Heaven's Order to Punish Evil

The plot is quite compact. I don't feel speechless after seeing it now. I will continue to write it in the same writing style. I will definitely keep up with it.

In my previous comment, I explained my guess that Shen Ling was the real prince, and it turned out to be true. The emperor was rebelled before, and before the protagonist arrived, Shen Ling was seriously injured. The emperor said, "Don't scare the father." Later, Shen Ling told everything about getting along with the fifth prince in the past, and he had to save Shen Ling even if he was injured. When I saw those chapters, I came to comment and expressed my guess. After waiting for so long, I finally updated it here. I hope the author will work hard and hope for the future. The plot is more exciting. It is one of the few books on the bookshelf. I think it is quite interesting to read Well... But I still hope that the update will be faster

The writing was fine at the beginning, but it got weird later on. I couldn't control the plot well, I couldn't distinguish between benevolence, righteousness, and morality. I couldn't describe the characters well. I didn't understand loyalty, filial piety, justice, justice, etc. A ninth-rate writer just made money by coding. Any liberal arts student can write it, just like Douyin. Anyone who comes has to jump twice. He can't bear the name of the author. If he doesn't know how to read, he will read the classics. How to control the plot and characters, how to write about human psychology and human feelings, hey! That's it, a shrimp with no achievements in life,

I know that the so-called detective is to find out the truth, but the law is nothing more than human relationships, and not everything requires the truth, just like the young man Bao Qingtiansan played by Deng Chao, the cross-dressing boss Xiao Shuang who wants revenge! Just like the leader in Chapter 68 of this book, what did he do wrong? He practiced martial arts that his four junior disciples willingly allowed him to absorb and help him achieve great feats in order to preserve the sect's inheritance. However, his future head disciple was gang-raped by two other disciples. So was it wrong for him to kill that disciple when he knew the truth? He didn't use magical skills to absorb other people's internal energy, so who did he kill? Isn't it normal for Elder Qi to be killed for coveting other people's magical powers? You want to kill people, but you don't allow them to resist? The protagonist pretends that someone has killed someone and needs to be judged. How can the protagonist be righteous? He is just killing people for the so-called system rewards, and he still pretends to uphold justice. It's disgusting! Reminds me of the scumbag Linghu Chong in Swordsman!

Some readers question the criteria for determining good and evil in the way of heaven. Well, this is a false proposition. The way of heaven does not exist, so we can only say that good and evil are determined by the human heart! Some people say that everyone in the world is evil, and it is true from the perspective of equality of all living beings. According to folklore, there is the Hall of Yama, where the merits and demerits of a life are judged. Then the standard for judging merits and demerits is probably to do evil intentionally or unintentionally, small evil or major evil, or the merits and demerits balance. Everyone has a steelyard in their mind. They are just making things up, purely for entertainment. Do not take them seriously!

I thought that the junior brother would be a decent person next to the protagonist and become a supporting role, but I didn't expect that he would become a villain. The author's plot is obviously full of surprises and scares. . The book is very interesting, and I also like some of the characters, such as Bai Shaoyu, and the junior brother. When this junior brother first appeared on the scene, he was immediately substituted on the spot. Well, the good guy turned out to be the villain, so there was nothing we could do about it. This book is not suitable for me. Before I leave, I'll give you five stars for the previous episode of Little Junior Brother. It's a pity that I slipped away. Just think that I have seen the ending of this book. It ends well.

