The Record of the Magician

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I have read almost ten chapters. Maybe I read too fast and I always miss or ignore a line of text and then the subsequent plot becomes incoherent. I just thought, why is this person doing this? What's the reason? What is his identity? I had so many questions that I had to go back and read it again. Maybe I am stupid, but I read one or two chapters of a chapter three times. The perspective changes too quickly, and the amount of information spreads too quickly. Often you haven't understood anything from the previous story. Then the perspective changes and the next protagonist comes on stage, and then the perspective changes again and you come to the other side. How to say it? Too rushed like A: I must not let him go! B: Humph, every good person in this world! I want the world to feel pain! C: Brother, please say goodbye. We have an organization and a family to accept you! B: I don't care, I'm going to kill you all! E: You are too weak, you can't just do this! B: Ahhhhh, why do you all have to stop me! C: Damn it, it's time for me to save people again! Come on, brothers, no matter how strong the opponent is, we must keep B! So A hits B, C saves B, B hits E, C saves B, and B hits A again. In a movie, a scene is shot for two seconds and then the scene changes to the next protagonist. This makes the characters feel like hourly workers, and they must be efficient and fast in everything they do! It is better to slow down the pace, explain more details, and focus more on the description of one person, so that the readers will feel more comfortable. The description of the supporting characters does not need to be detailed, as long as the information conveyed in a few fragments can match what the protagonist is going through. But this novel seems to have no protagonist.

I will be immersed in this book for a period of time and reorganize the plot.