
First Level Cultivation
by Don't Worry About The Fried Dough Sticks
About This Novel
Please pay more attention to the new book "The Lord of Deception". ----------------------------------The ancient world of immortality is everlasting, with generations of heroes and heroes. You will sing and I will take the stage. It was at a time when a great era had been silent for a long time that a boy who traveled through time found out his evil hands in Huliang, which was once famous all over the world but has been abandoned for a long time. "Let me tell you, only the skills that come with the first-level trumpet are the most practical!" "For example, there is a skill called "picking up in the official name" and "touching the corpse in the nickname".
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This book is indeed very well written, I recommend it, it is worth reading. I can't remember the past, so let's talk about the last three years. I have read many fairy tale books in the past three years, but very few of them were well written. Counting on my fingers, there are about four books. This book must be among the top two. First of all, let me say that from a plot perspective, the plot has ups and downs and is very attractive. The plot is very good and there is not much repetition. In my impression, there are very few. The climax of the plot comes one after another. There are not too many ordinary periods, and it does not give people a feeling of being too far-fetched. The plot happens naturally and there are very few signs of forced twists and turns. First of all, although games are mentioned at the beginning of this book, this is not the case. It is still a pure fairy tale novel. But the structure is not very the same as the traditional one, it is a bit close to fantasy. But this proportion is not very large. The skill of touching corpses in this book is indeed very good. There haven't been any big mistakes so far, but I suggest that he'd better not make any mistakes until the end. It is best not to have a situation where there is no way to transcend. Why is the plot so novel? Of course, different people may feel differently. I said whether Sister Qin believed it or not mainly depends on whether I can predict what will happen next when I look at him. If there is only one choice, then it must be too cliche, but if there are multiple choices, that is certainly good. Of course, sometimes you can't guess, and that's naturally great. Each result is surprising and at the same time expected. He must first satisfy our beautiful expectations, and also satisfy emotion and reason. He should not have any contradictions or logical problems, but he should not appear too rigid and lose his emotions. There is no feeling that the plot is alive and not lifeless. It's not that it's completely impossible to predict, but we have to be too lazy to predict. We may not want to guess what will happen next, but rather give us a sense of impatience to know what the author will tell us. As for foreshadowing and digging holes, if the author can have a very good idea and a very profound civilization, then it is possible to infiltrate these into the plot very carefully without expressing them obviously. Of course, the most important thing is that the author of this book has a very big picture. His foreshadowing does not happen in just a few chapters, but also spans very long chapters. It would be best if this was anticipated from the beginning. Because there must be some explanation when digging the hole at the beginning, and when it is mentioned again later, it will not give people a feeling of being far-fetched and deliberately pulled out, at least it will be natural. If you have a sudden idea and want to use it to dig a hole, then you must also be prepared in terms of language, at least write it tactfully to minimize the occurrence of loopholes. If you want to make up for part of the plot, I suggest you don't need to explain it, because it can also be the protagonist's own thoughts, and it is impossible for us to write out every bit of the protagonist's thoughts. As for the plot, it doesn't mean that there can't be routines. Things like those about broken engagements, aphrodisiacs, thirty years in Hexi, being bullied and then holding back, etc. These are not unavoidable. It's just that you have to change your writing style when writing. What does that mean? Of course it won't work if every book is the same, and it will cause reading fatigue for readers. It even becomes a poisonous point. Of course, I don't recommend that these things appear. They are already so old, so it would be better to eliminate them. Fortunately, this book does not seem to be available. As for the protagonist, he should be pretty good, his character is well developed. Some of the characters are not disgusting, at least in line with my aesthetics. The protagonist is very smart and has a high level of intelligence. He rarely gets cheated, which I really like. I have no tolerance for revenge and have never been suppressed. I appreciate this very much. I am not the kind of masochist. Watching the protagonist being suppressed and running away every day, the resistance has no great effect. The main reason is that it does not make people happy after the reverse. Of course, this book is not a purely enjoyable novel, where the protagonist is in the air every second. The protagonist also has moments of stubbornness, but the author's extremely humorous writing style makes this process not offensive, and even makes people feel that it should be so. This is the best choice. When writing about the protagonist cheating or resisting, it would be too bad if it didn't make people feel excited and nervous. Fortunately, this book does not have this shortcoming. Why is the protagonist's mind said to be very high? He can see many traps and conspiracies. Thereby counterattacking quickly and catching the opponent off guard. This is very good. In many books, the plot or trap in the protagonist is always counterattacked after the result is achieved. There is almost no feeling before or during