Absurd Fairy Tale: Please Advise Me on the Fourth Natural Disaster
About This Novel
After traveling through time, he still traveled into a bad world. As a life-style gamer, Du Moqing knew how bad this world really was. As a parallel world in the Middle Ages, the rules set by the new gods and the old gods collide with each other. Ordinary people who do anything to survive, like greedy hyenas, regard each other as prey. The wild cemetery is full of dark creatures and monsters. It is a forbidden place that normal creatures cannot enter. Plague is rampant and curses drive the undead. Light reigns high in the heavens, leaving only darkness on the earth, and divine power and royal power compete with each other on earth. The Holy See started a war in the name of God so that the countries that did not submit to God would understand the greatness of God. Du Moqing had no choice but to help a group of princes from various territories of crazy believers to embark on a traveling ceremony that represented glory and victory. They defeated various monsters to promote bravery and met their own princesses. Stories such as defeating the evil dragon and marrying the princess often happened in fairy tales. But the premise needs to be ignored. The aristocratic families who maintain bloodline inbreeding, give birth to a large number of deformed children, and a few talented handsome princes are also mentally ill.
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Official(6)Scraped 21d ago
The book is a good thing, and the ideas are okay, but the writing is so bad that it makes your brain hurt when you read it.
My writing really needs to improve. Not more than one-third of the words in this book are correct, including word choice, sentence construction, grammar, sentence segmentation, paragraphing, word choice, and punctuation. I can't understand a paragraph without reading it three or four times.
The writing is not bad
I think the writing is pretty good and I can read it. For a person like me
Complain about it
The article keeps introducing this and that, which is very disturbing to the reading experience.
So uncomfortable
I felt dizzy watching it. I quite like the setting you wrote, but the content is a bit draggy and makes me uncomfortable to watch.
Analyze and think at every turn
Almost every chapter is filled with analysis, thoughts, etc., Please put an end to this situation quickly and finish the business before talking about it. It's really uncomfortable to watch.
Too wordy, less inner drama
There is less inner drama for the protagonist, almost half of it is in each chapter, and more than half of it is more.
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Official(6)Scraped 21d ago
The book is a good thing, and the ideas are okay, but the writing is so bad that it makes your brain hurt when you read it.
My writing really needs to improve. Not more than one-third of the words in this book are correct, including word choice, sentence construction, grammar, sentence segmentation, paragraphing, word choice, and punctuation. I can't understand a paragraph without reading it three or four times.
The writing is not bad
I think the writing is pretty good and I can read it. For a person like me
Complain about it
The article keeps introducing this and that, which is very disturbing to the reading experience.
So uncomfortable
I felt dizzy watching it. I quite like the setting you wrote, but the content is a bit draggy and makes me uncomfortable to watch.
Analyze and think at every turn
Almost every chapter is filled with analysis, thoughts, etc., Please put an end to this situation quickly and finish the business before talking about it. It's really uncomfortable to watch.
Too wordy, less inner drama
There is less inner drama for the protagonist, almost half of it is in each chapter, and more than half of it is more.
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My new book, because the document was created in the trumpet account, so I distributed it directly using the trumpet account.
Fantasy, system flow Just by looking at the title of the book, you can already tell what genre it is, and the quality is decent.
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