Douluo: Sacrifice Yourself to Become a God, I Become a Taoist
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[Dragon King Legend Fanfic] "I don't need a knife, I don't need my brain, I just use this body to have fun for you." Li Huowang is a mental patient in Blue Star. The specific disease cannot be explained medically, but sometimes he cannot distinguish between reality and illusion. And Li Huowang accidentally came to a novel he read in his previous life, Douluo Dalu. After being adopted by Tianfeng Douluo, at first, he thought he could return to a normal life, but he found that something seemed different? The blood-red sky in the hallucination, the cracked earth, the abandoned high-rise buildings, there was no Shrek Academy or Spirit Transferring Pagoda that he knew. There are only the Nestorian Academy, Zhengde Temple Federation, Anci'an Pagoda, the silver-haired woman who has been chasing him, and a leprous old man. Danyangzi said, "Baby! Master Tao will help you become an immortal." The silver-haired woman said, "Don't go back, it hurts!" Li Huowang said, "Get out of here, you all. You are all fake. You are fake." When Li Huowang came to the hallucinatory world of gods, he saw the truth of everything. "Hahaha, hahaha." "It's not that I'm crazy, it's this Douluo who's crazy. No, I'm crazy too, I'm sick too, hahaha, haha!" "Author, get out of here and let's talk about what it means to sit and forget the way. Don't worry, I won't lie to you. What I tell you is all the truth! Hahaha!"
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Natural Disaster of the Undead: That is the enemy's fear of me; Holy Dharma God of the Undead: That is the honorific title given to me by the gods; Natural Disaster of the Everlasting Sleep: That is the name I left on the continent; From grasping the sun and moon to picking stars, there is no one like me in the world, whether it is an ant or a god Ming, all will sleep here, - Long Sleeping Natural Disaster, Holy Law God of the Dead, Undead Natural Disaster, Electrolux: I was the son of light, I was the king of mortals, I disdained the gods, I sent down divine punishment on the world, I - I am the natural disaster
There is no need to follow the plot, it feels too stiff and forced to be the same. Moreover, if the protagonist you want to write is the same as Brother Huozi, then write it a little more crazy. You said before that he fights and harms himself, so write more battles and more details. Or sometimes you can't tell the truth from the lies in daily life. Smashing things and cutting people, what you wrote gave me the feeling that you wanted to make the protagonist crazy but not that crazy. What readers want to see is the protagonist going crazy, but you wrote too much about daily life and it failed to highlight the specialness of the protagonist. It gave me the feeling that a normal child would occasionally scream twice.
"Empty Dream", "Floating Life", "Stars", "Infinity" [Rising Light], "Moment", "Heavenly Wisdom", "Destruction", "Spiral" [Gold], "Precepts", "Salvation", "True Self"
Please note before reading that this book is a non-traditional novel written by a Ke family fan.
This book is a Cthulhu fan fiction. If you can't accept Cthulhu, please don't get involved. This fan fiction is non-traditional and cool. If it's because of the plot setting, you can openly criticize it, but if you haven't seen Cthulhu and you feel the plot is confusing, then please don't read it! Thanks
Give me more! ! ! ! Ahhhh? I want to see
If you want to read this book, you have to read Daogui, otherwise you must not be rich enough.
No, I was a little confused. Why did the protagonist and Gu Yue suddenly have a conflict? Can anyone who understands explain it to me?
What is written? I can't understand it. It's a mess.
I have always wanted to find a Cthulhu theme in the Douluo series. I like the Cthulhu series, but there are too few, so please come on, author.
I don't feel crazy, I think I can write it. The evil soul master killed Ikkaku's whole family, and when he was about to be killed, he had the Daqianlu, and he had this (immortal body), unlimited mental power, unable to recognize the reality, killing people everywhere, running the five elements for unlimited time, and finally killed half of the continent. The most powerful person is hunted down by people across the continent. He must be level 95, otherwise he cannot beat the protagonist. In the end, the protagonist was sealed for a few years, recognized himself, and killed his real body with the desire to go home, causing turmoil in the world. The abyss invaded and killed the male protagonist. In the end, his clone was killed. He found a chance to go home and entered the abyss.
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Official(19)Scraped 2d ago
Natural Disaster of the Undead: That is the enemy's fear of me; Holy Dharma God of the Undead: That is the honorific title given to me by the gods; Natural Disaster of the Everlasting Sleep: That is the name I left on the continent; From grasping the sun and moon to picking stars, there is no one like me in the world, whether it is an ant or a god Ming, all will sleep here, - Long Sleeping Natural Disaster, Holy Law God of the Dead, Undead Natural Disaster, Electrolux: I was the son of light, I was the king of mortals, I disdained the gods, I sent down divine punishment on the world, I - I am the natural disaster
There is no need to follow the plot, it feels too stiff and forced to be the same. Moreover, if the protagonist you want to write is the same as Brother Huozi, then write it a little more crazy. You said before that he fights and harms himself, so write more battles and more details. Or sometimes you can't tell the truth from the lies in daily life. Smashing things and cutting people, what you wrote gave me the feeling that you wanted to make the protagonist crazy but not that crazy. What readers want to see is the protagonist going crazy, but you wrote too much about daily life and it failed to highlight the specialness of the protagonist. It gave me the feeling that a normal child would occasionally scream twice.
"Empty Dream", "Floating Life", "Stars", "Infinity" [Rising Light], "Moment", "Heavenly Wisdom", "Destruction", "Spiral" [Gold], "Precepts", "Salvation", "True Self"
Please note before reading that this book is a non-traditional novel written by a Ke family fan.
This book is a Cthulhu fan fiction. If you can't accept Cthulhu, please don't get involved. This fan fiction is non-traditional and cool. If it's because of the plot setting, you can openly criticize it, but if you haven't seen Cthulhu and you feel the plot is confusing, then please don't read it! Thanks
Give me more! ! ! ! Ahhhh? I want to see
If you want to read this book, you have to read Daogui, otherwise you must not be rich enough.
No, I was a little confused. Why did the protagonist and Gu Yue suddenly have a conflict? Can anyone who understands explain it to me?
What is written? I can't understand it. It's a mess.
I have always wanted to find a Cthulhu theme in the Douluo series. I like the Cthulhu series, but there are too few, so please come on, author.
I don't feel crazy, I think I can write it. The evil soul master killed Ikkaku's whole family, and when he was about to be killed, he had the Daqianlu, and he had this (immortal body), unlimited mental power, unable to recognize the reality, killing people everywhere, running the five elements for unlimited time, and finally killed half of the continent. The most powerful person is hunted down by people across the continent. He must be level 95, otherwise he cannot beat the protagonist. In the end, the protagonist was sealed for a few years, recognized himself, and killed his real body with the desire to go home, causing turmoil in the world. The abyss invaded and killed the male protagonist. In the end, his clone was killed. He found a chance to go home and entered the abyss.
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