the process. It felt like I was being beaten before I fought back. The protagonist of this book is keenly observant, like Sherlock Holmes, who can detect many things that are wrong and point them out. It doesn't give people the impression that it mainly relies on the protagonist's aura and cheats. There are also many books where after an incident is over, the protagonist fails to deal with the aftermath well, resulting in endless troubles. Fortunately, this book can avoid this problem very well. I like this very much. If you want to beat people, beat them to death and never hold back. First of all, I would like to emphasize that the protagonist of this book should not be a holy mother bitch. At least I didn't find any obvious drumbeats, and I didn't leave my hand in many places where I shouldn't. The protagonist should be ruthless and decisive. As for whether it has been written or not, I don't know. There are many benefits to having a high-minded protagonist. The first one is that you can write less things so that the article will not be too readable. The second is that it can be written very thoroughly, can add more plots, and can be written very carefully, because these protagonists can all see it without explanation. The third one would be more enjoyable for me to watch, as long as it doesn't make me think the main character is an idiot. I read books from a God's perspective, so there must be things I can see that the protagonist cannot. But if the protagonist has a very high mind, then this problem can be avoided. At all times, I feel that he is a superior person, with a higher IQ and a cautious approach to things. The point is that I like it, that's enough. As for the more benefits, I won't go into details one by one. I haven't stopped reading this book since I read it. But it's not like I've been watching. When I read, I usually read two or three or three or four books at the same time. But I have only read this book during this period. About 2 million words so far. It took me about a week. It is a book that I have read more carefully. Why do you say this book is well written? I think a very important reason may be because there is no female protagonist. There are still a few appearing in the middle, but I feel that they are plausible. So far, I feel that there are some signs, but I am not completely sure. It should be considered as non-existent. It's better not to have a female protagonist. The ugly thing is that I have read so many books, and as long as there is a female protagonist with an IQ, I will be offline. Because women always have a lot of trouble, and the protagonist has to do everything, which makes people feel as if they are either out of hatred or busy for women. I read novels based on plot, not on picking up girls, or on how the protagonist does for women. Although this is a good hook and can lead to many plots, it cannot be abused. Especially when there are more women, there are more poisonous points. I believe that many people still like to have female protagonists, but I don't like it. I just want to be happy. I am a relatively rational person, a person who pays attention to logic, and I definitely don't like things that are too emotional. We always deal with emotions and reasons. If it is a plot, we can be reasonable. If there are any bad people, we can kill them first. If there are any difficult things, we can let go of them first. Those who cannot be defeated can run away first. When we have the strength, we can kill them. But if you have a heroine, you have to be affectionate, because nothing can happen to her and she always needs protection, so you can't do things out of reason, you have to take care of her more. The protagonist must have sacrificed something for this woman. For example, sometimes things that should not be done must be done. You have to take a lot of risk to get something or make something. But if you can't do things, it all depends on your preference. If you want to do it, do it. If you don't want to do it, don't do it. Live freely, live happily, and live freely. In life, this is called responsibility. This is the poisonous point in the novel. There are many, so I won't go into details one by one, but I'll just pick some key points. Forget it, let's talk about it in the next book review. The protagonist is alone, so it is best to be more free and open-minded in dealing with things. There's no need to do anything, he's always dragging his family with him, and he's a bunch of pig teammates. The protagonist is always being tricked by someone, and then he is busy wiping someone's butt or rescuing people. Due to space limitations, I will not explain it in depth. First of all, it is naturally very good so far, but I absolutely cannot guarantee that it will be the same in the future. I have seen many books that become useless in the middle and later stages. Of course I like this book very much, and I naturally don't want any problems. I can only hope that the author will work harder. What's very satisfying about this book is that I haven't cursed anyone yet. I used to read books, but I cursed them from beginning to end. 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It was good in the early stage, but it was too pretentious later on.
After leaving Huliang, I pretended to be cool all the way. I really disliked this kind of thing. The previous article was really good. Many book friends recommended this book. Later, I was very disappointed and abandoned it.
Jieyou Grocery Store reminds me of a song mentioned above, and this grocery store sells things, and what they sell are some low-end things. The semi-finished basic talismans and seals are considered good things in the store, which is really a bit shabby🙄🙄
Qin Yang has always clearly marked the price for relieving people's worries. This Jieyou Grocery Store has a grocery store in front of it. It is not much different from many small shops in Qinglin City. It is just for food and clothing. It is called Jieyou Grocery Store. This Jieyou Grocery Store helps people dispose of corpses.
It can be said to be fairy grass! ! !
