There is Indeed Something Wrong with My Xiuxian Narration

It is obviously labeled as funny, but the actual situation is that except for the narration's idea, there is nothing interesting. It feels like it doesn't matter whether there is a protagonist or not. It even felt like the protagonist was like a virgin. A woman begged the protagonist to help her kill someone. She didn't ask for any reward before killing, but just said "you owe me a favor" afterwards. After reading it, I just wanted to say haha. If you can't grasp the character of the female character, don't write it. If you force it to be written, it will only make people feel disgusted. Am I reading the novel to see the truth? Who wants to see the truth? It's not impossible to write a slow-burning book, but the reality is that what you write is neither interesting nor refreshing at all. Do you expect others to spend money and time to read your book? What about dreaming?

Spending too much on female characters, by chapter 120 it feels like all progress is driven by female characters. The protagonist has no internal drive of his own. The protagonist is wandering between different female characters at the same time, without any determination to become stronger.

I originally wanted to give it 5 points, but it stopped working once I got to chapter 37. A powerful figure had to appear. I personally don't like this kind of plotting by the protagonist. Even if I am well-intentioned towards the protagonist, I still feel that the protagonist is a puppet.

I just started reading a few chapters, but there are already logical problems. There is only one head of a sect who is responsible for combat power. How can a senior brother and a junior brother join an outsider to rebel against a sect? Are there no such people as masters and uncles from the previous generation? Is it just passed down from one generation to the next? The current generation of the protagonist has characters like senior brothers, but the previous generation didn't have great uncles or great uncles? Not even the previous generation? Could it be that training talents only started in this generation?

After watching it for so long, why doesn't the protagonist still taste the fish? Isn't it possible?

The narration is more interesting than other books. I hope to maintain the sense of a villain with a lot of bad ideas, but I've been dreaming about it for many days. Don't be a eunuch.

Come on, great author! The characters are very well drawn

The protagonist hasn't tasted fishy food yet? Mrs. Mrs.

The writing style is a bit immature, novice writing, okay?

There are no obvious disadvantages except slow updates.