
Rules Delta State: Starting at Lost Dam
by July Of Lies
About This Novel
"It's too late, those guys are coming" "I don't know if I can still live." "So, I can only record everything I know. Players who get this phone must remember and abide by the following rules." "1. Operators who have not evacuated must check whether their health is normal. If they are normal, please go to the administrative building." "2. Go find Said! He will protect you, and only he knows the real evacuation point!" "3. There are "dummy people" in the lost dam. You must kill them as soon as you encounter them!" "4. Once you encounter machine gunners in the wild, you must flee because they will not leave their posts without authorization." "5, The most important thing is--" Click! Before Doctor Feng finished speaking on the phone screen, the screen on the phone was stuck and there was noise. The next moment, he encountered a green human-shaped shadow and knocked him down. The screen turned dark, replaced by shrill screams. "Ahhhh--" As soon as he took out Dahong, the evacuation point suddenly disappeared, and his consciousness even traveled into the delta, looking at the golden 'mobile phone' taken out of the corpse. Ye Yan fell into silence. Damn it, this is not the Delta State he knows.
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The subject matter is still novel and the imagination is wide-ranging. But the writing is not strong enough, and there is no tense atmosphere to write about the rules and weird stories. The most important thing is that the author doesn't read it after he writes it. There are many sentences that are problematic.
So far (Chapter 37), the pacing has been controlled relatively well, and all settings can be seen from the plot (not directly explained). Let's talk about the setting here (currently Chapter 37) 1. Shadows are pseudo-people. They are the souls of players lost behind the dam and are affected by the rules of the game. They devour players by killing them and replace them. They are a group of evil ghosts who are tortured by loneliness and are left with only coldness and madness, but they are also affected by the strong emotional memories of the players they devoured. 2. When a player enters the game, his soul enters the game directly and inherits the body of the operator in the game. This can be seen from the plot in the last few chapters. (However, the specific setting depends on the author) 3. Equipment, operator skills and red items in the game can be brought out. Red items also have special skills and are bound. 4. You have to be forced to enter without giving a period of time. Of course, you can also prepare in advance (this setting is found in articles like this) Hmm... That's it for now. I won't go into more details. It's a waste of brain power, but I don't know when the official author will let him go. After all, the article mentions killing people with submachine guns (after all, we know everything about the situation in our country, and we must strictly investigate it, and this is not a fictional article "Anti-Gang Jing"). Okay, that's it. Let's see when the author updates it.
Please update it quickly, it's not enough.
The writing is quite good. I haven't felt this way for a long time. Whether it is the sense of substitution or the storyline, the seemingly old-fashioned urban plot is perfectly integrated into the article. What is vulgarity? There are many people who use it. It is vulgarity if it is used indiscriminately. The author's writing is not at all It's vulgar, very perfect. I've read rules before, but few of them are interesting. They are either boring or have the aura of the protagonist. This one is very good, and the subject matter is also very novel. I haven't seen anyone write it so far. Come on, work hard, write more, and stay in this trend.
Nice to watch, love to watch, love to watch
Come on update! Young man, if it breaks, I'll beat you carefully~
Since the official announcement is over, why don't we just stop the game or update the operators and add a dummy nemesis? All skills will be invincible against the dummy. Isn't there any problem with the game operator?
Is it possible to write the ending like this? When playing with the protagonist, Mai Mouse has actually turned into a pseudo-person. Then, the will of the player who sold the mouse originally suppressed the consciousness of the pseudo-person. By the finale, the will of the pseudo-human can no longer be suppressed. Then the protagonist had no choice but to kill Mai Mouse. Moreover, it was Mai Mouse's original will that made the protagonist let him shoot her, and it was the gun given by Mai Mouse. Finally, he made a confession.
Today, my hands tremble... Today, my heart aches... Why is this happening? I give everything, but I don't get the little love I want... Why do you, God, give me this kind of pain? What did I do wrong? What did I do wrong? Autumn. ...Autumn. ... I... I... I... I love you so much, why do you do this to me? Wow! ! Wow--! ! Autumn... Autumn... Croak! Hey! Wow! Ah! ... Hee, hee hee, hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee
Could this be resurrection? ! Still an epiphyllum...