Personally, I feel that when reading this book, you should not read the reviews, whether they are chapter reviews, paragraph reviews, or sentence reviews.
Died by poisoning.
It's fine in the front, but it's getting more and more outrageous in the back. I can't bear it anymore. What level of cultivation does the protagonist have? Damn, that's so fucking outrageous!
I originally thought it was God's work, but I didn't know it was a death wish.
The previous storyline was okay IQ Online. But to be honest, the more I see the problems later, the more I find faults with it. First, the dungeon was cleared too quickly and there was no smooth plot progression. Second, it doesn't look like a fairy tale at all, it's all amnesia and repetition, amnesia and repetition. Thirdly, I thought there would be a result without a heroine, but it disappeared not long after she appeared. Fourthly, the protagonist's cultivation level was obviously only in the three-dimensional realm. As a result, he single-handedly killed a powerful person at the peak of the Lingtai. I was shocked, this guy is a GM. Shuangwen didn't write it like this, so he stepped over two and interrupted me. I just want to say 66666
The protagonist's IQ is online, and the supporting character's IQ is online.
The protagonist's IQ is online, and the supporting character's IQ is online. A novel of conscience.
Logic is irrational
Immortality novels are all about killing people and grabbing treasures. If you think about it, you can understand that after the immortal cultivators kill people, they burn them directly. Why do they need to find someone to deal with them? Do you regard the cultivators as fools? Keeping the body to look for trouble? It didn't make sense at first, so I stopped watching.
so-so
It looks okay, but the protagonist is exploring secret realms every day. After exploring this and that, exploring each secret realm will lead to the next secret realm. When will this be done? Being in a secret place every day makes me tired of looking at it
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This book is indeed very well written, I recommend it, it is worth reading. I can't remember the past, so let's talk about the last three years. I have read many fairy tale books in the past three years, but very few of them were well written. Counting on my fingers, there are about four books. This book must be among the top two. First of all, let me say that from a plot perspective, the plot has ups and downs and is very attractive. The plot is very good and there is not much repetition. In my impression, there are very few. The climax of the plot comes one after another. There are not too many ordinary periods, and it does not give people a feeling of being too far-fetched. The plot happens naturally and there are very few signs of forced twists and turns. First of all, although games are mentioned at the beginning of this book, this is not the case. It is still a pure fairy tale novel. But the structure is not very the same as the traditional one, it is a bit close to fantasy. But this proportion is not very large. The skill of touching corpses in this book is indeed very good. There haven't been any big mistakes so far, but I suggest that he'd better not make any mistakes until the end. It is best not to have a situation where there is no way to transcend. Why is the plot so novel? Of course, different people may feel differently. I said whether Sister Qin believed it or not mainly depends on whether I can predict what will happen next when I look at him. If there is only one choice, then it must be too cliche, but if there are multiple choices, that is certainly good. Of course, sometimes you can't guess, and that's naturally great. Each result is surprising and at the same time expected. He must first satisfy our beautiful expectations, and also satisfy emotion and reason. He should not have any contradictions or logical problems, but he should not appear too rigid and lose his emotions. There is no feeling that the plot is alive and not lifeless. It's not that it's completely impossible to predict, but we have to be too lazy to predict. We may not want to guess what will happen next, but rather give us a sense of impatience to know what the author will tell us. As for foreshadowing and digging holes, if the author can have a very good idea and a very profound civilization, then it is possible to infiltrate these into the plot very carefully without expressing them obviously. Of course, the most important thing is that the author of this book has a very big picture. His foreshadowing does not happen in just a few chapters, but also spans very long chapters. It would be best if this was anticipated from the beginning. Because there must be some explanation when digging the hole at the beginning, and when it is mentioned again later, it will not give people a feeling of being far-fetched and deliberately pulled out, at least it will be natural. If you have a sudden idea and want to use it to dig a hole, then you must also be prepared in terms of language, at least write it tactfully to minimize the occurrence of loopholes. If you want to make up for part of the plot, I suggest you don't need to explain it, because it can also be the protagonist's own thoughts, and it is impossible for us to write out every bit of the protagonist's thoughts. As for the plot, it doesn't mean that there can't be routines. Things like those about broken engagements, aphrodisiacs, thirty years in Hexi, being bullied and then holding back, etc. These are not unavoidable. It's just that you have to change your writing style when writing. What does that mean? Of course it won't work if every book is the same, and it will cause reading fatigue for readers. It even becomes a poisonous point. Of course, I don't recommend that these things appear. They are already so old, so it would be better to eliminate them. Fortunately, this book does not seem to be available. As for the protagonist, he should be pretty good, his character is well developed. Some of the characters are not disgusting, at least in line with my aesthetics. The protagonist is very smart and has a high level of intelligence. He rarely gets cheated, which I really like. I have no tolerance for revenge and have never been suppressed. I