low emotional intelligence. She is close to, hugs and sleeps with Ye Xinxia, ​​and she treats someone else as a sister. The disaster in Bo City has not yet come, and Mu Nu Jiao Ai Tutu has become Zhao Manyan's girlfriend. This is a harem story.

If you have anything you want to say, you can say it here. If you have any good ideas, you can discuss them. I will also refer to them seriously. Everyone, please speak!

Such a big boss has so many cultivation resources. If you don't arm yourself first, then you will have to cultivate yourself to become stronger. Mo Fan and yourself will also need to work hard to earn resources. I don't know what you wrote. Moreover, some of the writing confuses right and wrong, giving it a confused feeling. The one written by others is too confusing, which is also a big poison. Moreover, the holy city is full of top positions, and there are as many forbidden curses as dogs. You have only killed a few forbidden curses, and it seems that you have to gather the seven angels. The emperors like the ancient king are probably not as awesome as you.

The book I wrote is a relatively slow-burning type. I prefer daily life. I want to write better in details, but the plot will not be too long, and I hope it can save some regrets. If you don't like this kind of daily slow-heat type, then I really can't help it. It's okay if you don't want to continue reading. I just ask you to leave silently. There is no need to make the comment area a mess. Thank you everyone!

The writing is good, but the pace feels too slow.

There are over 200 articles, almost all of which are emotional dramas. I won't mention them. They are also written inexplicably and strangely. Some of them are not very coherent. I don't know what the author was thinking.

Some readers have sophisticated thinking and clear logic. Personally, I think it's better not to worry too much when reading novels, so...