I have been reading books for so many years, and I have also tried to write my own. Although they are neither popular nor popular, I still dare to pat my chest and express some opinions on novels. The most satisfying thing about this book is the rhythm. From the beginning, the plot has been compiled very compactly by the author, and the compact plot does not make people feel confused. I have to say that the author is indeed very capable. At least it's much better than the few novels I've read that are also about solving crimes in the martial arts world. For this, the author deserves a thumbs up. It's a pity... The author inevitably made some mistakes. Let's talk about the contrast first. After the protagonist takes office, there are still some changes in his identity, but the sense of satisfaction given to the readers can only be felt when he is addressed with respect when solving a case. Other times, it's a bit weak. Maybe many people don't understand what I say, so I'll give you a little explanation. How important is the contrast between before and after, and the sense of refreshment brought to readers after the change of status. Give me an example! In the previous article, I remember that the author has been describing that the protagonist, a talented scholar, is very famous, at least in Jiangzhou. But what about the specific performance? Apart from being thrown by one or two girls on the road, I only learned about it from the mouths of a few supporting actors: Oh... It turns out that the protagonist is actually a genius! After the protagonist returned to Jiangzhou, he inadvertently leaked an inscription about a humble room, the beginning of an article about Ai Lian, and another one that I can't remember clearly. Through the dialogue between Bai Feiyu and the supporting character, I saw that the poem Humble Room Inscription should have been circulated by some county magistrate. If I were the author, I would definitely strike while the iron is hot and use a chapter or half a chapter to describe the sensation caused by this poem after it was circulated. This is not for the sake of literature, but for the sake of establishing reality, deepening the influence and popularity of the protagonist, and thus bringing a wave of secret joy to readers. Otherwise, what is the use of having the identity of this talented man? After solving the case, we also use this method to build momentum for the protagonist. Why describe it like this? Of course it's for a better feeling of pleasure! Just like the way entertainment articles are written, if the protagonist releases a new song or does something, the author will immediately use a side description in one or two chapters, such as the sensation of fans, the shock of the media, etc., To create a wave of excitement. In this book, the author originally wrote that after the protagonist solves the case, he himself becomes famous, which shows that the author is not afraid of what will happen to the protagonist after he becomes famous. In this case, they are all famous anyway, so why doesn't the author take advantage of the situation to describe it, which can also give readers a deeper sense of satisfaction? The current description is famous and refreshing, but it always feels like it will give people a feeling that is neither salty nor bland. If it weren't for the author's pacing and the plot that attracted readers, I guess there would be a lot of people scolding it. Of course, atmosphere description and everything else are trivial matters. This is not important. The author can write whatever he wants. I am just giving an opinion. What really made me choose to give up books was because of women. I find that many novels nowadays are about girls dying. If the description of a female supporting character is not good, her poisonous skills are simply scary. I have to say that the protagonist, this girl, has indeed become a major poison. I didn't realize how cute she is, and I've seen her a lot so willfully that I had been resisting not looking at her, but after seeing the protagonist give her the big return pill and a small return pill that he drew, I really couldn't help it. Do you think the protagonist's skill is too high? Before he reached the peak of his career, he began to dislike things that could increase his power. Let me give an analogy, if the protagonist happens to meet a ruthless character who is more than ten years more powerful than him, is it better for him to take these two pills for himself, or for the protagonist's sister to take them and add another useless cannon fodder? It's not that the author is wrong to write this way, it's just that the timing is not right. The protagonist has just made a big splash, and he revealed that he has two skills that are no less powerful than Nether Sky Canopy. Do you think those martial arts people are all soft-footed shrimps? Do others have any ideas in mind? At this time, if you don't quickly increase your skills, why waste resources on cultivating a cannon fodder? After reading this, some people may think that I am talking nonsense, but according to the author's previous description, the Nether Ghost King has beaten the entire southern martial arts world to fear, and the protagonist has dealt with the murderer behind the scenes, and also revealed that he has two Kung Fu skills that are no less than Nether Sky Screen. Under normal logic, everyone would covet the protagonist, right? Maybe ordinary minor characters don't dare to do anything, but some ruthless characters, especially those who have some abilities, do you think they won't have some ideas? After all, the previous Netherworld Ghost King was so famous, and the Netherworld Canopy he used had such powerful kung fu, but he was restrained by the protagonist's kung fu. In addition, the protagonist has such high kung fu at such a young age, one can imagine how powerful the protagonist's kung fu is. And he himself said he has two magical skills! Damn it, isn't it forcing people to take risks? In this case, the protagonist carelessly used Da Huan Dan and Xiao Huan Dan to train his younger sister as cannon fodder. To be honest, I really can't bear to look at it! However, as far as this book is concerned, it is still a novel worth reading. I would also like to recommend that you take a look at it for yourself. Many places are indeed quite exciting. It's just that I have a bit of a picky taste and I really didn't like the protagonist's sister, so I gave up on it.

I have been struggling with free books every day recently. I don't know how I found this book. At first glance, it seemed like nothing new, but the more I read, the more I couldn't get enough of it (it's so delicious). So in the end, I was stingy and spent all my book coins and recharged a lot. I still have the feeling, even though it made me suffer from persecution paranoia (嘤嘤嘤), it also made me think about a lot of things, some of which are very important to me now, so thank you to the author. I hope the author can keep writing in this way. I will always support it, come on.

It was okay at the beginning, but then it went off topic and I couldn't even understand good and evil. The writing was okay but the plot was poorly written, good and evil! It is not determined by man, but by God. In fact, many times I feel that what I do is good, but for the same reason, others also feel that what they do is good, but when you see it, you think it is evil. In my opinion, the protagonist does more evil than good. For example, in the Jingyang Sect, in my opinion, doing these things for your own sect is considered a great good, but it is defined as evil. This is nothing. . . Samsung only gave me the front office part which was okay, but the more I wrote, the worse it got, so I gave up!

What a great name for the Order of Heaven to Punish Evil, but the content is written as Imperial Eagle Dog. Shouldn't such an awesome name establish its own power to punish the evil people in the world? How did he become a lackey of the people in power? It's so disgusting. Is it true that those with power can do whatever they want? You have to flatter yourself when writing a book. Since it is the way of heaven, you should not have your own thoughts. Jingyang people He Baiyang practiced evil skills and killed two people in order to protect themselves. It was considered heinous. And a gang boss in Suzhou City killed more than 300 people in one night just because he helped the protagonist. The protagonist pretended not to see it. It was so disgusting. It made me want to throw my phone.