Maybe I didn't read it carefully, but the writing is very good, but after I entered it, I behaved inexplicably, like a robot, with no emotions and no reaction.
So I'm curious about what Hegros will write next? The official top-level combat power is unlikely to be able to perform 6 sets per second by then. Then I will pray to Buddha and jump and pull small combos to connect you, and you will be confused.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(43)
The subject matter is still novel and the imagination is wide-ranging. But the writing is not strong enough, and there is no tense atmosphere to write about the rules and weird stories. The most important thing is that the author doesn't read it after he writes it. There are many sentences that are problematic.
So far (Chapter 37), the pacing has been controlled relatively well, and all settings can be seen from the plot (not directly explained). Let's talk about the setting here (currently Chapter 37) 1. Shadows are pseudo-people. They are the souls of players lost behind the dam and are affected by the rules of the game. They devour players by killing them and replace them. They are a group of evil ghosts who are tortured by loneliness and are left with only coldness and madness, but they are also affected by the strong emotional memories of the players they devoured. 2. When a player enters the game, his soul enters the game directly and inherits the body of the operator in the game. This can be seen from the plot in the last few chapters. (However, the specific setting depends on the author) 3. Equipment, operator skills and red items in the game can be brought out. Red items also have special skills and are bound. 4. You have to be forced to enter without giving a period of time. Of course, you can also prepare in advance (this setting is found in articles like this) Hmm... That's it for now. I won't go into more details. It's a waste of brain power, but I don't know when the official author will let him go. After all, the article mentions killing people with submachine guns (after all, we know everything about the situation in our country, and we must strictly investigate it, and this is not a fictional article "Anti-Gang Jing"). Okay, that's it. Let's see when the author updates it.
Please update it quickly, it's not enough.
The writing is quite good. I haven't felt this way for a long time. Whether it is the sense of substitution or the storyline, the seemingly old-fashioned urban plot is perfectly integrated into the article. What is vulgarity? There are many people who use it. It is vulgarity if it is used indiscriminately. The author's writing is not at all It's vulgar, very perfect. I've read rules before, but few of them are interesting. They are either boring or have the aura of the protagonist. This one is very good, and the subject matter is also very novel. I haven't seen anyone write it so far. Come on, work hard, write more, and stay in this trend.
Nice to watch, love to watch, love to watch
Come on update! Young man, if it breaks, I'll beat you carefully~
Since the official announcement is over, why don't we just stop the game or update the operators and add a dummy nemesis? All skills will be invincible against the dummy. Isn't there any problem with the game operator?
Is it possible to write the ending like this? When playing with the protagonist, Mai Mouse has actually turned into a pseudo-person. Then, the will of the player who sold the mouse originally suppressed the consciousness of the pseudo-person. By the finale, the will of the pseudo-human can no longer be suppressed. Then the protagonist had no choice but to kill Mai Mouse. Moreover, it was Mai Mouse's original will that made the protagonist let him shoot her, and it was the gun given by Mai Mouse. Finally, he made a confession.
Today, my hands tremble... Today, my heart aches... Why is this happening? I give everything, but I don't get the little love I want... Why do you, God, give me this kind of pain? What did I do wrong? What did I do wrong? Autumn. ...Autumn. ... I... I... I... I love you so much, why do you do this to me? Wow! ! Wow--! ! Autumn... Autumn... Croak! Hey! Wow! Ah! ... Hee, hee hee, hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee
Could this be resurrection? ! Still an epiphyllum...
Maybe I didn't read it carefully, but the writing is very good, but after I entered it, I behaved inexplicably, like a robot, with no emotions and no reaction.
So I'm curious about what Hegros will write next? The official top-level combat power is unlikely to be able to perform 6 sets per second by then. Then I will pray to Buddha and jump and pull small combos to connect you, and you will be confused.