appreciate this very much. I am not the kind of masochist. Watching the protagonist being suppressed and running away every day, the resistance has no great effect. The main reason is that it does not make people happy after the reverse. Of course, this book is not a purely enjoyable novel, where the protagonist is in the air every second. The protagonist also has moments of stubbornness, but the author's extremely humorous writing style makes this process not offensive, and even makes people feel that it should be so. This is the best choice. When writing about the protagonist cheating or resisting, it would be too bad if it didn't make people feel excited and nervous. Fortunately, this book does not have this shortcoming. Why is the protagonist's mind said to be very high? He can see many traps and conspiracies. Thereby counterattacking quickly and catching the opponent off guard. This is very good. In many books, the plot or trap in the protagonist is always counterattacked after the result is achieved. There is almost no feeling before or during the process. It felt like I was being beaten before I fought back. The protagonist of this book is keenly observant, like Sherlock Holmes, who can detect many things that are wrong and point them out. It doesn't give people the impression that it mainly relies on the protagonist's aura and cheats. There are also many books where after an incident is over, the protagonist fails to deal with the aftermath well, resulting in endless troubles. Fortunately, this book can avoid this problem very well. I like this very much. If you want to beat people, beat them to death and never hold back. First of all, I would like to emphasize that the protagonist of this book should not be a holy mother bitch. At least I didn't find any obvious drumbeats, and I didn't leave my hand in many places where I shouldn't. The protagonist should be ruthless and decisive. As for whether it has been written or not, I don't know. There are many benefits to having a high-minded protagonist. The first one is that you can write less things so that the article will not be too readable. The second is that it can be written very thoroughly, can add more plots, and can be written very carefully, because these protagonists can all see it without explanation. The third one would be more enjoyable for me to watch, as long as it doesn't make me think the main character is an idiot. I read books from a God's perspective, so there must be things I can see that the protagonist cannot. But if the protagonist has a very high mind, then this problem can be avoided. At all times, I feel that he is a superior person, with a higher IQ and a cautious approach to things. The point is that I like it, that's enough. As for the more benefits, I won't go into details one by one. I haven't stopped reading this book since I read it. But it's not like I've been watching. When I read, I usually read two or three or three or four books at the same time. But I have only read this book during this period. About 2 million words so far. It took me about a week. It is a book that I have read more carefully. Why do you say this book is well written? I think a very important reason may be because there is no female protagonist. There are still a few appearing in the middle, but I feel that they are plausible. So far, I feel that there are some signs, but I am not completely sure. It should be considered as non-existent. It's better not to have a female protagonist. The ugly thing is that I have read so many books, and as long as there is a female protagonist with an IQ, I will be offline. Because women always have a lot of trouble, and the protagonist has to do everything, which makes people feel as if they are either out of hatred or busy for women. I read novels based on plot, not on picking up girls, or on how the protagonist does for women. Although this is a good hook and can lead to many plots, it cannot be abused. Especially when there are more women, there are more poisonous points. I believe that many people still like to have female protagonists, but I don't like it. I just want to be happy. I am a relatively rational person, a person who pays attention to logic, and I definitely don't like things that are too emotional. We always deal with emotions and reasons. If it is a plot, we can be reasonable. If there are any bad people, we can kill them first. If there are any difficult things, we can let go of them first. Those who cannot be defeated can run away first. When we have the strength, we can kill them. But if you have a heroine, you have to be affectionate, because nothing can happen to her and she always needs protection, so you can't do things out of reason, you have to take care of her more. The protagonist must have sacrificed something for this woman. For example, sometimes things that should not be done must be done. You have to take a lot of risk to get something or make something. But if you can't do things, it all depends on your preference. If you want to do it, do it. If you don't want to do it, don't do it. Live freely, live happily, and live freely. In life, this is called responsibility. This is the poisonous point in the novel. There are many, so I won't go into details one by one, but I'll just pick some key points. Forget it, let's talk about it in the next book review. The protagonist is alone, so it is best to be more free and open-minded in dealing with things. There's no need to do anything, he's always dragging his family with him, and he's a bunch of pig teammates. The protagonist is always being tricked by someone, and then he is busy wiping someone's butt or rescuing people. Due to space limitations, I will not explain it in depth. First of all, it is naturally very good so far, but I absolutely cannot guarantee that it will be the same in the future. I have seen many books that become useless in the middle and later stages. Of course I like this book very much, and I naturally don't want any problems. I can only hope that the author will work harder. What's very satisfying about this book is that I haven't cursed anyone yet. I used to read books, but I cursed them from beginning to end. Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha
It was good in the early stage, but it was too pretentious later on.
