Immortality Starts from the Paradise of Cave Heaven

The writing was really good when I was practicing Qi. At the beginning of the foundation building, it was like changing people. There were no details. When the foundation building reached the third level of the golden elixir I saw, a total of four kinds of elixirs appeared. Is this cultivating immortality? I learned a fire hand seal in total, and then I didn't know any of the golden elixirs. The plug-in in this article is just a pendant. I won't introduce the elixirs. How many years have they been and what are their effects? I don't recommend reading them when starting to build a foundation. There are no details.

The writing is too coincidental. When the author reads it, it gives the impression that the protagonist has been arranged. The protagonist obviously does not have to go. The protagonist has already cultivated three acres of land and has to find a job. It's better not to come sooner than later, but when the protagonist comes, something will happen.

The protagonist's joining the Spiritual Plant Shop is a failure. What is the brain circuit behind joining the Spiritual Plant Shop for spiritual seeds? You have spiritual stones but are you afraid that you can't buy them? Learn alchemy first, starting with the warrior's elixir (did the protagonist forget that the elixir he bought for 75 spiritual stones had an innate impact?). The conflict plot in this book is very blunt. The protagonist is always being troubled by people, and he will cause trouble for ridiculous "interests" for no reason. According to this level of "interests", he will fight desperately, so all the immortal cultivators in the city should be dead. Even though the protagonist's status is much lower than that of the protagonist, even if the protagonist has a relationship with the law enforcement team, he will be found in trouble. How can those casual cultivators survive? Must they all die?

I feel pretty good after reading the first few chapters, keep up the good work

I'm quite curious as to how the score of 6.9 Was calculated. I'll give it a low score first and then see.

I'm very annoyed by the unconventional and original writing about how to enter Taoism through martial arts. Isn't it good to be an ordinary person if you have spiritual roots? Especially since entering Taoism through martial arts is no different from cultivating immortals with ordinary spiritual roots, why do you have to go through all the twists and turns?

After reading Chapter 500, the protagonist's plug-in has been blocked. The protagonist sleeps every day and the clone cannot use the plug-in.

If you want to become an immortal, you must first practice martial arts. Doesn't this become martial arts? What kind of immortal is this?

To cultivate immortality, you can cultivate immortality. If you don't have spiritual roots, you can't cultivate immortality at all. How is it possible to enter the cultivation of immortality through martial arts? People with good talent have to practice martial arts to the innate state until they are fifty or sixty years old. Those with poor talent will not be able to practice innateness in their lifetime. How can they practice immortality when they are fifty or sixty years old? 😐😐😐😐😐😐😐

Come on, author, come on, come on, come on