Immortality Begins with Quanzhen

It is recommended that the author refer to the way the great immortal heroes write about women. It would be disgusting if they were brought around to other worlds to upgrade together. When the author writes about being with a woman, his writing style is not good. It is very fake and naive. I suggest you talk to a few more girlfriends. If you really get along with a woman for more than five years, you will no longer believe in what you want for the rest of your life.

The mortal world is okay, cultivating immortals is cultivating immortals, and cultivating Taoism is cultivating Taoism. Cultivation of martial arts and cultivation of immortality are one step with no fundamental meaning. Cultivation of Taoism is endless and has no upper limit. Swordsmanship is the most outstanding one among the monasteries. Cultivation is about the circulation of essence, energy and spirit, and the circulation of essence, energy and spirit above kendo. In cultivating immortals, Qi and Shen are at a high level, while Essence is not very high. They are two long and one short. When cultivating martial arts, the spirit is high and the qi is not too high. Cultivation is different. It can circulate the essence, energy and spirit. It is a little weak in the early stage and very strong in the later stage. But the sword Dao is different. It can make up for the shortcomings in the whole stage of Dao and make it very strong in the early stage.

After reading forty chapters, 80% of the comments on the book are scolding. Let me talk about the shortcomings of this book. It cannot write a Jianghu flavor, and it also insists on shaping the relationship and personality of the characters. Another shortcoming is that in the early stage, they emphasized that the protagonist is too incompetent, and then created a useless routine for the protagonist. To create opportunities, the most embarrassing part is the scene where the senior brother drinks and has an epiphany. Finally, there is the problem of the protagonist's character. The previous part has all kinds of foreshadowing that the protagonist has to be more self-disciplined and loves to study in order to practice martial arts. Then he goes up the mountain and works hard to shape the protagonist, and then the protagonist ignores the rules of the sect. There are so many inner dramas for the protagonist. Give 🌟🌟🌟I feel so high

The author almost wrote what my fantasy of martial arts should be like, the frivolity of young men in the martial arts world and their desire for the martial arts world, and the weariness of the cruelty of the martial arts world after experiencing it. The plot arrangement is appropriate and not blunt, the characters are carefully portrayed, and the writing is excellent. Summary: Food and grass!

Is there a female protagonist? Who is the author of the heroine?

The protagonist knows the plot in the Condor World, but not in the mortal world? Then why install a time traveler? . . Immediately speechless, a world change suddenly occurred in the world of the Condor Shooting. . . Really poisonous

To be honest, I was very annoyed when the protagonist was led by the nose. Doesn't the protagonist have no brains besides being a bitch? Doesn't the protagonist know how to create a wave of public opinion for Yang Kang? Always on passive defense. He won't take the initiative.

The more I write, the worse it becomes. The protagonist is not pure enough. Those pretentious sentences made me feel embarrassed. Waste of my money.

If you want to become a Taoist priest and seek immortality, you shouldn't have a harem. You should stick to it, especially if you want to have a relationship with the heroine of the original work.

The writing style of this book is not bad. In terms of plot, the plot in the main world of the Condor Plane is okay, but when it comes to the mortal world, it becomes disgusting. Even though Han Li is still a weakling, the protagonist is still kneeling and licking him in various ways. Every time the protagonist happened to encounter Han Li being hunted, he went up to help Han Li kill people, and gave half of the seized storage bags to Han Li, even though Han Li didn't kill anyone. The jade slips of the martial arts are also given to Han Li, but Han Li has never given anything to the protagonist except a calming pill. In Luanxinghaitianxingcheng, the protagonist went to rent a cave near Hanli Cave for retreat. After all the golden elixirs were perfected, Han Li broke through the golden elixir. Then Han's father was invited by Zi Ling to be a thug for Tian Lei Bamboo. The protagonist was also invited by Zi Ling, who used a wine gourd of only a magic weapon level, plus a few worthless spiritual wine recipes. With a few sword blows, Ji Yin Old Demon's clone and a dozen golden elixir hands were all dead, and he took Han's father back to the city. Later, when he was promoted to Yuanying, he took Father Han to the Xutian Palace again. This time, not only Zi Ling, but also Yuan Yao, the two little mothers, were kneeled and licked by the protagonist. They were protected in various ways and good things were given to them. There was no Yuanying style at all. Yuan Yao spoke in front of the protagonist and showed no respect at all. However, the protagonist was obedient and took them with him wherever he went. He also shared all the benefits. It was really poisonous and I didn't want to give it away. I'm still wearing this, not my soul. It's a good thing that Han Li doesn't have a son, otherwise I guess the author really wants to dress up as his son. He is more affectionate to Han's father and little mothers than his biological father and mother.