Cursed Return of Blue and Black Flash

Ahem, I don't need the bad reviews. I'll give a few four- and five-star positive reviews. Thank you all.

There is this problem in the book The Strongest Personality The first part was quite satisfactory, and could be regarded as an anime fan, but from the middle on, it basically had nothing to do with the original work, and all kinds of original character plots and world views were everywhere. I personally suggest that the author should not take advantage of the popularity and write such popular works that are unfinished whether it is a TV version or an original comic/novel. Firstly, there is the possibility of encountering a thunderstorm incident like that of 731 Academy, which dissuades readers, and it is also possible that one's own works will be cut in half due to being implicated; Secondly, the plot line of the original work is incomplete, and the author is not a deep fan who is accustomed to digging into the foreshadowing of the original work to make deductions. The later plot will inevitably be irrelevant and lead to dissuasion; The third reason is that as anime fan fiction, even comprehensive comics must be carried out within the framework of a moderately interpreted original work. If it is too original, the whole novel will be very nonsense, and there will be a subtle perception of "what the hell am I watching?" Even after watching the ending, I will not remember what I have read. The writing is okay, but the plot design really needs to be improved. It's obvious that the author is not the type who is used to designing battles of wits. Why not try to write more emotional lines? Finally, and most importantly, it is best for fanfics to have original female protagonists. Even writing multiple female protagonists is better than having an entire original character be the female protagonist in an anime fanfic. The author's writing skills are not that strong, and it is difficult for the original characters to be more plump and likable than the popular original female characters. An original female protagonist will be very divisive.

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The pace of the later stages is so fast. After the paid chapters, the plot is completely pushed forward, as if the storyteller under the overpass is telling the story. The characterization and emotional communication of the characters are too downplayed. Maybe the author is not good at this aspect of description? Because I bought all the paid chapters in advance, I read more than 170 chapters in one go. To be honest, I feel a little regretful now. The author's writing is quite good, at least the best among the few Spell Return fics I've seen. Unfortunately, there is no emotional exchange between the characters at all in the later period (it's not a good idea to mention it in one stroke. For example, can such a description as "we had a meal, we chatted a lot, and the relationship became closer" can also be considered an emotional exchange?) The dialogue between the characters has completely become an introduction to promote the plot. In this way, it feels a bit like an RPG game. Except for the protagonist, everyone else is an NPC.

It's a mess, it seems to be some kind of fanfic, I haven't read it, I can't read it!

It's just that the plot after it was released was completely stupid... I feel that there is a big difference in style between the front and back. The character in the front is okay, although it is a bit indecisive, but it is okay, but what will happen after it is put on the shelves? The character of the protagonist is already established, but once Good Guys is released, he will be replaced by another one, right?

The dining table culture in the author's novel is very heavy. First, he persuades you to drink, and then he waits for the protagonist to speak before using chopsticks. A vivid dining table culture (don't say that "waiting for the protagonist to speak" is etiquette. Dining with friends is not a meal with leaders and colleagues, nor is it the home of the protagonist's birthday. There is no need to do this at every meal)

I just want to ask, does Gojo Satoru have many scenes? I like the guy with the eyepatch

It's good-looking and very immersive. Don't ask me why I feel so immersive. Just ask, my name is Lin Ran.

I've always wondered why there are no heroic spirits if there are curse spirits. They are just a collection of people's emotions.