After leaving Huliang, I pretended to be cool all the way. I really disliked this kind of thing. The previous article was really good. Many book friends recommended this book. Later, I was very disappointed and abandoned it.
Jieyou Grocery Store reminds me of a song mentioned above, and this grocery store sells things, and what they sell are some low-end things. The semi-finished basic talismans and seals are considered good things in the store, which is really a bit shabby🙄🙄
Qin Yang has always clearly marked the price for relieving people's worries. This Jieyou Grocery Store has a grocery store in front of it. It is not much different from many small shops in Qinglin City. It is just for food and clothing. It is called Jieyou Grocery Store. This Jieyou Grocery Store helps people dispose of corpses.
It can be said to be fairy grass! ! !
Personally, I feel that when reading this book, you should not read the reviews, whether they are chapter reviews, paragraph reviews, or sentence reviews.
Died by poisoning.
It's fine in the front, but it's getting more and more outrageous in the back. I can't bear it anymore. What level of cultivation does the protagonist have? Damn, that's so fucking outrageous!
I originally thought it was God's work, but I didn't know it was a death wish.
The previous storyline was okay IQ Online. But to be honest, the more I see the problems later, the more I find faults with it. First, the dungeon was cleared too quickly and there was no smooth plot progression. Second, it doesn't look like a fairy tale at all, it's all amnesia and repetition, amnesia and repetition. Thirdly, I thought there would be a result without a heroine, but it disappeared not long after she appeared. Fourthly, the protagonist's cultivation level was obviously only in the three-dimensional realm. As a result, he single-handedly killed a powerful person at the peak of the Lingtai. I was shocked, this guy is a GM. Shuangwen didn't write it like this, so he stepped over two and interrupted me. I just want to say 66666
The protagonist's IQ is online, and the supporting character's IQ is online.
The protagonist's IQ is online, and the supporting character's IQ is online. A novel of conscience.
Logic is irrational
Immortality novels are all about killing people and grabbing treasures. If you think about it, you can understand that after the immortal cultivators kill people, they burn them directly. Why do they need to find someone to deal with them? Do you regard the cultivators as fools? Keeping the body to look for trouble? It didn't make sense at first, so I stopped watching.
so-so
It looks okay, but the protagonist is exploring secret realms every day. After exploring this and that, exploring each secret realm will lead to the next secret realm. When will this be done? Being in a secret place every day makes me tired of looking at it
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The male protagonist is good at changing into different vests and is so cheap. It's rare to see a more interesting fairy tale novel ~ Shuhuangkei. Well, although the author drives faster, there doesn't seem to be any messy emotional drama.




It's a cool story about pretending to slap people in the face and upgrading it, constantly going beyond N levels to challenge the masters, and then all kinds of cheats. Finally, the author jumps out and blows the whistle, saying that the pig's feet win, and the villain is confused. Logically speaking, this kind of book is easy to bore readers, because it is difficult to make sense. But not this book. The biggest highlight of this book is that the author is very good at telling stories!




The protagonist is neither a good guy nor a bad guy. There are some laughs in it. It's not deliberately funny, but it makes people laugh unconsciously. It's quite interesting. Of course, there are also flaws or poisonous points. In some places, the protagonist's death is extraordinary. Without the protagonist's life, even ten thousand deaths are not enough. Of course, who makes him the protagonist? Read more than a hundred chapters, food and grass -. There are currently more than three hundred chapters, fat.




Rating: 9.0 The author is not afraid of youtiao and is a great storyteller. Reading this novel is like listening to a storytelling, which is very comfortable. The daily and funny ancient cultivation text has its own explanation of the innate beings and is relatively complete. The protagonist has a buff that makes everyone love him, and has a golden finger for touching corpses. Amitabha sends various brothers who are not dead to go on the road, and obtains a certain skill that makes the brothers sad. The writing is smooth, the whole text is refreshing, and there are no frustrations. The love line makes uncles and aunts anxious, and the progress is slow. It is clearer to choose from the middle stage. This is a novel that leaves the shadow of the characters in my heart even after reading it. I recommend everyone to read it.












